First time I've written a ff with only Yn's Pov, there is no JK Pov in it. i don't know how its went. I really like ff with both Pov, so we can all understand the both character equally. But i thought of writting something out of my comfort zone, do let me know if you like the ff because honestly im little uncertain with this one.
see I'm not saying that the story is bad it's good. I loved the ending. But I will say the lack of Jungkook's pov makes his character looks like a jerk. Y/N's discomfort was evident and it looks like he didn't care at all in the start which is definitely the cause of not showing his POV. His character might be perfect but his actions without any pov look bad. I hope you understand what I mean. No offense. But I appreciate your hard work and efforts
Everything was touching and lovely 🌹❤but the part where Ginni asks, " Do you want snakes?" had me rolling 😂. Not to mock you dear author and you truly made my day. Thx a lot and 💜 u
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First time I've written a ff with only Yn's Pov, there is no JK Pov in it. i don't know how its went. I really like ff with both Pov, so we can all understand the both character equally.
But i thought of writting something out of my comfort zone, do let me know if you like the ff because honestly im little uncertain with this one.
U are the best pls make more ff's with yn pov pls cause it is so good
Sometimes It van gives more excitement when you don’t give away all the thoughts. It makes us wonder “WHY “ ! I think It is a good way! 👍🏼
see I'm not saying that the story is bad it's good. I loved the ending. But I will say the lack of Jungkook's pov makes his character looks like a jerk. Y/N's discomfort was evident and it looks like he didn't care at all in the start which is definitely the cause of not showing his POV. His character might be perfect but his actions without any pov look bad. I hope you understand what I mean. No offense. But I appreciate your hard work and efforts
Its thrilling u know... carryon
@@Crystal14325you're right about that
I just love the way her mom wanted her to go and doll her up
Every ffs you make is always a masterpiece author... and this oneshot is added in the collection..
Wow author you should try writing a book your writing skills are next level.
Everything was touching and lovely 🌹❤but the part where Ginni asks, " Do you want snakes?" had me rolling 😂. Not to mock you dear author and you truly made my day. Thx a lot and 💜 u
It was amazing ff and perfect ending for this ff.
Great story! 👍Very cute and I like the storyline . ' First love' feeling 💜 Hope it will last forever feeling!🩵
In our imagination, i will.
Very romantic. Love it!
It was so much beautiful and lovely wow...❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It’s really amazing and fantastic. I love and enjoyed it a lot. It’s really interesting and unique. Thanks author for this ff of yours.
🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
new subscriber author......loved the ff
Fierce Queen next part plz
Awesome dude just superb
Awwwwwww💕💕💕💕 this was soo cute
This was so good ❤
Awwwwww amazing
Love it 😘😊😉🥰❤️😀💖😘😘😘
Excellent story!
Fabulous ❤️
It was ❤❤❤❤ I ❤it
Bonus
What about Fierce queen sweety??
Saturday or maybe Monday.
First
Tht Cringe me
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Thank you for Watching. ❤