Key things to note about this fic for those looking for a description. (Only 27 mins in) This story is essentially a whole different Naruto verse. Minato isn’t the 4th instead Dan (Tsunade’s fiancé) is. Itachi is Sasuke’s twin. Naruto is a red head who gains the knowledge of his parentage and burden at 10 years old. Some OC’s in play.
I don't mind changing cannon, but this story deviates too far from the original. It's too complicated for unnecessary reasons. This author has done what I have recommended to other authors not to do, which is if it doesn't enhance your story. Don't Chand yet, but this one's just changing facts and stuff for no apparent reason. Cause it doesn't enhance the story. And it's one after the other so the story is kind of hard to follow and doesn't truly feel like the Naruto story. It's like somebody used the character's names. Use the background of the world, but the main character does not feel like Naruto. I wish this author all the best. I hope people enjoy this story. But I have to stop listening to it because of all the unnecessary convoluted plot line.
I can understand what you mean and i am not against your opinion, i will simply state my own in regards to yours in a way that is respectful. It seems as though the fan fic creator decided to do something that few do and actually make it fan fiction. I feel like a lot of stories try too hard to stick to the original and make Naruto seem as though he isn't allowed to have a brain or function as a competent shinobi. It also sucks that naruto isnt as bitter as he should be. In the canon story, naruto is very naive for a person growing up alone and surviving the villages scorn. Especially with the type of environment the grow up in; kill or be killed. Nobody would allow that type of treatment without trying to find out why. Especially when they are constantly asking and nobody seems to want to tell them. Every kid becomes curious and id think a ninja child would be doubly so. Dan is also a great choice for hokage because it fits his trope from tbe story. He always wanted to be hokage so it isnt far fetched that if he lived, it would be possible. Lastly, the idea of the multiverse should allow you to separate og naruto from any fan fic story to enjoy it. Im sure people enjoyed the zombie avengers in what if, even if it doesn't fit the original marvel narrative, as well as into the spiderverse
Key things to note about this fic for those looking for a description. (Only 27 mins in) This story is essentially a whole different Naruto verse. Minato isn’t the 4th instead Dan (Tsunade’s fiancé) is. Itachi is Sasuke’s twin. Naruto is a red head who gains the knowledge of his parentage and burden at 10 years old. Some OC’s in play.
we went from the middle of jugo vs choji to temari vs kim.....smh
It’s only been 1 hour and I fucking love this
This is what I think the perfect sounds like 🎉
We need part 2 asap
What’s the fanfic called
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Please mak part 2
What the fuck did Shikamaru do
THAT WAS MY QUESTION, WHY TF HE HAD TO DIE
@@KamiNoYami813 it be like that sometimes
Fanfic name?
part 2 when?
I don't mind changing cannon, but this story deviates too far from the original. It's too complicated for unnecessary reasons. This author has done what I have recommended to other authors not to do, which is if it doesn't enhance your story. Don't Chand yet, but this one's just changing facts and stuff for no apparent reason. Cause it doesn't enhance the story. And it's one after the other so the story is kind of hard to follow and doesn't truly feel like the Naruto story. It's like somebody used the character's names. Use the background of the world, but the main character does not feel like Naruto. I wish this author all the best. I hope people enjoy this story. But I have to stop listening to it because of all the unnecessary convoluted plot line.
I can understand what you mean and i am not against your opinion, i will simply state my own in regards to yours in a way that is respectful. It seems as though the fan fic creator decided to do something that few do and actually make it fan fiction. I feel like a lot of stories try too hard to stick to the original and make Naruto seem as though he isn't allowed to have a brain or function as a competent shinobi. It also sucks that naruto isnt as bitter as he should be. In the canon story, naruto is very naive for a person growing up alone and surviving the villages scorn. Especially with the type of environment the grow up in; kill or be killed. Nobody would allow that type of treatment without trying to find out why. Especially when they are constantly asking and nobody seems to want to tell them. Every kid becomes curious and id think a ninja child would be doubly so. Dan is also a great choice for hokage because it fits his trope from tbe story. He always wanted to be hokage so it isnt far fetched that if he lived, it would be possible. Lastly, the idea of the multiverse should allow you to separate og naruto from any fan fic story to enjoy it. Im sure people enjoyed the zombie avengers in what if, even if it doesn't fit the original marvel narrative, as well as into the spiderverse