im lost cause are they in high school or college cause the story said he is going to get a scholarship but then it also mentions that 1 year later they graduate with degrees already. For a decent story making mistakes like that can ruin it a bit. Especially if someone pays attention to the facts already made beforehand. I think it comes down to poor editing and proofreading cause a bunch of channels are like that where its like no one cares to correct or fix their mistakes before it gets taken for posting.
That was a great story 😢
Amazing story very well-written pretty underrated def deserves more attention
Couldn't agree more!
im lost cause are they in high school or college cause the story said he is going to get a scholarship but then it also mentions that 1 year later they graduate with degrees already. For a decent story making mistakes like that can ruin it a bit. Especially if someone pays attention to the facts already made beforehand. I think it comes down to poor editing and proofreading cause a bunch of channels are like that where its like no one cares to correct or fix their mistakes before it gets taken for posting.
The story lacks romantic essense since you use 3rd person for witness hahaha