A young woman waits for her boyfriend in a forest where not everything is as it seems... Watch the BTS here: • making a SHORT FILM wi... Insta: @peterfilmsstuff @petera_132
The bare tree branches gave the feeling they were reaching out to snare the woman walking through the woods. You found a great way to make the scenery enhance the uneasy mood. Good work!
Great film! I would love to know how you edited this so well if you film another short, I am making my first film and struggling to edit it with no experience!
Honestly there were some great compositions in there, music worked well with the film, better soundeffects would have helped a lot with the ambience and the ending was really well done, loved the second coming of whatever kidnapped the girl!
Super cool short! Fantasitc location and great shots! I'd love to help collaborate and score your next short. Let me know if you'd want to work together :)
opening shot is cool af, you cut wait to much and to fast it would be better to cuts some shots out of the film, for example the second shot she is sitting on a rock next to the road waiting for somebody we dont need to see the text menages to know that she is waiting of somebody. There are a lot of smal technical mistakes almost every shot has some brakes some kind of filmmaking rule. with is normal when you start i recomend you learn the rules before you brake them. fun that you when all the way out to a forest to film this. you should watch as mant short films as you can if you want to improve. i recomend the witch its very similar to this film but its a long film. if you dont wanna watch the hole thing watch some clips of it on youtube like "the witch peeka-bo scene" good luck keep up the good work 9/10: effort 8/10: creativity -10/10: technical skill
Thanks for the constructive criticism! Yeah I’ve sooo much to learn but I figured it would be better to start filming and make the mistakes than to wait around. I hope you’ll get to see me improve!
Absolute cap man, great shots @peteraherne you kept all the basic rules of shooting a short film, don’t listen to the haters this man doesn’t know what he’s on about 😭
wow this is so good! i really got that feeling towards the end
Thanks so much!!
For your first film this is awesome, the story was a great little one too. well done to you both! Look forward to seeing more! :)
@@FuzzyMannerz thank you!!
The bare tree branches gave the feeling they were reaching out to snare the woman walking through the woods. You found a great way to make the scenery enhance the uneasy mood. Good work!
Wow thanks for noticing that!! Thanks for your comment!
i just finished watching the bts, this is so good :D love the idea
Wow thanks for watching!!
Astonishingly effective.
Thanks!!
this is sooo goood
Thank you!!!
Great film! I would love to know how you edited this so well if you film another short, I am making my first film and struggling to edit it with no experience!
@@charlieb98 I know the feeling! I’ll go into more depth of my editing process next time!
That was a fun one! I mean scary… great little film!
@@patsthebunny haha it’s ok if was fun 😂
Honestly there were some great compositions in there, music worked well with the film, better soundeffects would have helped a lot with the ambience and the ending was really well done, loved the second coming of whatever kidnapped the girl!
@@DanDaManBaBam thanks for the great feedback!
Best short comedy ever.😅. TH-cam has been recommending GOATED small youtubers as of late. But fk engineering
Glad the algorithm has brought me your way! Thanks for watching!
Great little story. Nice work. Good luck with further shorts.
Thanks so much!
I love this scary little movies.
Thanks!!
Wild Blue Yonder anybody?
Just looked it up! I don’t watch Doctor Who but I’ll check out the episode see how it compares 😂😂
Really cool!
Super cool short! Fantasitc location and great shots! I'd love to help collaborate and score your next short. Let me know if you'd want to work together :)
@@StalhammarAudio will do!
opening shot is cool af, you cut wait to much and to fast it would be better to cuts some shots out of the film, for example the second shot she is sitting on a rock next to the road waiting for somebody we dont need to see the text menages to know that she is waiting of somebody. There are a lot of smal technical mistakes almost every shot has some brakes some kind of filmmaking rule. with is normal when you start i recomend you learn the rules before you brake them. fun that you when all the way out to a forest to film this. you should watch as mant short films as you can if you want to improve. i recomend the witch its very similar to this film but its a long film. if you dont wanna watch the hole thing watch some clips of it on youtube like "the witch peeka-bo scene" good luck keep up the good work
9/10: effort
8/10: creativity
-10/10: technical skill
Thanks for the constructive criticism! Yeah I’ve sooo much to learn but I figured it would be better to start filming and make the mistakes than to wait around. I hope you’ll get to see me improve!
That's bad out he's dyslexic
Absolute cap man, great shots @peteraherne you kept all the basic rules of shooting a short film, don’t listen to the haters this man doesn’t know what he’s on about 😭
@@petera_132exactly just make a lot of short film and watch a bunch an you will just get better and better glad to know you did not take it to hard