Hazbin Hotel | Sinner!Adam Animatic | Ballad of Jane Doe
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 17 มี.ค. 2024
- Song: • The Ballad of Jane Doe...
Slaps the roof of Adam - This bad boy can fit so many identity and self loathing issues
Tbh I dont even like Cannon Adam I just think its funny to put him through hell (lol) and back. Literally I just want to shove him through a wringer. I think conceptually he has a lot of potential, the first guy ever, lost, purposeless, and with no one to reprimand him in thousands of years. But those writers put in sooo much work to make him as unlikable as possible and by god it has worked! Still, I do kinda hope that he comes back next season as a demon even if it is pretty unlikely.
Also featuring some of my redesigns! That's why some of the characters look a little funky, hopefully they still look similar enough that you don't have trouble telling who they are anyway lol.
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I love Charlie's design. She looks like a ventriloquist's dummy. And the snake tail as a symbol of kinship with Lucifer. And I hope we see the development of this au
THAT'S CHARLIE?
@@Potato_stabbed yeah
SIN!ADAM IS SO WET AND PATHETIC WE LOVE HIM HERE
Wet cat vibes Fr
Pathetic little goat guy
FR
RAAAAAAAAAA WET CAT ENERGY
@@ThePancakeChandelurewhat does that mean
Honestly this is a good design for Adam. Since in Christian theology humans are depicted as sheep with the Lord as their shepherd and that rams are associated with their aggressive displays. He also shares similar personality traits with the biblical Lucifer and is often depicted as a goat demon
I love that he looks like a sheep. For the Lord was his shepherd!
0:38 Bro refused to do a toxic gossip train cover
HELP ME???
AHAHAHAHA-
real
Guitar Solo fuck no
Making my Mark here
Hell is forever,
Whether I like it or not
I was righteous to the letter
Why'd they leave me here to rot?
'Cause I was up in Heaven's light
Then I must still be holy, right?
I’ll give them a reason to let me float back up above!
All that time I had spent
Writing my word with the pen
Am I no longer sacred?
Is this what it’s like?
I was planning attacks, now I’m the one who does flee
How did it come to this?
Did I finally sin~?
Since it’s said and done~
I will find my own fun~
I will claw my way back to light,
NO MATTER MY TRIBULATIONS~!
BOWNOWNOWNOWNOW MISS MY GUITAR F-K YEAH!
DANANANANANANANANANANA~
🎶(imagine it gets quieter)
Hell is forever,
Whether I like it or not
Need a chance to behave better, ‘cause I’ve fallen a lot
And I’m gonna pave my way back
Home and maybe I’ll
Make sure that they pay for letting me fall~
So sorry, I just had to help finish it. When I find good lyrics, they inspire me to either make my own or help out with them. 😅
@Sparrowspear AND ITS AWSOME YOU DONT NEED TO BE ASHAMED DAMN IT LIKE JUST I COULD CHEW THIS IF IT WERE REALLLL AAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!
PLEASE I NEED THIS TO BE CANON AAAAA
is perfect
@@Sparrowspear
Sinner Adam is the GOAT.
I just realized what the joke was.
Nifty prob be looking at adam like: 👁️👁️
You mean: 👁️
@@TooManiMilosoh yeah 😭💀
@@TooManiMilosthat’s actually more horrifying
"FINALLY! *A BAD BOY* " _off-putting gremlin chuckle_
@@noooooooooooope "Fuck off! You LITERALLY KILLED ME B*"$#!!"
nifty just chuckles, not reacting at all like if it was something normal
Smile still as big as the usual... Or is it a little bigger now?
i like how, in the orginal song, it was a search for identity because jane didn't know who she was in the past. But in this version, its a search for identity because Adam knew who he was in the past so starkly, and now that thats been stripped away, he has no clue what his purpose is
LUTE ABSOLUTELY ATE⁉️
FRRR
EXACLTYYY
SHE ATE THE WHOLE PLATE AND LEFT NO CRUMBS
While I personally don’t think Adam will come back, 1:58 I gotta say Adam self loathing and being mentally tormented by the reflection what he saw himself as for roughly 10,000 years for what he’s now become is a fascinating concept. Also all the designs for the cast are phenomenal to boot.
1:20 For some reason seeing lute spin around with a nub of an arm got me way too much idk why
(It's night so i cant use audio but unpausing from a semi serious lute frame immediately to >:( was hilarious)
All i can immagin is this is adam having a break down
The comparison between charlie and Lucifer tho- *chefs kiss*
your Charlie design is so silly i love her
God is so rare to see Adam animatics
Haha I see you don’t know the trick yet
@@Adamsimp777 what trick?
@@starlight8540 on how to see more animatics about Adam
It’s really simple ;)
This was INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THAT ADAM HAS THE X ON HIS BACK WHERE HE DIED AND JUST THE WHOLE THING
It's also a great placement to indicate lost wings.
Did you know that alastor also has an "x" that was shown once or twice and it represents the shot that he got on his head that his life
@@nightmare_moon1983 Ya. That's why i thought it was a cool detail!
AUGHH THIS IS SO GOOD the way adam is a sheep/ram aka turning into prey?? delightful. and also i love charlies snake tail dsjfg
Also Lucifer and Charlie have some goat feature as well
0:56 i love how it's just like
"Heyyyyyy we killed you an undetermined amount of time ago but youre here now i guess!" (That banner is foul x')
Angel made it
With the first entrance of this animatic it’s immediate with how the lyrics and imagery work amazingly together, the grotesque on Hell’s streets completely foreign to Adam, the first winner (I believe) and with the next lines on a choir never complete displaying Lute display what their relationship (situationship better suited) is like, dependent on each other, as their identities utilize each other, Adam needing that validation that is immediate from Lute and the companionship, albeit subtle from Lute.
“Just John and me” presumably Lucifer?- due to the imagery of Eden later on with him and the apple, somewhat a reflection on Adam currently, both of them once being God’s favorite, now in a hell of their own making. Not to mention his further rant about being the first man Adam solidifies this point, that he is God’s favorite, that he shouldn’t be in hell, because of the fact that Adam’s ego is fed throughout heaven with him being the first man.
Furthermore the destroying of the guitar reminiscent of the rock music and vocals that he mimics entirely in contrast to the type of guitar (acoustic or somethin). This could also be seen as symbolism, that the guitar represented Charlie extending and olive branch, a form of consolation, and Adam wasn’t jested to this, he was never seen at fault in Heaven and thus immediately rejects the olive branch, destroying it due to ego and anguish. In its source material, Jane Doe refrains from using Gods name in vain because it is sin yet this also applies to Adam in this case as he asks why, why could he be left at this fate, with the most respect he’s given to anybody, following God’s rules as he asks for explanation.
“Why be left with no family and no friends” in referent to his relation to women. In Eden he had two wives, with Lilith being his equal (Mythos that they were created from the dusts of the earth), she had the same arrogant and egotistical attitude, thus leading her to leave him. And with Eve being made from his rib (making her ‘subservient’) being the one to lead him into sinning, which likely made him resent her later, hence why they aren’t seen together, let alone around each other in Heaven. And then his army of exorcists, created in his image, though a distant relationship from the one that he craves, and then his relationship with Lute. Lute is what people would describe as a right hand man to Adam and thus leads to the nonchalant attitude with her, and then leading into a more comfortable relationship, hence why he is so particularly anguished at the loss of her, because he can never keep a stable romantic relationship with the women he pursues.
“Time eats all his children in the end” Displaying the shadowed faces of Angel and Husk is a particularly interesting touch (my favorite !!! ) that demonstrates how different he perceives himself from them, people, who are foreign to him, that utterly despise him, which isn’t behavior he’s used to back in Heaven. “Time eats all his children in the end” this shows us another parallel between Adam and now the sinners, with the original sin coming from Adam, it’s in the nature of humans to sin, in the end, humans will go back to sin, and so it makes entire sense for the first man ever to end up in Hell, not to mention this could be taken as another parallel of him and Lucifer, that it is simply a matter of time till they are no longer in God’s favor, in the end they fell as soon as they started straying from obedience, Lucifer’s ideas and Adam’s God-complex.
Lute’s operatic-like singing serves in direct contrast to Adam’s rocker vibe, similar to the gospels and hymns in church, a possible indicator that she is Heaven-born, not to mention that she strikes out into another genre from Adam due to his death. The longer notes in contrast to Adam’s directness both in vocals and lyrics a clear demonstration on their differences in how they operate, Adam is brash and rushes into things head first due to ego, but Lute’s long notes display how she is calculated, playing a ‘long game’ to get the best outcome. (Her little dance alone with her wings flaring is *amazing*) Her solo waltz a demonstration on how intricate she is, both in singing and in something that is shown to be an act that she shares with Adam, also a demonstration of anguish, a choreography never to be danced to again due to her losing her partner and her arm. Her sisters’ (presumably sisters) reaction to Adam’s death is almost seen as nonchalant, that they had no particular connection to him unlike Lute due to their disinterested “does anyone care”. Lute’s “Another song that no one knows” as she looks over a mural of the Original Sin (not sure if it’s a *glass mural* like in churches but it’s whatever :) ) seems as if she’s singing Adam’s praises once more, a song she never forgets, yet also direct that Heaven seems to forget who he is, the first man, with her sisters complete disregard to his death.
(*that transition is SICK* and also shows that Adam, the uncooperative, bothered to learn some fanciful dance just for Lute and remembers the dance fondly)
As the rest of the hotel seems to mock him, it almost looms to send him into a spiral, obvious to Charlie. (Once again because of his *ego*, being completely invalidated is a foreign concept to him) Adam lashes out at Charlie because she is the easiest outlet to be used, his anger often used into docile victims. Possibly because she is his first friendly face in Hell and also a woman is henceforth why he appears so hostile, the fact that Charlie is Lilith’s spawn with that same cunning not to mention his issues with women, Adam attempts to drive her off as to have no further issues such as with Lilith and Eve, but Charlie’s persistence keeps her.
(*love how direct it is with ’self loathing metaphor’*) Adam’s angel form is presumably the same as when he first entered Heaven, due to his lack of mask and clothing like his time in Eden, another parallel between his first appearance in Heaven and Hell, also possibly due to the fact that Adam was pure-em upon his first entrance to Heaven and now he sees himself as sinner scum because he resides in Hell. Furthermore with the lyrics, Angel!Adam separates himself from Sinner!Adam, mockingly, because Adam sees it as complete shock that he is here, that this evil, this sinner body is completely different from who he is.
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Analysis aside, this animatic and its characters designs are so- *ATZCFYCSX4YGKUYFH*/pos
Charlie having a snake tail?- *awesome*
Alastor looking low key cunty?- *great*
I never actually expected a Sinner Adam animatic to me done to The Ballad Jane Doe, but it all works so beautifully to form a story cohesive twitch the canon show as well-
That analysis is just, "chefs kiss". You need more 👍👍👍
I actually have something to add with the "Time eats all his children in the end"
I'm positive Adam's refered to and referes to himself multiple as "The First Man" but I I'm not sure if he ever explicitly states that every single human in existence is his direct descendant
So they might've dropped that element of the myth because of implied incest but if they didn't that would make Husk and Angel "his children"
So the words "Time eats all his children in the end" gain a couple of extras meanings.
It could mean that time, aging, death, and decay: physical, mental and morale "consume" all of Adam's children, bringing them all to hell "in the end"
Or it could be that time eroded any connection or kinship him and his children might've felt for eachother. Time ate all his children, so now all he's left with is a bunch of strangers.
Or we could assume "Time" is refering to Adam. then It could be a reference to the exorcisms; where adam kills his children, or "eats" them in a metaphorical sense, for his own amusement.
Or, it could be an entirely ironic statement, since we're currently watching Angel and Husk pick on Adam, so we're watching his children "eat him".
Creeps such as Val: owns souls as slaves
Based Christian John Brown: (loads semi auto) *"FACE THE LORD'S JUDGEMENT SLAVER!!!"*
John Brown willingly going to Hell because he would be bored in Heaven!
Adam be hitting those high notes beautifully
You know, this is the only design of Adam I’d simp for
Christ i really hope adam is a sinner in season 2 it would be absolutely amazing. even funnier bc then one of alex brightman's roles goes to heaven and the other goes to hell and thats just really silly
ACTUALLY BEGGING YOU TO MAKE MORE OF THIS PATHETIC LITTLE MAN 💔💔
I love seeing all the fan interpretations of Sinner Adam! I reeeeally hope he comes back as a sinner in season 2. It would put Charlie's ideals to the test. Does she show him compassion, or does she not? How can she forgive someone who hurt her and her friends so badly? Can he be redeemed? If so, should she take on facilitating said redemption or not? No easy answers there, and it would be a great character building moment to see her grapple with this inner conflict.
I like this goat-based design! Something about it just seems to fit him.
IM OBSESSED WITH THE WAY YOU DRAW CHARLIE AND THE ENTIRE ARTSTYLE RHIS ALSO SEEMS SO ACCURATE CONSIDERING WHAT HE BELIEVED UP UNTIL HE DIED X2
Never would I thought that I'd feel any kind of pity for Adam in any kind of way. Until I saw this video that gut-punched me in the emotions and proceeded to run away after picking my metaphorical pockets of emotions, leaving only pity and sadness.
Ride the cyclone spotted
OMG he has a scar where his rib was taken out! 2:05
I love that little detail
HES LIKE A GOAT RAM THING AND ITS ADORABLE AND I LOVE HIM 🥰🥰
Shit this art style is so good that this makes me wish this design for Adam would be canon in season 2
god I love sinner!Adam aus so fucking much and this just the most perfect angst content ever for it
ballad of jane doe AND hazbin hotel??? stop reading my mind and making animatics of things I like! (jk, I love seeing these!)
Man, sinner Adam is so Canon brah
Honestly itd be so cool if in s2 Adam went to hell and in his time there realised his mistakes and what hed done
It would be "proof in the pudding" of the Hotel's ability to redeem souls, in addition to being heartwarming.
0:49 shocked Charlie
Oh my holy shit, ate, no crumbs, she is an icon, she is the moment
may i just mention that this is my favourite design of Adam as a sinner? i already knew that at the ninth second
I love Adam's and Charlie's design you drew.
Charlie is the wolf and Adam is the sheep.
my dude, as a person who has read an embarrassing amount of sinner!adam fics this just hits my perfect niche. I love it and your art is amazing!!!
As someone who's searching high and low for Sinner Adam fanfics, where can I find these? :D
@toddhughes2859 I will admit, I have fallen down the Adamsapple (Adam x Lucifer) pipeline, and like 99% of those fics are sinner Adam pfft.
I have found another like me! Tbh at first I was reading sinner!adam and adamsapple fics ironically but bro... I don't think it's ironic anymore...
Any reccomendations? İ only read the most popular ones@@gracec8c
@@toddhughes2859There’s one called “Hope in Hell” and it’s currently my favorite sinner Adam fic.
😂 Welcome Adam to the home for infinite losers 😮
0:56 i dont know why i like that part so much
thank you very much for the little ‘self loathing metaphor’ note for all us no-media-literacy girlies
LMAO
I needed it 💀
First, I LOVE THEIR DESIGNS
Second, I love how they all are just bullying adam
Quickly scrambling in just for the ballad
THIS ANIMATIC IS SO YUMMY SCRUMMY IN MY TUMMY!!
REALL
oh MAN i love when y'all put that guy in SITUATIONS!!! i am obsessed with this!!
Amazing character design plus Adam and Lute angst!!! I love this whole animatic so much!
Dickmaster became the devil
BARELY ANYONE US TALKING ABOUT HOW SLAY LUTE IS WTH-
Ik like damn girl missed her true calling 😭
This is so well choreographed the way ever frame is drawn just makes sense it’s so well made omg
So cool!!! I wish Adam will really return
I can imagine when the next extermination happens that Lute sees Adam and thinks hes a normal sinner like everyone else and tries to kill him and he starts swearing ALOT and then Lute recognizes his voice and decides to leave him alone, (she isn't sure if its actually Adam or if its just someone who sounds like him)
Omg, I love it! I hope we get to see something like this in the show! The Adam sympathy in the fandom would skyrocket!
ABSOLUTELY LOVE your take on the character designs!!! And Adam's sinner form looks so unique, can't say I've seen anything similar before, god, i adore your art so much!
Bro this is so good holy fuck
Also CHARLIE'S SNAKE TAIL I LOVE IT
I LOVE THE LITTLE DANCE WITH LUTE I LITERALLY LOVE THESE TWO SILLIES THEY SHOUKD DATTETETETSTggsjsgajdhs
THIS SONG IS SO PERFECT, NOT ONLY IN A MEANING WAY. OR THE LYRICS, IT ALSO HAS LITTLE HINTS. AND THE "now that all is said and done", DAMN, IF THIS WAS IN THE SHOW, PERFECT TOUCH. PERFECT SONG CHOICE!1!1!
THIS IS SO AMAZINNGGG THE EXPRESSIONS THE PASSION THE EMOTION, YOU CAPTURED ALL THE CHARACTERS PERFECTLY
I love this a lot!
RIDE THE CYCLONEE
OMG, THE DETAILS AND DESIGNS????
I'm obsessed with this, gotta love Adam having a mental breakdown
LOVING THE ADAM ANGST HOLDUP
I love the way you drew Charlie (I think) the snake for a tail is such a nice touch
This was the most incredible guitar spear animation I’ve ever seen. Actually, the best animation I’ve ever seen of Hazbin Hotel!!!!
Im totally. Niffty when Angel dust is holding her >:))
I just so happen to be obsessing over both of these right now AND YOU PUT THEM TOGETHER?! THANK YOUUUUUUUU
I honestly hope that Adam does get reincarnated as a sinner in season 2 because I honestly would find his Dynamic of being reluctantly at the hotel just trying his best even though he clearly is just kind of annoyed and is kind of suffering of the hotel being his own personal hell because he's basically just kind of forced to pretend to be nice and I'm like that dynamic in the shower just be so funny and I honestly hope we can see you next season 2 and Adam is the only new character that I would ever want in the main cast because there's already seven of them so anymore is just stealing away our precious main characters precious screen time that has already been given to uses idiots like Carmella zastyol and so many others
"Mhm yeah I agree with all of this- WAIT DID YOU JUST DISS MOMMY- (Carmella)" tho I kinda get where you're coming from
Yes yes thats should happen pls Vivzi yes-
About the hotel thing. Welcome to Hell Adam! it’s meant to suck a lot but you can stay here for as long as you like.
@@I_Ate_ChocolateI don't hate Carmela the character like I think she has a whole lot of potential to be a good character it's just like I don't like how she basically wasted our time we could have had an episode about how veggie doesn't trust people and why but instead we wasted a huge big part of that on carmilla and her daughters who I don't give a crap about because she was just tacked on and she was a screen time waster which just made me kind of angry and I don't have a lot of hate for characters like or Mimsy or Carmela because I feel like they can be good characters it's just that the time that we could have been using I don't know on developing our main characters was wasted on characters that we just really can't feel for because we just met them I can't cry over carmilla's song about wanting to protect your daughters because I don't know them I don't know who they are I don't know why she cares so much I can't empathize with her character because she's not built up because we literally just met her in the same episode
@@a.t.trujillo9970 Hmmm, that is a good point. I mean even now it's hard to care about her kids. I wish we got more from people like Niffty.
MY FAVORITE SONG OF ALL TIME + MY FAVORITE FANDOM + BEAUTIFUL ANIMATICS AND DYNAMICS?? MASTERPIECE.
I REALLY LOVE THIS IDEA FOR AN AU HOLY SH#T
There is lots of fanfics similar to this. Hope in Hell is one
Charlie giving Adam an acoustic guitar 😂
This is so good!
All of your redesigns are absolutely gorgeous! I loved the song you chose for this as well as the visuals!
ive seen ur redesigns around im very fond of them omg!!!!!! honestly i'm not super fond of adam in canon but things like this au show how much potentional he has, i loveee ur sinner adam design so much
Hes so sckrunkcqly
TWO OF MY FAVORITE THINGS IN ONE OMGGG
What makes this actually great is keying the movements and changes to the music beats. Also, I love the ending shot on Vaggie, sizing things up. Her story is so cool, and it parallels well with Adam. It’s also in fitting for her to not be the focus of the song, or even interacting with the focus at all, yet still have such a powerful silent closing shot.
i hope nifty ripped out hois voicebox adn adam's apple so can use it on a fizz bot.
Digitigrade Adam is pretty interesting
RIDE THE CYCLONE AND HAZBIN HOTEL?? THE CROSSOVER I NEVER KNEW I NEEDED HDRUDJ FR D
Yo, whoever made this, tysm, you actually got me into Ride The Cyclone. It is my current hyperfixation, and gives me brainrot :3
WAIT, WE WENT TROUGH THE SAME (i love Noel and Jane sm)
@@juanafigueroa3881 REAL
I’d love to see Lite start working with Adam, if he’s still alive, to overthrow Hell in the background.
Fun fact: You have watched this more than once.
Fun fact #2: I have genuinely watched this over 15 times.
OMG I LUV HAZBIN HOTEL AND RTC SO MUCH AND THIS
people dont understand how feral I would be if this happened LMAO anyways this animatic was amazing. Great work
Shut up and take my subscription, this was fantastic!
I LOVE THIS WHEN IS IT GONNA BE FULLY DONE I'M OBSESSED
Oh this was truly a masterpiece
THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVEER WHAT
AND IM ASKING WHYYY LORD IS THIS THE WAY I DIE LORD?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS WAS SO GOOD AKRJFKWNDKWKDJ GUITARSPEAR ANGST SINNER ADAM ALL UR REDESIGNS ARE SO CHEWABLE(/pos) I JUST- RAAAAAAAAH LOVE THIS SO MUCH
RIDE THE CYCLONE SERIOUSLY!? Just have in mind, actress what sang it was singing it in life beating most high notes you can imagine while being spinned in the air. I love Jane she’s such a cutie.
BROO your designs for all the characters are soo cool, especially the ribs on Alastor
OH MY GOD THIS IS BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS AAAAAHAJSJJS
I LOVE THIS AU!! Especially when thinking about how he and the rest of the cast would interact. The ones I’d specifically be interested in are Charlie, Alastor, Niffty, Vaggie, and Cherri Bomb.
Honestly this is so enjoyable I keep coming back to it as I rapidly ragdoll down the fan content pile for Adam as a sinner.
Amazing art ❤
STIP WHY DUD J HAVE TO MISS IT WHEN JT CAME OUT..BUT I LOVE THIS OMGOMGOMKGMOGMGOMOGMGKMG
god, this was incredible
i really love your art and every frame of this animatic, looks really really good
Pentious: Oh, and one more thing. *looms over Adam with his angelic hood flared* *If you try to hurt my friends again, I will show you what Hell REALLY issssss... Are we clear?*
Adam: *shaking* Y-yeah...
Pentious: *back to his cheerful self* Very good, have a nice day! *leaves*
Adam: *still shaking* ...what the FUCK?
Cain: calm father This is just Serpentius redeemed he's not even 2% as dangerous as Yax your new hotel neighbor
Yax: ADAM YOU'RE FINALLY DOWN HERE AND NOW YOU'RE FUCKED
Cain: and he can't stand you but don't worry
Kanebal: Yaks has to measure himself against the rules of the princess hotel since your fighters destroyed his bar and now he has nowhere to live and is trying with all his might not to fly out of the hotel
Cain: but I would I would definitely keep a dagger under my pillow no one knows when Yax will want blood