I like it, I would have added a little more piano or a light instrument to kind of take us through from the verse to the chorus. Also to just build it a little more as the song goes like you started doing at 1:17. A crescendo for when the song climaxes and then you play us out. It's such a "storytelling beat", I like it a lot. Just needs a little more....complexity.
Sitting in the dark with the lights on feeling kinda down guess my hearts gone cut it out my chest with the fast lane livin crime spree gettin I done hit the wall and crashed with how I have been existin
I'm working on becoming a better artist thank you for sharing this I'm just learning so I'll get back to you if I come up with any tips I'm just supporting if I comment something you like use it especially if it helps you eat! But don't get your hopes up I'm probably not a great rapper 😂
You’re weird. You need to reevaluate yourself. And you sound dumb. People click on type beat videos and just take the beat and listen. And don’t even subscribe. They just be worried about making music with the beat.
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I like it, I would have added a little more piano or a light instrument to kind of take us through from the verse to the chorus. Also to just build it a little more as the song goes like you started doing at 1:17. A crescendo for when the song climaxes and then you play us out. It's such a "storytelling beat", I like it a lot. Just needs a little more....complexity.
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Sitting in the dark with the lights on feeling kinda down guess my hearts gone cut it out my chest with the fast lane livin crime spree gettin I done hit the wall and crashed with how I have been existin
I love this beat it's perfect 👌
I'm working on becoming a better artist thank you for sharing this I'm just learning so I'll get back to you if I come up with any tips I'm just supporting if I comment something you like use it especially if it helps you eat! But don't get your hopes up I'm probably not a great rapper 😂
srry for the annoying comment but thoughts on my music? im jus tryna improve 🖤🤲
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should i stop rapping look at my new stuff???
Made a song n video called crash out
Actually wasn’t a bad song , keep doing you man!!
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You’re weird. You need to reevaluate yourself. And you sound dumb. People click on type beat videos and just take the beat and listen. And don’t even subscribe. They just be worried about making music with the beat.
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