Not bad at all. This was great to listen to. Hopefully more canon stories about Michael doing missions with actually crew members. Keep it up, I am on for the ride.
Thanks again , love the stories. Need a black star click. An intire life story , the joining up the group getting together and life going on. Sentinal and black star , anyway. I would love to take up writing and stuff these should be published as short story sci fi. It would make a best seller. My own love would be a bit like star wars followed hans solos life story. But i would drag the scenes of soldiery for the black star crew to the fall and scattering of lowly troopers , clones making a life for them selves
There are days, days increasing in number of late, that I feel at any moment I will awaken in a brightly lit room surrounded by observers in lab coats. That, I think, is the only reasonable explanation for what surrounds me now, that which no longer passes for reality. I do hope there is Vanilla ice cream still, and Raspberries, and of course my sweet dog, Maggie, everything else I'll be glad to be rid of.
Captain Johnson screwed up from the very beginning, that entire away team should've been quarantined in some kinda modern day equivalent to a space dinghy for at least the first 40 hours upon returning. That would've prevented him from having to sacrifice half his crew. Moreover, the space dinghy should've been equipped to handle most common medical emergencies, having the ship's chief medical officer walk surviving members (preferably the away team's corpsman) of the away team through any medical procedure. Captain Johnson also messed again by trying to immediately leave the dark zone without quarantining for 40 days. I also marvel that the Sentinel exploration ship left space port without any real muscle or military might of its own. After all, they knew they were going somewhere where no one seemed to return at all, so why not bring some overwhelming firepower of their own to wait on the edge of the dark zone, serving as a quick reaction force for the Sentinel. When it comes to exploration, no matter the venue, this rule is inviolable: No one goes anywhere alone.
Way overthinking this is entertainment not nonfictional hypotheticals . I mean , who would insure such an endeavor let alone who would finance this to begin with ?
Not bad at all. This was great to listen to. Hopefully more canon stories about Michael doing missions with actually crew members. Keep it up, I am on for the ride.
All your stories are so well written. I am really enjoying them
@user-fr6cu1bx3i Glad you like them!
I became completely invested in this story. Well done!
That was one of your best stories
The fact that I hated the ending makes this really good writing. It wasn't bad, i just didn't see it coming 😂
Nice twist in this one!
@darlene-MamaD Thanks!
Jettison the infected crew members into space?
Man, that takes some serious cojones!!!
Brilliant
Good story, like the twist.
Thanks again , love the stories. Need a black star click. An intire life story , the joining up the group getting together and life going on. Sentinal and black star , anyway. I would love to take up writing and stuff these should be published as short story sci fi. It would make a best seller. My own love would be a bit like star wars followed hans solos life story. But i would drag the scenes of soldiery for the black star crew to the fall and scattering of lowly troopers , clones making a life for them selves
Thanks very much 👍
@albin2232 You're very welcome!
There are days, days increasing in number of late, that I feel at any moment I will awaken in a brightly lit room surrounded by observers in lab coats. That, I think, is the only reasonable explanation for what surrounds me now, that which no longer passes for reality. I do hope there is Vanilla ice cream still, and Raspberries, and of course my sweet dog, Maggie, everything else I'll be glad to be rid of.
WHY does the captain have to leave the ship and always go on these away missions? LOL
make the coby ashy maroo look like a cakewalk. wow, good story. I yelled what happened to the crew then it hit me. DAM
Captain Johnson screwed up from the very beginning, that entire away team should've been quarantined in some kinda modern day equivalent to a space dinghy for at least the first 40 hours upon returning. That would've prevented him from having to sacrifice half his crew. Moreover, the space dinghy should've been equipped to handle most common medical emergencies, having the ship's chief medical officer walk surviving members (preferably the away team's corpsman) of the away team through any medical procedure.
Captain Johnson also messed again by trying to immediately leave the dark zone without quarantining for 40 days.
I also marvel that the Sentinel exploration ship left space port without any real muscle or military might of its own. After all, they knew they were going somewhere where no one seemed to return at all, so why not bring some overwhelming firepower of their own to wait on the edge of the dark zone, serving as a quick reaction force for the Sentinel.
When it comes to exploration, no matter the venue, this rule is inviolable: No one goes anywhere alone.
Way overthinking this is entertainment not nonfictional hypotheticals .
I mean , who would insure such an endeavor let alone who would finance this to begin with ?
There was a lot of missing details on this story. Dragging her to where? When and why did the thing let her go if their guns passed through them?
I love your stories.. but if you say "Captain Michael Johnson" one more time......
@Jackiewicz256 I have switched to first person for now, so there will be definitely less of that.
@GalacticHorrors I didn't expect that, but still love the stories :). Keep it up.
@@GalacticHorrors I thought you were going to reply with "capt micheal Johnson" lol 😁.
Enjoyed the story 👍.
Missed opportunity on my part!@@craighaldane-gy3mk
I really like the creativity of the stories, but I wish there was a whole lot less focus on people’s feelings…
Who wrote the story?
Complete
Why after the 2nd attack they don't leave the dark zone?
@luisjavier6931
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Hey Luis ... Did Captains Archer, Kirk, Picard and Janeway "run" after only two attacks? NEVER!!! 🚀 (lol)
Bc there not gay