Maybe if the mother didn’t try to control everything in their child’s life, she wouldn’t have been cut off in both life and even the afterlife. The mother did this to herself and she got exactly what she deserved in the end, NOTHING. How dare she after trying to rip apart Marks relationship, being completely fine not being a part of his, his children, and his wives lives, and have the audacity to expect something after his death. What a deranged lunatic that woman is. I wouldnt give her SH!T because she only cares about herself and no one else, not even her children or grandchildren.
Maybe if the mother didn’t try to control everything in their child’s life, she wouldn’t have been cut off in both life and even the afterlife. The mother did this to herself and she got exactly what she deserved in the end, NOTHING. How dare she after trying to rip apart Marks relationship, being completely fine not being a part of his, his children, and his wives lives, and have the audacity to expect something after his death. What a deranged lunatic that woman is. I wouldnt give her SH!T because she only cares about herself and no one else, not even her children or grandchildren.
I agree with everything you said
Nice work of creative writing. Too many plot holes, tho...might wanna close those up in the next piece😊
And no finish on the update!