With longer story lines you’re able to develop empathetic characters. In shorter tales, it seems the author builds up the gore and leaves the characters out. Great job. Love the lengthy stories!
This story has made me happy. I heard it first on sinister readings, which lead me to dark night tales, which lead me to here. So all in all, it's been a great story for me. And I also like it.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my narration of it. It's a really good story. That one line towards the end when MC is in the Jeep going to the other tower gave me chills when I read it. Really well written story.
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The things i noticed at the end of the story that clicked at the beginning. When he left the cave and spent the night up in a tree, the creature came out but couldn't find him because of the storm. The only reason i can think of why it went to Bill's lookout instead of the MC's was because Bill drove his vehicle and the creature heard it where as the MC had walked back instead of collecting his vehicle.
There are many stories about creatures being in the deeper subway systems! I believe the many horror stories of the human monster's that exist help keep their existence well hidden, also if no1 gets out alive. There's no1 to tell how, and exactly where they live, and hide.
I've never once in my life been in a subway. I don't go to cities big enough to have them. Ever. A firewatch job or park ranger would've been the perfect career for me. Wish I had.
Greatly done! the music and different tones added so much more fear to the story. I love how it makes you speculate who dug the mine, who really discovered it, and how many more are there!
Ranger stations should have a hoist system to winch up supplies rather than having to carry them up the stairs, the hoist system and a rescue basket could be utilized to transport an incapacitated Ranger safely to the ground for a medivac flight.
Old houses and barns had a small roof projection in front, with a beam and tackle/ pulley just below, and a big opening/door for large and heavy objects. Seems odd that watch towers don’t have something like that.
This was an excellent, really creepy story. What I found particularly creepy was at the beginning of the story, where the ranger is investigating the cavern because he hears what he thinks is the voices of lost campers. At first, as a listener, it seems confusing that the campers are not responding to the ranger's calls. But then, when the ranger takes flight, he fears his own voice, repeating words he said earlier. He realizes, just as the listener does, that he is listening to "something" that is mimicking human voices in order to lure him. Just the way that humans use animal calls to lure their prey into range. Now that is so creepy that I could feel chills! The journal that the ranger found is a marvelous story point that is used to very good effect. Frankly, this would make a great movie! But there are still unanswered questions. Why was the mine not permanently closed? Someone knew about the danger----Billy certainly did. The mine entrance was shut with a metal gate. But why was it not shut permanently with explosives? And who were the mysterious people who know about the creature, that Billy was trying to contact? We never did find out how Billy knew about the mine and the monster, or who else knew, or who put the metal gate at the front of the mine. The description of the monster was terrific---it did not fall back on the old trope of it being a Bigfoot or a Skinwalker. I really liked the ending where the protagonist lives and kills the monster. Far, far too many of these stories end with the protagonist dead or worse, and that common ending just takes all the thrill out of the story. But the ending, while good, is a bit unsatisfying. What happens next? The protagonist will have no problem proving his story, with the body of the creature and all the other evidence being plain. Does he go back to the mine, to seal it shut with dynamite? I know I sure would! And what was Billy story? I would have loved to find out. Excellent story, well worth listening to. Well written, excellently told. The narrator's voice is excellent, his tone and cadence adding to the story. I very highly recommend this one!
There are a bunch of ranger stories, N most of the rangers, especially older one's know more. But R usually suppose to keep it on the down low. Or figure they won't be believed
I live at the base of a mountain and can see the fire tower from my house. Back in the early 1980's I was offered the job of fire tower watch. I thought about it, it seemed like a dream job, but I was in my early twenties and alone is not what I was looking for at the time! Today I know of a place where you can rent a fire tower for the weekend like a cabin at the lake kind of thing. It would be much fun to do so, but I can't climb all those stairs anymore!! If you have never been in a fire tower before there are a few things that are a strike against renting one. First off, no bathroom! If you gotta go, you gotta go downstairs to the outhouse! Second, you have to carry everything up all those stairs! But I would love to tell scary stories in one of the fire towers with a group of 12 year olds!! I scared the crap out of my kids and some of their friends when they were young!! Scary stories and camping go hand in hand!! Love your narrations!!
One word: Tourniquet, my man. So did the attack on billy and final battle all happen in broad daylight? Dayyumn. That's unusual for these stories. The monster got his comeuppance for being so petty.
500 SNW Magnum is a very large and powerful projectile , considering there are no Grizzlies in the Eastern woodlands of TN. I get it trust me, its cool as all get out , BUT 460XVR Magnum is a more versatile, considering that it will also fire the extremely capable 454 Casual , which will handle anything out here, and is a handful in its own right. 😂
Fun story I always have a gun on my work out to dinner dates and hiking always was out hiking off trail seen a brown bear coming my way so I make a little noise to not startled it disappears into the bush I hear it 30 yards away going right along with me keeping the same distance comes out does a false charge naturally I draw and brown bears best thing to do is not scream disappears into the bush again woods are dead quiet I move along in about 30 minutes later comes out of the bush 15 yd to my right full charge I carry a glock 17 considered underpowered I draw and in the course of about 3 seconds dump 9 rounds into it from 15 yards full charge even if you get vital hits chances are you're getting mauled how about 5 ft away collapses and comes to a stop within a foot foot and a half draws its last breath very intense but I'm adrenaline junkie that shit was amazing your never more alive then when you think your about to die semper Fi!
Contrary to popular belief, your "gut feeling" is not usually correct. That's old school Hollywood BS. Any trained professional in human behavior can tell you that. Your also under order from your supervisor to return to your post. He repeated that request numerous times and you are not geared or prepared for a high risk rescue. That's why there's SRT. Whatever happens at this point is on you. Follow orders and stay alive and employed or follow your "gut" and, well...
One part don’t make sense lol why wouldn’t he call the chopper and police and help as he drove to rescue his fellow worker ? Lmao got enough service to call his buddy but didn’t call anyone for backup as he drove there ? Makes no sense coulda called backup as he drove to his buddy’s rescue so at least they had backup so what if it took an hour and a half at least eventually even after he got there to help his buddy is things went sideways for them both they’d EVENTUALLY have backup
My neighbors had a fire once. We put it out before the fire department even showed up🤣 they suck in my area. Literally a 5 minute drive away... Took em 20, my hand got burnt up for weeks taking the siding off and tryna put it out. Plus i was drunk. 🙄 still did better than the firefighters 🤣 had to or my place would catch
Don't move to Charlotte unless you already got paper. Housing is skyhigh and the black community that's already here are getting priced out by regentrafication. It's beautiful don't get me wrong, but it seam to me that the latins are getting the better deal here...but I'm just saying
I enjoyed this story and the narration. I hate to be picky, but note to author, a 500 Smith and Wesson only has 5 round cylinder...most very large caliber revolvers do.
With longer story lines you’re able to develop empathetic characters. In shorter tales, it seems the author builds up the gore and leaves the characters out. Great job. Love the lengthy stories!
man this guy's got a heroes complex.... that's how you die
I absolutely love this guys narrative talent
Me2
Can I get a hell no to entering dark holes? Unless they’re on a lover, of course.
It's nice to hear a different voice every once in a while that reads the same type of stories you got yourself a new sub
Its crazy to hear how you've evolved your narration technique over the last year since I've been listening to you.
This story has made me happy. I heard it first on sinister readings, which lead me to dark night tales, which lead me to here. So all in all, it's been a great story for me. And I also like it.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my narration of it. It's a really good story. That one line towards the end when MC is in the Jeep going to the other tower gave me chills when I read it. Really well written story.
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1000% your hour + videos are definitely your best content, it really let's you get into the story, feel the characters
You have a great narrative voice! Love the longer stories for work and chores.
Thank you!
@@JordanGrupetotally true! You rule! Beautiful, deep man voice. Makes me very happy ❤❤❤❤
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Yes. Love the longer ones.
The things i noticed at the end of the story that clicked at the beginning.
When he left the cave and spent the night up in a tree, the creature came out but couldn't find him because of the storm.
The only reason i can think of why it went to Bill's lookout instead of the MC's was because Bill drove his vehicle and the creature heard it where as the MC had walked back instead of collecting his vehicle.
Huh, I didn't make that connection, but that totes magotes makes sense
I I am am I 🎉
Imagine if there were creatures like this in a subway system
Kudos to the narrator and author
There are many stories about creatures being in the deeper subway systems! I believe the many horror stories of the human monster's that exist help keep their existence well hidden, also if no1 gets out alive. There's no1 to tell how, and exactly where they live, and hide.
@@heatherfuller2613totally understand that they’d LOVE the seemingly endless subway tunnels
I've never once in my life been in a subway. I don't go to cities big enough to have them. Ever. A firewatch job or park ranger would've been the perfect career for me. Wish I had.
Love the line about a hamster being able to tear thru his jeep- excellent story as usual
How about “Billy get away from there everyone that finds the cabins never are seen again!!!!! Run!!! Runnn!!! Runnn !””””
I getting so hooked on that?wonderful deep voice of yours. Just starting this one ty
Idk how I missed this one but I've listened to it now. Excellent story! The "pants shittingly terrifying" line had me laughing out loud.
Greatly done! the music and different tones added so much more fear to the story. I love how it makes you speculate who dug the mine, who really discovered it, and how many more are there!
Thank you so much Jordan. 👍🏻
Thanks for watching Keith!
Ranger stations should have a hoist system to winch up supplies rather than having to carry them up the stairs, the hoist system and a rescue basket could be utilized to transport an incapacitated Ranger safely to the ground for a medivac flight.
Old houses and barns had a small roof projection in front, with a beam and tackle/ pulley just below, and a big opening/door for large and heavy objects. Seems odd that watch towers don’t have something like that.
How do you think I feel about my apartment ! every day I get closer to building one on my balcony 😂
This was an excellent, really creepy story. What I found particularly creepy was at the beginning of the story, where the ranger is investigating the cavern because he hears what he thinks is the voices of lost campers. At first, as a listener, it seems confusing that the campers are not responding to the ranger's calls. But then, when the ranger takes flight, he fears his own voice, repeating words he said earlier. He realizes, just as the listener does, that he is listening to "something" that is mimicking human voices in order to lure him. Just the way that humans use animal calls to lure their prey into range. Now that is so creepy that I could feel chills!
The journal that the ranger found is a marvelous story point that is used to very good effect. Frankly, this would make a great movie! But there are still unanswered questions. Why was the mine not permanently closed? Someone knew about the danger----Billy certainly did. The mine entrance was shut with a metal gate. But why was it not shut permanently with explosives? And who were the mysterious people who know about the creature, that Billy was trying to contact? We never did find out how Billy knew about the mine and the monster, or who else knew, or who put the metal gate at the front of the mine. The description of the monster was terrific---it did not fall back on the old trope of it being a Bigfoot or a Skinwalker. I really liked the ending where the protagonist lives and kills the monster. Far, far too many of these stories end with the protagonist dead or worse, and that common ending just takes all the thrill out of the story. But the ending, while good, is a bit unsatisfying. What happens next? The protagonist will have no problem proving his story, with the body of the creature and all the other evidence being plain. Does he go back to the mine, to seal it shut with dynamite? I know I sure would! And what was Billy story? I would have loved to find out.
Excellent story, well worth listening to. Well written, excellently told. The narrator's voice is excellent, his tone and cadence adding to the story. I very highly recommend this one!
Thank you! This story stood out to me as well as a really good one!
There are a bunch of ranger stories, N most of the rangers, especially older one's know more. But R usually suppose to keep it on the down low. Or figure they won't be believed
to me it did sound like a Skinwalker
Very good story.
Excellent narration 🥰 totally enjoyed it
Wow, Shirt is gonna love this
Let's hope so. Shirt, did you like it?
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Yep😅
Not me. RUN thats what I'd do.
I live at the base of a mountain and can see the fire tower from my house. Back in the early 1980's I was offered the job of fire tower watch. I thought about it, it seemed like a dream job, but I was in my early twenties and alone is not what I was looking for at the time! Today I know of a place where you can rent a fire tower for the weekend like a cabin at the lake kind of thing. It would be much fun to do so, but I can't climb all those stairs anymore!! If you have never been in a fire tower before there are a few things that are a strike against renting one. First off, no bathroom! If you gotta go, you gotta go downstairs to the outhouse! Second, you have to carry everything up all those stairs! But I would love to tell scary stories in one of the fire towers with a group of 12 year olds!! I scared the crap out of my kids and some of their friends when they were young!! Scary stories and camping go hand in hand!! Love your narrations!!
Disobey orders and lose your weapon. Sounds like a ideal park ranger.
One word: Tourniquet, my man.
So did the attack on billy and final battle all happen in broad daylight? Dayyumn. That's unusual for these stories.
The monster got his comeuppance for being so petty.
That sounds like my dream job
Had to go Curious Caucasian 🤣
Lol, every time he said O'conner, The Mummy would pop into my head. 😂
The ranger not only did not load the chainsaw in the truck but also failed to bring a machete.
Heard enough of these stories their starting to tie all together 😊
Thank God for 500 magnum haha
Amazing story!
500 SNW Magnum is a very large and powerful projectile , considering there are no Grizzlies in the Eastern woodlands of TN. I get it trust me, its cool as all get out , BUT 460XVR Magnum is a more versatile, considering that it will also fire the extremely capable 454 Casual , which will handle anything out here, and is a handful in its own right. 😂
This is an old story...
But man u do it right
Tnx dude😊
Anyone know what the music piece is called?
Fun story I always have a gun on my work out to dinner dates and hiking always was out hiking off trail seen a brown bear coming my way so I make a little noise to not startled it disappears into the bush I hear it 30 yards away going right along with me keeping the same distance comes out does a false charge naturally I draw and brown bears best thing to do is not scream disappears into the bush again woods are dead quiet I move along in about 30 minutes later comes out of the bush 15 yd to my right full charge I carry a glock 17 considered underpowered I draw and in the course of about 3 seconds dump 9 rounds into it from 15 yards full charge even if you get vital hits chances are you're getting mauled how about 5 ft away collapses and comes to a stop within a foot foot and a half draws its last breath very intense but I'm adrenaline junkie that shit was amazing your never more alive then when you think your about to die semper Fi!
Great story 😊
Great story telling ❤
Thank you!
Reminds me of that one John Carpenter movie set in the Arctic. Nice job!
The Thing
Love your Voice and your background music! So glad I found you from Lighthouse's channel
Welcome!!
Your stories have it all and your great voice is just icing on the cake ❤❤ Thank you and Happy 4th to all 🎆🎇🎆🎇🧨🧨🎇🎆🎇🧨
Love your voice man 👍 instant sub
Thanks for the sub!
So theyr wendigos right?
What is the opening soundtrack?
Myuu lurking shadows
Another good one Jordan 👍🍷
Such a good hair raising tale.
😊 good one.
Contrary to popular belief, your "gut feeling" is not usually correct. That's old school Hollywood BS. Any trained professional in human behavior can tell you that. Your also under order from your supervisor to return to your post. He repeated that request numerous times and you are not geared or prepared for a high risk rescue. That's why there's SRT. Whatever happens at this point is on you. Follow orders and stay alive and employed or follow your "gut" and, well...
Currently listening to the dilemma with Billy and in my head I heard “f::k Billy, Billy’s dead”
38:18?
Yeah I couldnt live there.
Cheers 😊
I feel terror listening towards the end of this story.
I like thanks is there a part 2?
No unfortunately I think this is it
If walls are painted with blood RUN DONT LOOK BACK JUST RUN
One part don’t make sense lol why wouldn’t he call the chopper and police and help as he drove to rescue his fellow worker ? Lmao got enough service to call his buddy but didn’t call anyone for backup as he drove there ? Makes no sense coulda called backup as he drove to his buddy’s rescue so at least they had backup so what if it took an hour and a half at least eventually even after he got there to help his buddy is things went sideways for them both they’d EVENTUALLY have backup
my understanding was the satellite gave an extended range although he managed to call his buddy he was outta range to the main station
My neighbors had a fire once. We put it out before the fire department even showed up🤣 they suck in my area. Literally a 5 minute drive away... Took em 20, my hand got burnt up for weeks taking the siding off and tryna put it out. Plus i was drunk. 🙄 still did better than the firefighters 🤣 had to or my place would catch
Don't move to Charlotte unless you already got paper. Housing is skyhigh and the black community that's already here are getting priced out by regentrafication. It's beautiful don't get me wrong, but it seam to me that the latins are getting the better deal here...but I'm just saying
Is there a continuation of this story that I can read?
I don't believe so. This one was written by dark night tales, you can always check his profile on Reddit
This would make an awesome horror movie.
That would be very cool!
The creature sounds like scp-939 in this story 🤔
I enjoyed this story and the narration. I hate to be picky, but note to author, a 500 Smith and Wesson only has 5 round cylinder...most very large caliber revolvers do.
Excellent story but why are so many sentences repeated isn’t the first story I’ve come across this problem
Is it just me or does this guy sound like Reverend Lovejoy from The Simpsons?
Why do you repeat so many lines?
Bro wrong Native American tribe. Cherokee are in that area.
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