Hey y’all, BJ here once again. As we listen to this epic tale, I encourage you to provide feedback. I had a lot of fun writing this one. It was truly unique and I am finishing it as I write this. Shout out to Dark Sage! Enjoy!
This most likely will be good also I am sad about the jinchurik brother what if why did the author not what to do next. And of course the glorious king is back!
There are enough chapters for one more part. it would be nice if they finished, though. I might just have to write my own version of the jinckuriki's brother concept
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS VIDEO ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Brother, this is a story written by me. I have gone into writing fan fics with the commitment to finish everyone of them that I write. Just enjoy the ride!
I really don’t like Naruto staying in the leaf either. (Says the guy who has written three fics with Naruto in the Leaf) that being said, it is challenging to keep an engaging world that is tied to the timeline when he leaves the leaf.
@@lewiscoronel2984 definitely more to come my friend. Plus, right after this one, I have already written most of "What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant". So, look forward to that.
Hey y’all, BJ here once again. As we listen to this epic tale, I encourage you to provide feedback. I had a lot of fun writing this one. It was truly unique and I am finishing it as I write this. Shout out to Dark Sage! Enjoy!
Yo man a huge fan of your work
@@meenahuria7445 thanks, that means a lot. I am not a great author but I have been enjoying writing these fics out.
So just finished it loving this please continue this is the kind of Naruto I wanted accept the female part
And also don't take this as me oppressing women that's just my thoughts that was original was created that's what I am going with
@@meenahuria7445 the female part? If this is about the harem I can admit that I got a little wild and fun with it.
Orochimaru would be so proud of Anko for leaving the village
I wonder if they will meet
1:57:30 did Madara just rage quit his own life??😂
Just started and saw this and now I'm wondering
Lmao
Yesss let’s gooo hopefully the video burts last a little longer so I can binge watch when I come back from my trip
This story is 260k words. There will be plenty for you to listen to
Huh
😊😊😊
This most likely will be good also I am sad about the jinchurik brother what if why did the author not what to do next. And of course the glorious king is back!
There are enough chapters for one more part. it would be nice if they finished, though. I might just have to write my own version of the jinckuriki's brother concept
Hey woah woah woah why the Fugaku hate😂 my man had the better looking MS pattern 😭
Man I hope naruto has Samui, Yugito , Fu, Mei, and Tsunade as girlfriends and become his wife’s
Hmm, I got a little wild with the girls so I hope you enjoy.
@@bradleykucera6371 oh really 😏😏😏 I can’t wait
@@16jerrell you shan’t be disappointed
TSUNADE!!!! thats his god/grandmother!!!
@@kaylight4841 yea but their are sometimes other fanfics she’s not and he has her his girlfriend, fiancé, and wife
Absolutely love this story keep up the good work ❤
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS VIDEO ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This should be good but I'm worried abt all the other unfinished stories
Brother, this is a story written by me. I have gone into writing fan fics with the commitment to finish everyone of them that I write. Just enjoy the ride!
@@bradleykucera6371I loved the time travel one too
@@KingAB1534time travel you say
@@itzwillyboy2377 Yeah that's Kami's Blessing one
Part 2 please this is awesome
I need more of this story
More is coming, got another 10-12 hours already written
Yes part 2 please
1:26:31 😂rhyme contatious or what?😂
Aw man this is going to look good
Hope you enjoy and please let me know what you think
@@bradleykucera6371 oh don’t you worry i will let you know
@@16jerrell please do
@@bradleykucera6371ok I’ll say this I love it and give 9.4 /10
@@bradleykucera6371the way of naruto training like he was teen gohan I can imagine that
Part 2 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Part 2 please 🔥🔥🔥🔥
This is written out to 260k words. Should have end finalized by end of week. Enjoy!
Please release the next part of this series because I love it so much
thanks for the high praise. Sage has this ready to roll out so I will honor his schedule.
when I heard A gulp at kushinas smile then I thought na hell na its disgusting so I dropped this fic (don't judge me)
I love this story 🤩👍💖💖💖💖
Thanks! Much appreciated!
I'm at 1:40:30 and im loving it!!!!
Glad to hear it. It only ramps up from there.
Good story keep it going 🎉
It will be written to completion my friend.
@@bradleykucera6371 you are a bad ass
7:10 WHAT?!!🤯
Love this story not a lot of censors kiss isn't censored woo hoo
Part two plssss
part 2 pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2 please
Pls part two
May i make a request what if ? It is called. echoes by: kagaseo
Its about naruto meeting other versions of themselves.
Story status: completed
next part pls
3:15:51 oh!😮
I love any story that gets Naruto away from the leaf and hinata there part of his prison
I really don’t like Naruto staying in the leaf either. (Says the guy who has written three fics with Naruto in the Leaf) that being said, it is challenging to keep an engaging world that is tied to the timeline when he leaves the leaf.
@bradleykucera6371 I understand thanks for the story so far can't wait to hear more
@@lewiscoronel2984 definitely more to come my friend. Plus, right after this one, I have already written most of "What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant". So, look forward to that.
Thanks can't wait
I never said this word and I don’t want tell anyone but… I think he’s cute
Can we have part 2 please 🙏
1:02:10 ... tss!
Part 2
sup
Just Dark Sage bringing another one of my stories to life for you guys. Hope you enjoy.
Hi
Always a harem or mating thing to ruin a story
a female kyuubi is always a turn off for a fanfic
Part 2 please.