You've got a good sound, loved the strawberry jam song you created and this is on par. Obviously like anyone still a lot to learn, but you have potential. That much is clear. Good luck if this is a path you plan to pursue. If not, no problem, still great songs you've made so far.
Chapter 6 (PLUNGE) "Reverb and Mute dove into the waters along the lake as the vibrations of every sound surrounded the two of them. It was surreal for Reverb to finally hear something again after the SilenTerrors stole it from her. Every motion they made within the depths of the water brought tears to Reverb's eyes; Was this the sound that she had stolen from her? How could she ever regain it? Reverb couldn't question it for very long though as Mute was calling out for Reverb to resurface with her, reaching an arm out to her in order to pull Reverb out. Upset, all Reverb could only lash out at her in anger before getting out of the water, leaving Mute there in the lake alone. As Mute began to go take chase after Reverb, something grabbed her leg - something different than the SilenTerrors before, she would have definitely heard them - and began to pull her back down under the water and into the depths of the lake below..." Saw you didn't make a cool lore description this time, so I'm head-canoning this now :3
Yoooo this is literally what I was going for. I wanted some type of conflict to occur that would hinder Mute’s abilities as she began her next journey in the waters! Could I finish the lore of “Plunge” with this as inspiration?
You've got a good sound, loved the strawberry jam song you created and this is on par. Obviously like anyone still a lot to learn, but you have potential. That much is clear. Good luck if this is a path you plan to pursue. If not, no problem, still great songs you've made so far.
Thank you so much. A truly appreciate your feedback 💙
Chapter 6 (PLUNGE)
"Reverb and Mute dove into the waters along the lake as the vibrations of every sound surrounded the two of them. It was surreal for Reverb to finally hear something again after the SilenTerrors stole it from her. Every motion they made within the depths of the water brought tears to Reverb's eyes; Was this the sound that she had stolen from her? How could she ever regain it? Reverb couldn't question it for very long though as Mute was calling out for Reverb to resurface with her, reaching an arm out to her in order to pull Reverb out. Upset, all Reverb could only lash out at her in anger before getting out of the water, leaving Mute there in the lake alone. As Mute began to go take chase after Reverb, something grabbed her leg - something different than the SilenTerrors before, she would have definitely heard them - and began to pull her back down under the water and into the depths of the lake below..."
Saw you didn't make a cool lore description this time, so I'm head-canoning this now :3
Yoooo this is literally what I was going for. I wanted some type of conflict to occur that would hinder Mute’s abilities as she began her next journey in the waters! Could I finish the lore of “Plunge” with this as inspiration?
@@GamerHearts of course dude!
BABE WAKE UP, NEW KYLE SONG DROPEDDD, LETS GO BB
We got a “BABE” wake up again!
Love it!
Thank you!
I really like it! Was there any inspiration involved in this piece?
My main inspirations for this are Celeste and kingdom hearts 😄