Author needs to give readers more information about the storyline. First she labeled Jungkook as a badboy but there really wasn’t any problems until the end of story Second just because you have best friends doesn’t mean that you have to tell them everything that happens to you…something’s are better kept private…I’m sure that most of you don’t tell your best friends everything that happens to you or vice versa…this doesn’t make you selfish at all Third don’t judge someone just because of their character…they might have a reason for acting that way. He/she is a new writer and will make some mistakes and it’s up to us to let he/she know what wrong with the storyline not to belittle her/his feelings and work.
Pls i dont mean anything but it seems that the stories you make are unfinished or always have missing or incomplete parts dont be offended but a good writer must learn the essential parts of making a story and not just like for the heck of writing only. There is no substance and pointless. The choronology of events are missing. please consider my advice or suggestion, or maybe stop writing. Thank you.
Well, I am thankful to you for letting me know my mistakes. You know I'm a new writer and really don't have experience in writing... So we all know that everything takes time. I will definitely look at my mistakes and will try to give my best. Thanks for your feedback. I don't mind taking it in a positive way...
Next episode or special episode please we have to know why jungkook bullied William brother and taehyung hiding hi relationship with his friends who dearly cared about him.
A/N I know you said don't asks special episode or next episode but your story is a little bit lacking some info such as why taekook have to hide their relationship and why jk hur Williams bro
I understand, yk that time I was learning (I'm still learning tho) but I'm continuously trying to learn through my mistakes. But still, I'm thankful for your kindness:)
A/U after reading comments from your readers... I can understand the "wth" just happened in this storyline!? Rygt... Nothing! Hey! If you're expecting to continue writing your "ff's/oneshot's," like writing a letter! #1 the beginning, #2 the plot (moral of the story), and #3 the conclusion! It doesn't matter how long or short the story is. Just make sure there's an ending that won't keep your readers in limbo! 🤭 🤔
Jk is a bad boy so he must have some issues with students but tae hide his relationship from everyone including his friends because you should keep it private until it's permanent so...
@@PoisonAppleImnida they are their best friends....u hide it from people who are not close or general public...but the people who be there for him he kept lieing to them .... imagine u r best friends is doing the same to u...that's definitely not a 👍 friendship And u being a bad boy doesn't give u the right to hurt others.....when u can't afford to see ur loved ones hurt why u hurt other's loved ones....here tae's bully was better than jk for sure.... Both jk's and tae's charecter are so selfish....
@@vshiiq your points are valid I accept. But you know I'm a new writer and I don't have any experience in writing... So I will try to improve through these mistakes... Thank you for letting me know about my mistakes 😌
@@PoisonAppleImnida I was definitely not trying to demotivate u as a author....I just wanted to be honest with my opinions regarding the story specifically....I am happy u took it in a positive way... waiting for see more ffs 😊👍
@@vshiiqthere are no rules stating that you need to tell everything that happens to you to your best friends…there are things that are kept private and no one else business and about Jungkook being a badboy that’s his choice we don’t know what really happened between him and William brother because the author didn’t elaborate more on that issue,but that doesn’t give William the right to slap someone just to revenge his brother and about Jungkook beating him up it was justifiable his problem was with him not Taehyung……there are two types of bad boys…the one who acts bad but really are nice to people and the one who just like to pick fights for no reason whatsoever…the author just labeled Jungkook as the bad boy of the school but it doesn’t mean that he’s a bad guy.
![[When someone h@rasses him not knowing the college's badboy is his husband] TAEKOOK FF (oneshot)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/SUraqIrrISw/mqdefault.jpg)
Awwww author u really mentioned me thank you thank you so much it's Means a lot thank you 🥺😘 and saranghaeooooo 😘💜❤
Saranghae... Stay happy 💜❤️
@@PoisonAppleImnida you too stay happy And thank you again and saranghaeooooo 😘💜
Author needs to give readers more information about the storyline.
First she labeled Jungkook as a badboy but there really wasn’t any problems until the end of story
Second just because you have best friends doesn’t mean that you have to tell them everything that happens to you…something’s are better kept private…I’m sure that most of you don’t tell your best friends everything that happens to you or vice versa…this doesn’t make you selfish at all
Third don’t judge someone just because of their character…they might have a reason for acting that way.
He/she is a new writer and will make some mistakes and it’s up to us to let he/she know what wrong with the storyline not to belittle her/his feelings and work.
Thank you for your understanding sweetheart... I promise next time, I'll try to do better 😉❤️
Pls i dont mean anything but it seems that the stories you make are unfinished or always have missing or incomplete parts dont be offended but a good writer must learn the essential parts of making a story and not just like for the heck of writing only. There is no substance and pointless. The choronology of events are missing. please consider my advice or suggestion, or maybe stop writing. Thank you.
Well, I am thankful to you for letting me know my mistakes. You know I'm a new writer and really don't have experience in writing... So we all know that everything takes time. I will definitely look at my mistakes and will try to give my best. Thanks for your feedback. I don't mind taking it in a positive way...
You're so kind....@@PoisonAppleImnida
Next episode or special episode please we have to know why jungkook bullied William brother and taehyung hiding hi relationship with his friends who dearly cared about him.
Jk frndz or tae friends should have told the truth to principal😢😢 but it was a well deserved ending ❤❤❤
Pls put music in the ffs as well
Its a good story but unfinished business we need more to understand your mind ❤
1 slap pe kuch jyada he react hogya 😅😅😅
🦁 💜 TaeKookie Forever & Always 💜 🐇
🤔 The principal will lose his job for not having all the facts TaeKookie we'll have a private teacher at home 😉
A/N I know you said don't asks special episode or next episode but your story is a little bit lacking some info such as why taekook have to hide their relationship and why jk hur Williams bro
I understand, yk that time I was learning (I'm still learning tho) but I'm continuously trying to learn through my mistakes. But still, I'm thankful for your kindness:)
I’m sorry it’s so good but I really need to know why 🤨🤔🧐he did this to him love the storyline.😘😍🥰
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A/U after reading comments from your readers... I can understand the "wth" just happened in this storyline!? Rygt... Nothing! Hey! If you're expecting to continue writing your "ff's/oneshot's," like writing a letter! #1 the beginning, #2 the plot (moral of the story), and #3 the conclusion! It doesn't matter how long or short the story is. Just make sure there's an ending that won't keep your readers in limbo! 🤭 🤔
Why did jk bullied his brother in first place?? And why did tae hide and kept lying to frnds who genuinely loved him
Jk is a bad boy so he must have some issues with students but tae hide his relationship from everyone including his friends because you should keep it private until it's permanent so...
@@PoisonAppleImnida they are their best friends....u hide it from people who are not close or general public...but the people who be there for him he kept lieing to them .... imagine u r best friends is doing the same to u...that's definitely not a 👍 friendship
And u being a bad boy doesn't give u the right to hurt others.....when u can't afford to see ur loved ones hurt why u hurt other's loved ones....here tae's bully was better than jk for sure....
Both jk's and tae's charecter are so selfish....
@@vshiiq your points are valid I accept. But you know I'm a new writer and I don't have any experience in writing... So I will try to improve through these mistakes... Thank you for letting me know about my mistakes 😌
@@PoisonAppleImnida I was definitely not trying to demotivate u as a author....I just wanted to be honest with my opinions regarding the story specifically....I am happy u took it in a positive way... waiting for see more ffs 😊👍
@@vshiiqthere are no rules stating that you need to tell everything that happens to you to your best friends…there are things that are kept private and no one else business and about Jungkook being a badboy that’s his choice we don’t know what really happened between him and William brother because the author didn’t elaborate more on that issue,but that doesn’t give William the right to slap someone just to revenge his brother and about Jungkook beating him up it was justifiable his problem was with him not Taehyung……there are two types of bad boys…the one who acts bad but really are nice to people and the one who just like to pick fights for no reason whatsoever…the author just labeled Jungkook as the bad boy of the school but it doesn’t mean that he’s a bad guy.
Unfinished story the ending are not satisfying....overall the story not cleared...sorry to say ...
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