Every story like this has a "leader" saying, "Impossible"(along with damaging the furniture) immediately After Seeing something happen, that until then they thought it was.. No one with experience would ever do that. ANY Real Leader would be more likely to respond, "Damn, How'd They Do That?", Then, "How Can We Respond?". Damaging the Surroundings due to poorly controlled Temper, Never bodes well for Their side, by preventing Clear Thinking..
Man really just pulling our own ducks here huh. I think he said the word impossible deathworlders and humans a few hundred times and the word impossible I guess they just crammed it in at every single pause. Was this written by an Ai or something
alien names-Tom? Ben? are you kidding-no creative thought? and the reptation of human bodies out lasting other aliens over and over was tiresome after a while. Ships that withstood Earth conditions? ships are in space not in atmosphere-many typos as well as AI errors. I understand the work involved as I am a writer as well (published) and this ha potential but needs some serious work to make it matter to the reader-no surprises just bland action-here's to a next better one...
Every story like this has a "leader" saying, "Impossible"(along with damaging the furniture) immediately After Seeing something happen, that until then they thought it was.. No one with experience would ever do that. ANY Real Leader would be more likely to respond, "Damn, How'd They Do That?", Then, "How Can We Respond?". Damaging the Surroundings due to poorly controlled Temper, Never bodes well for Their side, by preventing Clear Thinking..
I liked the story. But there are valid criticisms here!
😂 the alien names Tom amd Ray guess the AI got tired of saying the names different every time.
Good story!
Man really just pulling our own ducks here huh. I think he said the word impossible deathworlders and humans a few hundred times and the word impossible I guess they just crammed it in at every single pause. Was this written by an Ai or something
I like the story
Teach AI to pronounce "G" 😂😂😂
This one is just a constant repeat of the same concept over and over. Sad
alien names-Tom? Ben? are you kidding-no creative thought? and the reptation of human bodies out lasting other aliens over and over was tiresome after a while. Ships that withstood Earth conditions? ships are in space not in atmosphere-many typos as well as AI errors. I understand the work involved as I am a writer as well (published) and this ha potential but needs some serious work to make it matter to the reader-no surprises just bland action-here's to a next better one...
Yeah ...I think most of these hfy stories are created by ai.
I want humanity to remember your comment when we finally meet an alien species and one of them has the name Tom.