Maybe i have a great feedback for you, to turn things more eyecatching make the phases separed by worlds(Water, Fire, Air, Earth and things like that), Every world have different trophies to catch and when you get all, you receive a different trophy for completing and receive a new move, that can help you through another worlds. Like de Gliding could be a move received in the water world and can access areas in the air world that can't be before just like a metroidvania. If you want more ideas i can join you in a discord and test and help in ideas, i'm a game designer and like that part of the creation :D
I know these kind of videos are supposed to be informative most of the time but holy crap Shelfman you're making me laugh left and right XD Edit : (just realized this comment can be taken as an insult , I really mean it your edits are really funny and kinda remind me of Lixian from LixianTV)
0:18 have you even tried to be Jonas? Maybe you would like it. Jonas can be Jonas, why can't you Really like the feedback you give. You're quickly getting it across without lingering too long on a specific detail.
Hey! I made the sewers, it was my first time making a game that had a goal of some sort, it's super bad and was me testing out ai coding, it was not my best work in the slightest, love seeing something I made appear on TH-cam though! Thanks!
Also, there were a ton of bugs that I noticed and things I forgot to put in (like batteries) I completely agree on everything you mentioned about the game
Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed the video. I don't think it was bad at all! I think it was great considering it was your first game with some type of goal. I'm sure that you could make something even greater now. Keep up the great work😁
@@TheShelfman I'm trying! Lol my current project is a boomer shooter similar to classic quake or doom, and yes, there is way more audio in this game lol
Thanks! When selecting games, I try to pick games that I would like to play/give feedback for, as well as games that viewers would find fun/interesting to watch. So it's not usually based on 2D or 3D😁
Thank you really much for playing Spikair Volleyball. It's really nice to have your feedbacks :) The demo will be available on monday if you wanna see the current game which is far from this Alpha ♥ Do you think we can ask IKEA for sponsorship ? :D
I genuinely loved it! I'll be sure to check out the demo. If done right, I could definitely see myself spending some time on this! And YES go get that IKEA sponsorship 😂
World of Contraptions seems to be cool to play, I will have a look at it :D I was frustrated there was no indication where to find it (like you did by showing Steam page for Spikair Volleyball). Question: where do I submit my game to the next round? Nice initiative, I liked it and the feedbacks quite useful as well
Oh good point. I completely forgot adding the games to the description 😅 When I will be making another one of these, I'll announce it on my community tab! Thanks! Glad you liked it 😁
Honestly, I've been playing FIFA for like 16 years or so. While it's not spectacular, it can be so much fun! I thought it was funny😂 but I also think it could be helpful to see why it would make the villain less scary. If it makes me think of a cow in Minecraft, I'll probably laugh haha Who knows, maybe next time?👀
@@TheShelfman For 16 years? That's nice mate! I'm also in since elementary school which was ages ago haha! I used to have a friend who was beating me for like one and a half-decade before I was on pair with him, haha, but for a while now I'm the better, woo! ^^ :D (he has no time for FIFA since he is a father of two :'D) You were right about the cow! :D And it was funny... I just feel the pain of the dev, too haha Well, it will come! ^^
world of contraptions' i think biggest flaw is that there is NO graphic settings (maybe they added it already idk) and all the textures/models are super high quality and i have a crappy pc so at a quarter of my native resolution i have like 30fps
Hey! I'll keep doing these every now and then, so if you want me to play your game, be sure to subscribe and keep an eye on the community tab where I'll be announcing the video and asking for games😁 Thanks for wanting me to play your game!
I love this format seeing other peoples games and having an interesting feedback on them it was just equally entertaining as jonas videos really cool to watch pls more
Someone needs to tell indie devs that reading tutorials sucks. Just seeing the number of pages on a single point would make me skip then eventually hate the game because i didn't read the instructions.
Hi there, like your videos and jonas's videos so much,and I learn a lot from you , and I just hade lunch my firest game on steam too, is there any chance that you can try my game and give me some feedback or advice to improve my game become better, if you can, that will means a lot for me ;) ps:the game name is "Battlefield priest",a simple strage war defence game
Check out Jonas's video as well😁
th-cam.com/video/K-t3u_fDK6k/w-d-xo.html&ab_channel=JonasTyroller
Fun video. I think when deep fakes get to the next level you'll be able to make these videos for me.
Guess I should start practicing already then😂
i will practice having a deepfake of shelf make a deepfake of you that should actually be a video lmao
Thanks so much for playing Lucent Bounds and providing feedback! I'm embarrassed by the music bug, but will get it fixed!
Thanks for watching! I hope my feedback is useful 😁
And don't worry about the music bug! It happens, trust me, I know😂
Maybe i have a great feedback for you, to turn things more eyecatching make the phases separed by worlds(Water, Fire, Air, Earth and things like that), Every world have different trophies to catch and when you get all, you receive a different trophy for completing and receive a new move, that can help you through another worlds. Like de Gliding could be a move received in the water world and can access areas in the air world that can't be before just like a metroidvania. If you want more ideas i can join you in a discord and test and help in ideas, i'm a game designer and like that part of the creation :D
These are the tidiest sewers I've ever seen
For real though. We like clean looking sewers that are easily accessible and walkable 😂
I know these kind of videos are supposed to be informative most of the time but holy crap Shelfman you're making me laugh left and right XD
Edit : (just realized this comment can be taken as an insult , I really mean it your edits are really funny and kinda remind me of Lixian from LixianTV)
Hahaha don't worry I took it as a compliment! Thank you, I'm glad you find it funny too as that's what I'm always trying to achieve haha
0:18 have you even tried to be Jonas? Maybe you would like it. Jonas can be Jonas, why can't you
Really like the feedback you give. You're quickly getting it across without lingering too long on a specific detail.
You're right, I should have at least tried😂
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that😁
@@TheShelfman Yeah, you're not Jonas. I'm mad!
Those were some great games and you give really good feedback!
Thanks man! Appreciate that very much😁
Hey! I made the sewers, it was my first time making a game that had a goal of some sort, it's super bad and was me testing out ai coding, it was not my best work in the slightest, love seeing something I made appear on TH-cam though! Thanks!
Also, there were a ton of bugs that I noticed and things I forgot to put in (like batteries) I completely agree on everything you mentioned about the game
Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed the video. I don't think it was bad at all! I think it was great considering it was your first game with some type of goal.
I'm sure that you could make something even greater now. Keep up the great work😁
@@TheShelfman I'm trying! Lol my current project is a boomer shooter similar to classic quake or doom, and yes, there is way more audio in this game lol
"the invisible walls should be red" 😆
It would make things so much easier, visibility wise😭😂
Great Video man! 🌞
Would love to see some 2D games with interesting gameplay as well, not only overpolished 3D games 😂🔥
Thanks! When selecting games, I try to pick games that I would like to play/give feedback for, as well as games that viewers would find fun/interesting to watch. So it's not usually based on 2D or 3D😁
Amazingly fun video as always! Those are some cool games.
A few tips I picked up myself :p
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and found it useful!😁
Incredible video! I love the feedback,
I learned some stuff too.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you found the video useful 😁
It’s very clear what everything does
Immediately after: so i don’t know what any of these things do
7:52
Hahahaha that's just incredible timing😂
But the first was about the UI and the latter about the objects😂
very fun video xD
Thanks!
9:40 I have anxiety now🥴🥴
Same here😬
Noice
Great video :)
Thank you😁
Thank you really much for playing Spikair Volleyball. It's really nice to have your feedbacks :)
The demo will be available on monday if you wanna see the current game which is far from this Alpha ♥
Do you think we can ask IKEA for sponsorship ? :D
I genuinely loved it! I'll be sure to check out the demo. If done right, I could definitely see myself spending some time on this!
And YES go get that IKEA sponsorship 😂
Nice minimalist artstyle, very pleasing
It looked so nice!
@@TheShelfman If you feel you could smash more balls, the demo is available on Steam and we'd be happy to read your feedbacks (MP Twitter ♥) :D
Great video! You gave some great feedback, hope those devs decide to use it!
Thanks Saul! I really hope so as well😁
World of Contraptions seems to be cool to play, I will have a look at it :D I was frustrated there was no indication where to find it (like you did by showing Steam page for Spikair Volleyball).
Question: where do I submit my game to the next round?
Nice initiative, I liked it and the feedbacks quite useful as well
Oh good point. I completely forgot adding the games to the description 😅
When I will be making another one of these, I'll announce it on my community tab!
Thanks! Glad you liked it 😁
I love FIFA, and I'm also ashamed. x))
Like a cow in Minecraft lol, poor dev :D
I'm afraid this isn't THE VIDEO. So when is THE VIDEO coming? :))
Honestly, I've been playing FIFA for like 16 years or so. While it's not spectacular, it can be so much fun!
I thought it was funny😂 but I also think it could be helpful to see why it would make the villain less scary. If it makes me think of a cow in Minecraft, I'll probably laugh haha
Who knows, maybe next time?👀
@@TheShelfman For 16 years? That's nice mate! I'm also in since elementary school which was ages ago haha! I used to have a friend who was beating me for like one and a half-decade before I was on pair with him, haha, but for a while now I'm the better, woo! ^^ :D (he has no time for FIFA since he is a father of two :'D)
You were right about the cow! :D And it was funny... I just feel the pain of the dev, too haha
Well, it will come! ^^
I didn’t see the German! 😡
I meannnn he's in the intro😬
PLEASE DON'T SHOOT ME😭😭😭
"It'c clearly going for a yellow and blue kinda theme" Ah yes, the floor is made of floor
I love floors made of floor. But those made of not floor are not as cool
@@TheShelfman He's speaking the language of god
That volleyball game 😱I like these animations. Damn, they are so gooood
Definitely! The storepage shows the new gameplay and that looks incredible too!
@@TheShelfman i dont know why, but it reminds me so much of International Karate for C64. but much smoother animations :D
Those games looked more interesting than on Jonas Video.
Hahaha maybe the difference is that I didn't choose puzzle games, and since Jonas loves puzzle games, he's more likely to pick those!
world of contraptions' i think biggest flaw is that there is NO graphic settings (maybe they added it already idk) and all the textures/models are super high quality and i have a crappy pc so at a quarter of my native resolution i have like 30fps
Oh wow, didn't know that. I hope that gets fixed!
Bro woke and and decided to become Jonas (please don't take this seriously I love your channel I'm just joking lol)
@@barigamb lolll what's fun is that Jonas actually asked me if I wanted to make this video as he had way too many submissions at the time
Damm that was a really cool video now i want to see you review you my game too, thanks you for your awsome edits and information Mann :))
Thanks! I'll definitely be doing this more often and I'll announce it next time on my community tab😁
Hello, I hava a question. how can i send to you my game to take a part in this kind of video?
Hey! I'll keep doing these every now and then, so if you want me to play your game, be sure to subscribe and keep an eye on the community tab where I'll be announcing the video and asking for games😁
Thanks for wanting me to play your game!
Amazing video!
Thank you 😁
Bespoke
When I saw the title I had a mild panic attack that you found one of my old games.
But what if I did👀
@@TheShelfman I would feel very sorry for you.
I love this format seeing other peoples games and having an interesting feedback on them it was just equally entertaining as jonas videos really cool to watch pls more
Thank you so much! I'll definitely be doing more in the future 😁
Someone needs to tell indie devs that reading tutorials sucks. Just seeing the number of pages on a single point would make me skip then eventually hate the game because i didn't read the instructions.
Hi there, like your videos and jonas's videos so much,and I learn a lot from you , and I just hade lunch my firest game on steam too,
is there any chance that you can try my game and give me some feedback or advice to improve my game become better, if you can, that will means a lot for me ;)
ps:the game name is "Battlefield priest",a simple strage war defence game
yo i have a question, are you german? you have a slight accent but im not really sure if its german or not
It's actually Dutch haha
@@TheShelfman oh, thats pretty cool!
finally a video, yes!
Yesss! I got some cool new ideas as well!
This is so fun to watch
Thanks 😁
Great editing lol
Thanks 😁
3:46 🤣
It was perfect 😂
Awesome video. Some great games, great laughs and great feedback
Thanks Tauheed!
Awsome stuff, very fun!
Thank you 😁
Fun video, you also gave good feedback! :)
Thank you so much!
hello jon editor
Hello joyboii
@@TheShelfman i hope you are having a day today