When Eve told OP what to expect from now on, I lagged my A$$ off!! Also, did anyone notice the irony of a partner in a law firm making a direct threat to kill OP in front of a bunch of cops? 😂😂😂
This is not hard to do. Tom has GPS on his phone which would have made sense. With the GPS the location would have been a dead on lock. Eve's recording and video was enough to bring them in. The 15 men with AR-15s make this kidnapping and extortion. They now can find the other victims through Eve. This guy should be in jail for a very long time.
What would have made it a great ending...Darrin, the "super alpha", meeting some "nice" anti-mol**ters in the big house as he had planned for our hero. But, it was a federal prison, different "clientele".
What I like about this story: - Short and well written. No half hour of listening to how Thomas courted Janice in college and hearing how she did / didn't cheat on him back then. - MC (Thomas) gets to hear what was planned for him without having to endure it. - The execution of Thomas' plan was quick and the planning that went into it was explained without spending a half hour hearing every phone call and conversation. What I wish were better: - The fate of Darren and Janice The story says Thomas had 'friends' inside, so why not add a few sentences about their fate. I wanted to hear how they suffered.
I kinda hoped ,since the so called alpha male was facing life the bogus charges against the other husbands be expunged.He had voice recording of Eve as evidence,and others to turn states evidence.
Yes overlooking allowing the cell phones was a major flaw. It could have been dealt with by 'hero' seizing 'trainer's' phone, or "dealing with" their guard like an "enemy sentry"; story left plenty room for something like that. The falsely imprisoned former victims, I suppose may be inferred to be treated by related forthcoming legal process, but again, story left room to at least mention that. Interesting and sickening how contemporary "America," with it's "eqsteins,"* etc. leaves this not so far fetched!
@@lpoerscatalya8914 Send her a video of her AP getting done in prison and then servicing all the homeboys on his knees just like she was wanting to see her husband do 😂
Could there be a story, like this one, where MC is just a street smart guy, a quickdraw champion, or just ordinary guy who escape this trap? Or....hes an "accountant" for some cartels/mob? Or a "special enforcer" for cartel/mob. Make it russian, they were cruel
this is very similar to a story of the guy on a weekend into the mountains and escaped by burning down the bridge in and out turns out it is the same story tweaked and shortened but this is shorter and could be shorter without the doubling up at around the 4 - 7 min mark i can not believe a marine would go in this unprepared if i was going in unprepared but suspicious. i would already have teed up potential backup and had the spare keys secreted in my luggage wouldnt be surprised if the rooms are wired for visual and audio so their room is actually in lockdown. no red flags huh and in describing ops name...no mention of the confederate general of that name........ i was right...he was prepared.
Apparently, most went with the program, but yes, it would have been nice if they had said that part of the charges included the framing of those men who are now in prison for crimes they did not commit. Maybe some crooked judges and prison wardens are involved too.
This ahole lawyer disregard the first rule warfare. It's about intelligence and fuel. The fool disregarded the intelligence portion by not doing a background check on his "prey."
I have never heard of the country and western singer named Stonewall Jackson and I know my country and western music that I have heard of a confederate general who was killed by his own troops by the name of Stonewall Jackson
Probably talking about Alan Jackson. Edit:Guess I was wrong about AJ. Did a quick search, and there was a singer named Stonewall Jackson back in the day.
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@@LostLoveChronicles I can understand that. However, even if it is old footage you could still solve the problem by inserting the plot in the comments. The same procedure you did now by replying to me
When Eve told OP what to expect from now on, I lagged my A$$ off!!
Also, did anyone notice the irony of a partner in a law firm making a direct threat to kill OP in front of a bunch of cops? 😂😂😂
LOL, kidnapping, drugging, assault, threat of murder and extortion. Fun story.👍
Damn, sounds like some James Bond shit 😂
This is not hard to do. Tom has GPS on his phone which would have made sense. With the GPS the location would have been a dead on lock. Eve's recording and video was enough to bring them in. The 15 men with AR-15s make this kidnapping and extortion. They now can find the other victims through Eve. This guy should be in jail for a very long time.
What would have made it a great ending...Darrin, the "super alpha", meeting some "nice" anti-mol**ters in the big house as he had planned for our hero. But, it was a federal prison, different "clientele".
What I like about this story:
- Short and well written. No half hour of listening to how Thomas courted Janice in college and hearing how she did / didn't cheat on him back then.
- MC (Thomas) gets to hear what was planned for him without having to endure it.
- The execution of Thomas' plan was quick and the planning that went into it was explained without spending a half hour hearing every phone call and conversation.
What I wish were better:
- The fate of Darren and Janice The story says Thomas had 'friends' inside, so why not add a few sentences about their fate. I wanted to hear how they suffered.
good story. I hope he and the other marine get together
That would be fun and it would be nice to see more stories connecting them working together.👍
Sounds like a diddy freak off party!!🤣🤣🤣🤣
The dream about death is ironic, the death of his marriage
While they didn't say I believe that the phone call was a code to let his dad know bad crap was happening and to be ready for the raid.
great story, cheater never deserved love, forgiveness. This story reminds my ex.... Bad bad chick
Janice would have a Viking funeral very fast
Someone needs to learn the difference between Calvary and Cavalry. 🙄
Or Calgary
someone can AI can not.
her new position was the open town bicycle
Thomas "Stonewall" Jackson 😆.
Hahaha
And he died 10 years ago...only if this story happened in the 1870s.
"Stonewall Jackson"
We told ya, we'll rise again, brother!
It would have to r-rated. Also no one on the compound gets out alive!
Listening to the beginning of this, I wondered how he would leave that place in one piece.
Wow... boss man wanted to pull a Diddy on him. Glad he was a true marine!
Ha!
Good story 👏 Thanks 😊
I kinda hoped ,since the so called alpha male was facing life the bogus charges against the other husbands be expunged.He had voice recording of Eve as evidence,and others to turn states evidence.
So with all the preparation, they never took all the cell phones? Also, what about all the men that were falsely imprisoned?
Yes overlooking allowing the cell phones was a major flaw. It could have been dealt with by 'hero' seizing 'trainer's' phone, or "dealing with" their guard like an "enemy sentry"; story left plenty room for something like that. The falsely imprisoned former victims, I suppose may be inferred to be treated by related forthcoming legal process, but again, story left room to at least mention that. Interesting and sickening how contemporary "America," with it's "eqsteins,"* etc. leaves this not so far fetched!
We already called the Innocence Project.
Cell phone jammer
Janice. The ultimate 304. Why don't these guys see through this garbage ? The writing is like Shakespeare. All on the wall
I see a bunch of gravestones in their future.😅
Good story. A good plot, without flourishes, direct and that kept me interested. Thanks for the post.
Crazy 😧 to accept this all condition. 😮
they would have to kill me first. I would got out fighting
@@kdeville87 same go all out
@@lpoerscatalya8914 Send her a video of her AP getting done in prison and then servicing all the homeboys on his knees just like she was wanting to see her husband do 😂
What a wild story.
Who died after his dream…..
I do believe it was the marriage that died!
His marriage 😅
Never piss off the Marines
Thanks!
Loads of love for you
Could there be a story, like this one, where MC is just a street smart guy, a quickdraw champion, or just ordinary guy who escape this trap?
Or....hes an "accountant" for some cartels/mob?
Or a "special enforcer" for cartel/mob. Make it russian, they were cruel
Hopefully they're able to get the other men out of prison, if they're still alive.
So all paralegals cheat and lawers feel they are super entitled idiots
I am not sure ... nice story . But would a wife accept this for her husband ? Is this not a bridge to far ?
Ah yes Stonewall Jackson the country music star not the Confederate army general lol
My G G Grandfather was named Stonewall Jackson Newsome. Very popular to use SJ.
this is very similar to a story of the guy on a weekend into the mountains and escaped by burning down the bridge in and out
turns out it is the same story tweaked and shortened
but this is shorter and could be shorter without the doubling up at around the 4 - 7 min mark
i can not believe a marine would go in this unprepared
if i was going in unprepared but suspicious. i would already have teed up potential backup and had the spare keys secreted in my luggage
wouldnt be surprised if the rooms are wired for visual and audio
so their room is actually in lockdown. no red flags huh
and in describing ops name...no mention of the confederate general of that name........
i was right...he was prepared.
Wrong use of ARDENT.
Good one. Short and to the point without any unnecessary BS 👍👍
Short an to the point I loved it I wonder why people think they are immuned to the law
People will do anything for a promotion. Damm that.
Excellent story!
Could not help but laugh listening to this.
I love stories like this
Incomplete story what about husband's who wrongly accused and suffered 😬😬
Apparently, most went with the program, but yes, it would have been nice if they had said that part of the charges included the framing of those men who are now in prison for crimes they did not commit. Maybe some crooked judges and prison wardens are involved too.
Ford 150 4 wheel drive pickup. are there ford F150 2 wheel bicycles ?
Great story.
Great story 🎉🎉
Great story 🙂
What f with the Wrong man
This ahole lawyer disregard the first rule warfare. It's about intelligence and fuel. The fool disregarded the intelligence portion by not doing a background check on his "prey."
I have never heard of the country and western singer named Stonewall Jackson and I know my country and western music that I have heard of a confederate general who was killed by his own troops by the name of Stonewall Jackson
Probably talking about Alan Jackson.
Edit:Guess I was wrong about AJ. Did a quick search, and there was a singer named Stonewall Jackson back in the day.
Yeah#1
Sheriff Bob is the man !!!!!
Repetitive question.....Because there is no story plot in the story information box ?
Please don't put a ❤ as you usually do but write a response .
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@@LostLoveChronicles I can understand that. However, even if it is old footage you could still solve the problem by inserting the plot in the comments. The same procedure you did now by replying to me
@@alessandrolozio5373 will be done
JZ as always 😅
Waaay too short lol
Wait........WHAT??????😮
😅😅😊
Janice. Town bicycle