Thought I’d leave a comment about this one. I was really torn about whether I should have our little angel react so negatively to being treated at first. It’s highly emotional, and I’m sure it may not be everyone's cup of tea. I decided to go through with it due to the story I’m trying to convey here. Our angel is not okay. She’s been through a lot. You can see that just from her wings. But it isn’t just about the physical pain she’s enduring. It’s about the mental. The trust she decides to put into you. The healing process. Not all pain subsides. And, sometimes, you must go through just a little more to begin to get better. To all my friends out there who are healing from something mentally, or physically… Sometimes the pain has to get a little worse before it begins getting better. Sometimes, you must sacrifice comfort, or what’s become “the norm” to begin moving forward. Just remember, you are amazing, no matter what anyone or even that brain of yours says. I believe in you.
UUUUGHHHH I HAVE BEEN WOUNDED EMOTIONALLY AND NOW IM CRYING QmQ headpats!! so much headpats n cuddles for the angel bab!!! I kept screaming NO when she tries to get feathers. my heart cantttt. Pleaseee bab nooo 😔
Damn, I just want to keep this character safe, and protect her for as long as I live. Excellent job with the Voice Acting on this one, as you really brought forth the emotional aspect!
Omg she is so pure and must be protected at all costs. When I heard her offer her feathers, I literally reached out my arms as if to gently stop hers. No more pain for her, please! Excellent job here!
Why.. Why's my heart breaking to pieces im feeling that my heart is tearing to so many part she has so little knowledge about the world around her i can feel the pain that's she's holding... to herself only to herself that really make my heart and soul ripped to a trillion pieces
Okay her reaction to the concept of tea is great, "it tastes like dirt, and bushes" that's adorable, how does she know what those taste like? Cute thing aside. Let's get real. I love what story you're telling, like a lot. It's deeply personal and I'm enjoying how it's presented, in the same way one would enjoy something ment to evoke an heartful emotion. Forgive me if I'm projecting a bit here. But the way they help each other, the angel and merchant are clearly stuck processing a lot of shit in their head. Merch has bad dreams, something is haunting him, angel doesn't remember much but what she does remember... is hurting. Merchant doesn't ask for the head pats, she just gives then, and likewise she never asks for her wings to be patched up we just know that they need to be. They get into a mini argument about who gets the clean sheets because neither wants the other to go without. They don't know how to ask for it, it's foreign to them. They know how to take care of others but not themselves. Merch's first instinct when she offers more headpats should they need it is to immediately change the subject, i feel that. Her first instinct when her wings are brought up is to try and pick more feathers, hurt herself more, because she thinks that's what makes her worthwhile, and that is real. She doesn't know what it's like to have someone care for her wings like that, they twing in response and she pushes back against the treatment because it stings. It takes a lot to overcome. And that almost made me cry... And then i hear these two things. "Why are you hurting me" and "I'm sorry, I'm sorry".... and then i did cry. Because that's it. That's the neon flashing sign. No matter what she's forgotten, what she doesn't understand deep down she's felt that betrayal, someone she trusted has hurt her before. and to apologize when she's being hurt. that doesn't come from naiveté that comes from having that behavior literally beaten into you. Soo I'm really glad you wrote it like this because I think that it's an important story to tell. and i really want to see these two work through this stuff because they are precious and deserve some happiness.
Whenever I'm in the presence of somebody that's nice to me, somebody I want to protect, I force myself to forget about my pain. They're my painkiller. Right now, nobody's here for me so this is my dose. I know I have to deal with my wounds at some point, but this keeps me going when I can't afford the leisure to heal
I've thought about what to say, what words to use to convey just how amazed I am by this. And I can't find any that get what I'm feeling across just well enough. Bravo, Dapper. Bravo.
This might sound a bit edgy but I always thought of myself as some bad guy like any other but this woke up something in me, something I haven't felt in in a very long time. You earned yourself a subscriber it may not be much but it's honest works.
Ah yes. 'Leaf water'. The term used by people who wish to insult the british and most of asia, instead of using the word 'tea' like a normal, functioning person. (It's ok, im joking. Though, tea is like, 30%of my persona)
Shhh… it’s okay, i know it burns, but it’ll get better, I promise… **hugs her** you’ll be fine, and NO ONE is gonna hurt you again… they’ll have to burn first
Girl: "I got blood on the bed. I sorry and I can give you my feathers. Me: "Wh- WHAT AM I GONNA DO WITH FEATHERS? TICKLE THE INN OWNER TO LET US LEAVE WITHOUT PAYING FOR THE BED. Alright before the Inn owner wakes up we will leave the key and jump through the window never to be seen again.
It's an angel! *Clears throat* sorry not that sort of angel. I have an attraction to NGE all the sudden. Your an actual angel, not one that's bound to destroy humanity. Your ok with me.
Thought I’d leave a comment about this one. I was really torn about whether I should have our little angel react so negatively to being treated at first. It’s highly emotional, and I’m sure it may not be everyone's cup of tea.
I decided to go through with it due to the story I’m trying to convey here. Our angel is not okay. She’s been through a lot. You can see that just from her wings. But it isn’t just about the physical pain she’s enduring. It’s about the mental. The trust she decides to put into you. The healing process. Not all pain subsides. And, sometimes, you must go through just a little more to begin to get better. To all my friends out there who are healing from something mentally, or physically…
Sometimes the pain has to get a little worse before it begins getting better. Sometimes, you must sacrifice comfort, or what’s become “the norm” to begin moving forward. Just remember, you are amazing, no matter what anyone or even that brain of yours says. I believe in you.
I liked that
sometimes healing does hurt a little
I am happy you were able to convey this.
Sometimes it's so easy to lose hope in people, and then you read something like this. :) Stay awesome.
UUUUGHHHH I HAVE BEEN WOUNDED EMOTIONALLY AND NOW IM CRYING QmQ headpats!! so much headpats n cuddles for the angel bab!!!
I kept screaming NO when she tries to get feathers. my heart cantttt. Pleaseee bab nooo 😔
Damn, I just want to keep this character safe, and protect her for as long as I live. Excellent job with the Voice Acting on this one, as you really brought forth the emotional aspect!
Omg she is so pure and must be protected at all costs. When I heard her offer her feathers, I literally reached out my arms as if to gently stop hers. No more pain for her, please! Excellent job here!
We need a part 3️⃣, great work as always!
Part 3 is on zee way!~
Why.. Why's my heart breaking to pieces im feeling that my heart is tearing to so many part she has so little knowledge about the world around her i can feel the pain that's she's holding... to herself only to herself that really make my heart and soul ripped to a trillion pieces
Okay her reaction to the concept of tea is great, "it tastes like dirt, and bushes" that's adorable, how does she know what those taste like?
Cute thing aside. Let's get real. I love what story you're telling, like a lot. It's deeply personal and I'm enjoying how it's presented, in the same way one would enjoy something ment to evoke an heartful emotion.
Forgive me if I'm projecting a bit here. But the way they help each other, the angel and merchant are clearly stuck processing a lot of shit in their head. Merch has bad dreams, something is haunting him, angel doesn't remember much but what she does remember... is hurting.
Merchant doesn't ask for the head pats, she just gives then, and likewise she never asks for her wings to be patched up we just know that they need to be. They get into a mini argument about who gets the clean sheets because neither wants the other to go without. They don't know how to ask for it, it's foreign to them. They know how to take care of others but not themselves. Merch's first instinct when she offers more headpats should they need it is to immediately change the subject, i feel that. Her first instinct when her wings are brought up is to try and pick more feathers, hurt herself more, because she thinks that's what makes her worthwhile, and that is real. She doesn't know what it's like to have someone care for her wings like that, they twing in response and she pushes back against the treatment because it stings. It takes a lot to overcome. And that almost made me cry...
And then i hear these two things. "Why are you hurting me" and "I'm sorry, I'm sorry".... and then i did cry. Because that's it. That's the neon flashing sign. No matter what she's forgotten, what she doesn't understand deep down she's felt that betrayal, someone she trusted has hurt her before. and to apologize when she's being hurt. that doesn't come from naiveté that comes from having that behavior literally beaten into you.
Soo I'm really glad you wrote it like this because I think that it's an important story to tell. and i really want to see these two work through this stuff because they are precious and deserve some happiness.
Thank you, High Roller.
Reading this... thank you.
Whenever I'm in the presence of somebody that's nice to me, somebody I want to protect, I force myself to forget about my pain. They're my painkiller. Right now, nobody's here for me so this is my dose. I know I have to deal with my wounds at some point, but this keeps me going when I can't afford the leisure to heal
I've thought about what to say, what words to use to convey just how amazed I am by this.
And I can't find any that get what I'm feeling across just well enough.
Bravo, Dapper.
Bravo.
The writing here is so top notch. Not to mention, I really, really like the thumbnail in this one ^^
I’d love to see this series continue someday. Its such a good story.
This might sound a bit edgy but I always thought of myself as some bad guy like any other but this woke up something in me, something I haven't felt in in a very long time. You earned yourself a subscriber it may not be much but it's honest works.
Must. Protect. The. Angel.
At all cost.
AT ALL COST.
I love this series so far. The story is very interesting. Not to mention Dapperlys voice is simply... ANGELIC.
I've seen her shining the sunlight cry g for her...now she wouldn't stay here....sje knows you wont let her down!😭
Well now I'm craving for some "leaf water" and some biscuits☕
Ah yes. 'Leaf water'. The term used by people who wish to insult the british and most of asia, instead of using the word 'tea' like a normal, functioning person. (It's ok, im joking. Though, tea is like, 30%of my persona)
When you say this, do you mean hot leaf juice? Or cold leaf juice?
i wasn't ready for this.
Super sweet audio, loved it
I look forward to more of this story. Keep it up 👍
Thank you so very much!
Plz part three! I'm so enraptured into this story
I'm so very, very happy to hear this, thank you! ♡
Part 3 is on the way~
**In the background, "The Truth" by Audiomachine playing**
Don't worry, I'm not crying; it's just some speck in the eyes. ;___;
I want to give her more head pats
Shhh… it’s okay, i know it burns, but it’ll get better, I promise… **hugs her** you’ll be fine, and NO ONE is gonna hurt you again… they’ll have to burn first
Ah, the sacred headpats.
I know about not wanting disinfectants because they hurt, I used to do it all the time with cuts and scraps and stuff.
Angel headpats? Yes please and problem.
(Nice job with the gasp at 7:15.)
Thank you!~
It's too early in the morning for this.
wow she cure the complication in my heart which something my doctor told me that he found during his operation on me
mcr reference:
guess the song
Head pats !!!!! Uuuuu
Girl: "I got blood on the bed. I sorry and I can give you my feathers.
Me: "Wh- WHAT AM I GONNA DO WITH FEATHERS? TICKLE THE INN OWNER TO LET US LEAVE WITHOUT PAYING FOR THE BED. Alright before the Inn owner wakes up we will leave the key and jump through the window never to be seen again.
Whyyyyyyy 😭😭😭😭
This series is great but... muh poor angel baby
It's an angel! *Clears throat* sorry not that sort of angel. I have an attraction to NGE all the sudden. Your an actual angel, not one that's bound to destroy humanity. Your ok with me.