I have a big problem I don't know which is your best story. Because there are now so many to choose from. This one was definitely a ten out of ten well done LLC.
I'm so glad you enjoy my stories. Just know its because of you and this channel I can make them. Thank you for your support and words. I'll make more for you to choose from
Yeah he is a favorite of mine, had to let him in this one a bit. Thank you for your words and support. Im glad you enjoyed the story. I promise more are coming ✌😎
@@sandrakeizer7437 They kind of already met in the park from the same story. But yes, I do plan on them meeting officially one day 😉. Glad you like the characters
Thank you for your words and support. I enjoyed writing this story. Also, thanks for the props to. Not sure if Hollywood will take me, but I am writing a book ✌😎
Why the ending is like that? It's obviously home invasion. Texans are quite particular about their "private property". And there's no reason for MC to reveal his real name to the authority. And I doubt Texans would give up their hero to federal govt... The ending got too many convenience that doesn't compute. Good story except for the prison ending.
Malicious logic 3740, another good story!! Please keep contributing to this channel!! If you are writing a book, please keep us posted!! Again interesting story!!
1:09:10 it should be in writing and notarized. Like in equalizer movie....or any ntr story, or any fiction, those who trade in woman's flesh wont let their product go away.
Anyone that liked this one should hit the like then share, and hit copy link! Gives the channel and Travis the share with out flooding your contacts! It’s free and easy!!
This story was interesting and captivating. Although I noticed that our talented colleague has a habit of romancing at the end, the current story ended up in my playlist named "Special Stories". Thank you
I'm humbled and honored that you enjoy this story so much. Thank you for your words and support. I enjoy making stories for yall and will continue to do so. ✌😎
The first twist with who the wife was I kinda suspected. The second twist with who the AP was.... and who MC's new Lady was, was Almost a bridge too far... But you brought it back around nicely! Well done.
had his folks still been there; he'd have not gone through those bad times. Also story wise It was indeed a very enjoyable listen, but perhaps he didn't need to go through hell so many times and then to be denied even the ability to father his own child (since he is the loyal type) ? I think thats a bit harsh only part I disliked.
Hi. Very, very good story you have here Maliciouslogic3740. Your story telling ability is improving by leaps and bounds. You still need to pay a bit more attention to the editing but other than that, keep on keepin' on 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Thank you for your words and support. As far as the editing im getting a new computer and program. Its very frustrating. I could edit and spellcheck the same word 5 times, just for it to either put in another word entirely or misspell it. I do apologize for this because its unfair to you guys. But just know I'm aware of it and am making means to correct it. Again thank you for your words and support ✌😎
Hey yall, thank you all again for your words and support. I had fun making this story and plan on making more for all of you. Thank you for your words and support and a big shout out and thanks to Love Lost Cronicals for giving me the platform to create for you all. Thank you and God bless ✌😎
I did, but my Microsoft Word is crap so is its spellcheck. But im getting a new lap and program soon. I apologize for it non the less. Thank you for your words and support
And its so frustrating to correct the same word five time to either slip through or say the wrong word. Also its so un fair to you guys. So once again I apologize. Just know that I'm aware and making preparations that it dose not happen as much and eventually again in the future
God never gives us More than we can handle.he has a purpose for all wether it's repentance for sins or other.to leave her suffering and his suffering from the same thing isn't a bonus for his repentance.he was given a chance much like all of us take it
That was a good story but jesus christ...you have that guy going through hell and back several times in his life,doing all sort of things to help folks and in the end after also a prison sentence you get him a single mother that cant have kids anymore?I find that trend a lot in these types of stories....the bad guy has a couple of satan spawns that he bred while the good guy goes through hell only in the end to raise them and in most cases never getting his own.......wow.
Great story again! Malicious keeps bringing the 🔥🔥🔥!!!! Keep them coming!
Yes indeed, I got a few more in the works. Thank you for your support and words
Another awesome story, thanks LLC also keep making these awesome spies and Mercenaries stories.
So glad you like it. Thank you for your words and support 😊
@maliciouslogic3740 No problem your stories are very interesting and it reminds me of Tom Clancy Books.
@@maliciouslogic3740you should be writing novels and movies man you’re awesome
@@lancetoston3941 Thanks man, im actually writing a book now
Wow! I couldn't stop listening. Captivating story. Thanks to the author and LLC!
Your welcome, but thank you for your words and support. Those are the reasons I do this i appreciate that. 😊
DAMM, this is in my TOP 3, so so good and well written
Thank you so much for your words and support
Very good story thank you very much🙏
You are most welcome. Im glad you enjoyed it. I make these for you guys. Blessings ✌ 😊
Best story so far l can’t wait for the next story keep up the good work
Just finished another one yesterday, keep those eyes open 😉. Also thank you for your words and support ✌😎
Great story 👏 👌
I have a big problem I don't know which is your best story. Because there are now so many to choose from. This one was definitely a ten out of ten well done LLC.
Travis is a genius.
I'm so glad you enjoy my stories. Just know its because of you and this channel I can make them. Thank you for your support and words. I'll make more for you to choose from
Good Story. TY 😊
Another great story well told, full of details and twists. LLC... a name... a guarantee of quality
Yes, another Simon story . Thank you .
Yeah he is a favorite of mine, had to let him in this one a bit. Thank you for your words and support. Im glad you enjoyed the story. I promise more are coming ✌😎
@@maliciouslogic3740 I do believe you have two favorieten. Father Mac was there too. I wonder will they meet eachother??
@@sandrakeizer7437 They kind of already met in the park from the same story. But yes, I do plan on them meeting officially one day 😉. Glad you like the characters
Another outstanding story. I sure hope maliciousliguc continues….. very well written stories.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I will be writing more. Thank you for your support
That was an excellent story worth movie status. 👍👍
Thank you for your words and support. I enjoyed writing this story. Also, thanks for the props to. Not sure if Hollywood will take me, but I am writing a book ✌😎
Brilliant loved every minute of that respect 👊👍
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
Great story! Well done!
Why the ending is like that? It's obviously home invasion. Texans are quite particular about their "private property".
And there's no reason for MC to reveal his real name to the authority.
And I doubt Texans would give up their hero to federal govt...
The ending got too many convenience that doesn't compute.
Good story except for the prison ending.
One of my favorite stories
Yep. This was a good one!
Malicious logic 3740, another good story!! Please keep contributing to this channel!! If you are writing a book, please keep us posted!! Again interesting story!!
Yes indeed, im only getting started on here. Im also writing a book as well. Thank you for your words and support ✌😎
Wow! What are the odds of things turning out like that? Unbelievable!
It’s a good way for me to pass time and once again I liked the father Mac reference
1:09:10 it should be in writing and notarized.
Like in equalizer movie....or any ntr story, or any fiction, those who trade in woman's flesh wont let their product go away.
Travis, as always! This one absolutely rocked!! I am becoming your number one fan!👍👍👍
Iam humbled and honored. Thank you for your support. I do this for yall thank you so much for your luv and support
Loved the story ❤
I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for your words and support
I used to manage a Turkey Hill ... LoL !!
The misdirection was masterful! Bravo!
Anothy malicious story! FYeah! 🥳🤙
😅 Appreciate the love. I hope you enjoy it. And thank you and LLC I do this for yall.
It's your efforts Travis. You are the best
@@LostLoveChronicles Thank you for your words. And the opportunity, hope to make more for you and everyone
Why am i imagining Keith David's voice everytime AL talks?😏
Because the ones who know....know hense why I wrote it in. And you are awsome and epic 😎. Thank you for your support
Anyone that liked this one should hit the like then share, and hit copy link! Gives the channel and Travis the share with out flooding your contacts! It’s free and easy!!
He went to work 😮I enjoyed
Yes indeed im glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your support ✌😎
This story was interesting and captivating. Although I noticed that our talented colleague has a habit of romancing at the end, the current story ended up in my playlist named "Special Stories". Thank you
I'm humbled and honored that you enjoy this story so much. Thank you for your words and support. I enjoy making stories for yall and will continue to do so. ✌😎
Great story, really like this one
The first twist with who the wife was I kinda suspected. The second twist with who the AP was.... and who MC's new Lady was, was Almost a bridge too far... But you brought it back around nicely! Well done.
At mom's so I'm running behind.
Love my Lucchese boots, I have a few different skins.
😮 the twist +storytelling the vile toxicity this one i think abpaer two 🤔 wouldn't hurt yes this one this good 😀 thx LLC for this upload 😀 😊
Thanks to Travis for writing this amazing story
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for your words and support ✌🙂
had his folks still been there; he'd have not gone through those bad times. Also story wise It was indeed a very enjoyable listen, but perhaps he didn't need to go through hell so many times and then to be denied even the ability to father his own child (since he is the loyal type) ? I think thats a bit harsh only part I disliked.
❤❤❤❤❤ I love this channel
That was a awesome story
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it ✌🙂
Hi. Very, very good story you have here Maliciouslogic3740. Your story telling ability is improving by leaps and bounds. You still need to pay a bit more attention to the editing but other than that, keep on keepin' on 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Thank you for your words and support. As far as the editing im getting a new computer and program. Its very frustrating. I could edit and spellcheck the same word 5 times, just for it to either put in another word entirely or misspell it. I do apologize for this because its unfair to you guys. But just know I'm aware of it and am making means to correct it. Again thank you for your words and support ✌😎
Another great story....but sadly no soup was made today lol.
Also, thank you for your support and words
Damn Son. This was a great story. Now, if we could only get the AI to learn word pronunciation. Well done to malicioslogic3740 for this tale.
Thank you for your words and support. I appreciate that. Thank you so much
@@maliciouslogic3740 Yep. This one shows what a great word smith you are. I hope you have something else with our good sheriff coming down the pipe.
Hey yall, thank you all again for your words and support. I had fun making this story and plan on making more for all of you. Thank you for your words and support and a big shout out and thanks to Love Lost Cronicals for giving me the platform to create for you all. Thank you and God bless
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only a moron raises some other man's spawn.
Make them longer 🤣
@@Dark-shift_ OK 👌
🤓👍❤️💯 yessss another Travis story!
I make them for you all. Thank you for your words and support
When are you going to remember to proofread before posting?
I did, but my Microsoft Word is crap so is its spellcheck. But im getting a new lap and program soon. I apologize for it non the less. Thank you for your words and support
And its so frustrating to correct the same word five time to either slip through or say the wrong word. Also its so un fair to you guys. So once again I apologize. Just know that I'm aware and making preparations that it dose not happen as much and eventually again in the future
He should’ve stay with the older couple or at least take the woman and her child and left with them
Mesmerizing =/= memorizing
Spell check isn’t going to catch that. You have to catch it when you read it aloud to yourself 👍
Seems like those who got money and don't care always have access to more because it doesn't matter
So does Mr. Al Simmons here become Spawn after he dies?
I was waiting for someone to catch that 😂. Greetings fellow fan. I hope you are well. Thank you for your words and support.
@@maliciouslogic3740 I was looking for someone to point it out and was a little disappointed to see no one noticed lol
🤗!!!
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God never gives us More than we can handle.he has a purpose for all wether it's repentance for sins or other.to leave her suffering and his suffering from the same thing isn't a bonus for his repentance.he was given a chance much like all of us take it
Prove god,
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✌😎. Thank you for your support
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✌😎 Thank you for your support
That was a good story but jesus christ...you have that guy going through hell and back several times in his life,doing all sort of things to help folks and in the end after also a prison sentence you get him a single mother that cant have kids anymore?I find that trend a lot in these types of stories....the bad guy has a couple of satan spawns that he bred while the good guy goes through hell only in the end to raise them and in most cases never getting his own.......wow.
agreed
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I miss sensible stories 30th mins
Why on earth are all the stories 90mins + and repeat crap several times, some proof reading really should be done