We wrote TERRIBLE Warrior Cats Fanfiction
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 29 ก.ค. 2024
- I wrote a Warrior Cats fanfiction using nothing but your comments! The result is exactly what you would expect...
Squirrelflight/Leafpool's voice by Voice my Opinion: / @voicemyopinion4813
The cat art is by Missy Dakota!
Her Patreon: / missydakota
Her DeviantArt: www.deviantart.com/missydakota
Intro by Lapis Feder: / @lady_luzifer
Talk sprites by Gee: / gee_lly - บันเทิง
"Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels." *oh no*
She technically didn't know about that (maybe, idk)
😂😂🤣🤣🤣
Her pie was burning, she was gonna use a “follow the Warrior code “ potion in it and save everyone from an over used plot line idea.
Haha!
Lps Maddie jo that’s really funny oh starclan!
Petition to change the title to “Ashfur Gets Dumped by 3 Cats in Less Than 6 Minutes”
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Ps gosh wow thanks for all the likes on this comment
Mhm
Hehe. I’ve never gotten so many likes tysm
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam bc it's hilarious
GachaGalaxyFairyxoxo thank you!
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam ur welcome random internet stranger person whose family and name and friends and place u live all I don't know
"And then Squierrflight spontaneously combusted."
The end
Me: *sniff* ThAt WaS bEaUtIfUl
That reminds me of another skephalo fanfic
*Squirrel* flight.
smol boi
oh god
Squierrflight
XDD
My nitpick
Windclan: 8 cats
Riverclan: 9 cats
Shadowclan: 6 cats
Thunderclan: 28 cats
Erin: WE NEED MORE THUNDER CLAN WARRIORS
My thoughts exactly Erin, I couldn't have said it better.
Yes
They should all have about Thunderclan's amount
Yeah! Every cat in the other clans should give themselves to thunderclan so thunderclan can have just as many warriors as them! *laughs nervously* I’m sure I did the math right!
Skyclan: *i'm going commits kermit sucide*
What about the kittypets? or bloodclan?- *SPINNING WITH FIRE ON A BUILDING BURNING IT**
The fact that this story actually flows perfectly says a lot
Yep
sToP mAkInG mE rEAliZe tHiNgS
@False Sanity, I’m white but BLM h e r?
That we're awesome?
@@mycatisasupermodel4932 y e s ! !
Why are there so many characters with tails? Tails are overrated.
LONGtail has special tail tho >:3
iKr FuR as weLL
Paws, too. Why does every cat have paws? It is so overused 😔
@@hexbug3484 uuuuuuhhhhh...cloudtail's kitty pet name was fluffypaw's so...HE HAD EXTRA FLUFFY PAWS!! THEIR SPWECIAL! And my cat has oversized paws🤣🤣
@@davidgannonreal far to much of that 😒
"i was always jealous you chose squirrelflight over me"
the tables have turned
The turns have tabled
@@sunday_sabrina8663 the tabled have turns
have tabled the turns
The turn have been tabled
I lost it when Ashfur proposed-
"Leafpool I love you "
" *NOPE GOODBYE* "
How come the cats never move territories anymore? I mean, we NEED those 25 chapters of walking!
Don't worry, were *evenually* going back to the mountains, and meet Twisted Branch and Dewy Leaf there
I know right I just miss those books so much the wasted time the brain numbing boringness uh I miss it
I KNOW RIGHT!?!?!?
Agent Hunter go At least someone agrees with me!
Your profile says it all 😂
My nitpick: there aren’t enough ginger cats in ThunderClan.
it kind of is....cats understand eachother like we know english sooooooo
@That Geek Out Girl reply for a different comment?
That Geek Out Girl most likely
Edit: definitely is
yeah there is only firestar. nobody else.
Firestar and the occasional Firestar2
*Brambleclaw jumped down and screeched "YEET!"*
*"i have several questions-"*
Me too
Brambleclaw should have yeeted Ashfur.
"Leafpool stared at Jayfeather as he tried to eat a rock" IM DEAD I CANT AAAAAAAAAA
The only thing I hate about warriors is that leafpool never married Pringles.
YESSSSSS OMG
Leafpool x Pringles is the best ship
Yeah! Why would she chose CROWFEATHER over Pringle’s?
Ikr Pringlepool
RositheCat
Leafpool: NANI?!
I don't like how they all breath. Like, I mean, breathing is extremely overrated. They all do it. Ugh
Exactly!
Why do we breathe I mean it is overrated
We will die if we stop breathing! We have to breathe to survive. It's apart of life.
Poop Doody D I S G U S T A N G
Poop Doody r/woooosh
my criticism: In book six of the first book "the darkest hour" they spelled raven paw as "rave paw"
this boi about to start a rave up in here lol
This paw be raving
@@luthientinuviel3883 *R A A A A A A A A A A V E E E E*
My complaint is that they made the entire series of series and serieses of series suped edition? a typo and his real name IS rave paw
XD RAVE KITTY XDDD
If I could add to this, I would add: “Squirrelflight sighed and pointed her gun at Ashfur”.
Leafpool joined them and pointed a gun at BrambleClaw, Jayfeather jumped in front of him, taking a shot to the tail
Hollyleaf walks in and starts to blabber something about warrior code.
I hate that med cats can’t have mates! How will Jayfeather confess to the stick?!
(..Guys you can stop telling me that the stick is broken. *It’s been 10 months* )
(aight now its been 2 years why)
The stick died i think ;(
Stick died
Stick died?! Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
Wth is up with that stupid stick?!?!
Cookielicous123 it’s ships like these that are so stupid and make no sense
Ugh, I hated the forest territory! There was that one tree that just made me really mad!
kitties4ever12 um I kind of can’t get used to the lake camp...
@@critter_core Me too, actually. It kinda throws me off, especially when I'm reading a special edition.
Moon Dog Productions ikr. Even though there was 27 books about the lake (in the main series) compared to the 9 about the forest (and even then the first three books still had more walking then the forest.
Too bad that every 5 minutes when I read either the lake or the forest camp, the camp changes into a completely different look.
“HOLLYLEAF!!! YOU LEFT THE OVEN ON IN THE TUNNELS!!” said FallenLeaves, running out of the Tunnels with his bum on fire.
@@hollyshine10 Fallen Leaves looked at Hollyleaf uncertainly, then yelled, "But you need to turn it off now! I don't want Ashfur getting any more fire scenes!"
@@MapleshadeSyrupHollyleaf snarled at Fallen Leaves. “But my Dino nuggies are still RAW.”
@@L-ghtlessSky Fallen Leaves looked shocked, "HOW?! They whole tunnels is in flames!? They should be BURNT?!!" Hissing Fallen Leaves
Jayfeather:"What in *_Starclan_* is even happening right now?"
Me:"Yeah, I agree."
More like we wrote the best warriors fanfiction ever
Also that rock was delicious
You have a computer? Where? Wait no- HOW?
Kylie Healy Shhhhh don’t tell BrambleStar 🤫
Jayfeather Medicine Cat don’t worry about it
Rock or stick? He was obsessed with both 😆
Choco marshmallow kitty *I ate them both*
So Leafpool and Ashfur think they're in love, but Squirrelflight comes. She still seems normal in her relationship with Brambleclaw.
EXCEPT Brambleclaw loves Leafpool.
But Leafopool doesn't love him back. Instead, Ashfur loves Brambleclaw. Due to Leafpool's rejection, he's ready to accept Ashfur's paw in marriage.
But Squirrelflight jumps in to defend her mate.
Leafpool is sad that Ashfur loved Brambleclaw more than her, and was disgusted that Brambleclaw loved her. Ashfur tries to get her back, but Leafpool rejects him. He did just propose to Brambleclaw a second ago!
Leafpool realizes that all along she should've stayed with Crowfeather.
This is a shipping mess.
Yup
@@Lunaloaff The only kind of shipping XD
@@ruthie7237 True
Word
Reminds me of how I use to ship my OC Freedomwind with Tigerclaw/star, Longtail, Whitestorm, Boulder, Tallstar and Jaggedtooth
I love how theres serious sentences like "Hollyleaf had a uneasiness she could not shake" and then theres stuff like "Leafpool gave Ashfur a good *L i c k*
l i c k
l i c k
l i c k
l i c k
*l i c k*
This needs To be a super edition
Let's call it....
"Leafpool's Trek"
HELP I JUST READ THAT AS LEAFPOOL’S SHREK
@@coyotix XDDDD
@@coyotix LOL
You said this was a terrible fanfiction
THIS IS A MASTERPIECE
MWA PERFECTION 👌
Yes. Yes this is a masterpeice.
I know it's the best thing ever 😂
Maybe XD
I can’t believe that Twigpaw’s warrior name was Twigbranch, and not Twigstick
Smh
People these days, so disrespectful
God, couldn’t they have given her a sibling named pebblerock? Smh
And who names a cat 'bramble'claw?' He should have been bramble'thorn.
ugh, you’re so right. also, “flip kit”? their really going downhill. it should’ve been fidgetspinner kit!
I know right?!
Same! I hate them catching prey, just steal some kitty pet food!
Leafpool: mentions CrowFeather
Lesbian me: YOU MEAN MOTHWING?
That was the most beautifully written fanfic I’ve ever heard of. So touching.
yes exactly
The books aren't realistic, cats don't speak English. The books should be written in meows.
Meow. Fireheart mewed wearily. Sandstorm was taken aback. She looked at Fireheart in shock and hesitantly whispered. "M-meow??"
Thegolden Pineapple Firestar sighed. “Meow.” He told her as he turned away and walked out of ThunderClan territory and leaped over the wooden fence of Twolegplace.
Firestar: Meow
Graystripe: Meow meow
Fireheart: Meow?!
THEY ARE WRITTEN IN MEOWS. IT SAYS MEWS AFTER EVERY WORD THEY SAY AND THEY ONLY USE ENGLISH BECAUSE ITS A BOOK AND CATS SPEAK DIFFERENTLY THAN US, TO OTHER CATS IT SEEMS LIKE AN ACTUAL WORD BUT TO HUMANS IT DOESN'T BC WE DIFFERENT SPECIES
@@lol_sxmstar Meow??
The fact that we never got to hear what Squirrelflight's and Leafpool's phone numbers are! 😭😢😭😲😲😲
yes i agree. I WANNA KNOWWWWWWWWW
"Ashfyr realized that he left his personality back in old forest."
@Warrior cats facts why...?
No one:
Not a single soul:
Me: *What a plot twist!*
I’m so angry that the books didn’t have Jayfeather day “Yeet!” While throwing the stick into the lake.
Omg 😂
@@ghostbovods2188 So funny think about it, it would be like this. "You stopped me from saving Flametail!" Jayfeather hissed, his fur bristling and his eyes blazing with anger, "I'm done with this mouse-brained stick, it's letting cats die! Yeet!" Jayfeather flung the stick into the lake and Rock stared in horror as he vanished.
@@zhuqi8170 rip
@@SonTran-vb8xt lol xd
*say
My nitpick criticism:
There’s OBVIOUSLY not enough Tigerstar clones! Like, COME ON, we need AT LEAST twenty six more! It’s totally the most interesting and original idea that the authors came up with and it’s being W A S T E D.
KiwiQueen 13 ikr!!!
Yes more plz...maybe that will spice it up more
Pft
Ikr?
*N O T E N O U G H*
There should be at least 10 clones of everyone!!
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*Squirrelflight seemed to shrink beneath Ashfur's hatred-filled gaze*
Ashfur: *Smiles*
Jayfeather and lionblaze are really just representations of the viewers/readers
The warriors books are just super boring these days. Yknow what we need?
30 more forbidden couples.
I don’t agree nor disagree
Poor aromatic aces
They aren’t boring, but your not wrong.
@@HarperSnowhand no i very much am wrong this was satire.
@@dovefilms okay. Hope you have a nice day.
Jayfeather: What in the name of starclan is happening right now?
Me: My thoughts exactly.
Me: killing ashfur is part of the code?
Me later: MOM I’M GOING TO KILL ASHFUR!
Yes
We kill kill kill
yes
this needs more likes than it has lol
also kill ashfur
My insides hurt from holding a laughter that can wake all of California
“Ugh, why do the medicine cats always have to sort through herbs?”
Dude why are all warriors characters cats? There should be warrior worms! DirtClan, RainClan, WiggleClan, and MudClan
I get that's for the video but that's not a bad idea
You forgot about SquiggleClan. They're introduced in a later series.
no, worms are distusting
I think this is and always will be the best comment ever
@@lol_sxmstar you know that it was just a joke right? Sorry I got you so mad.
“Lionblaze sat in the back. Bucket full of popcorn. Ready to see the show that would unfold in front of him
“Ashfur tipped his fedora”
Me: *niCe hAt tHeRe, SiR*
Leafpool: ....
Why do so many cats have AMBER eyes? BLUE is 10 times better.
Yeah, then Shadowstar would have no trouble finding the ambereyed Quick Water!
yes
This is for the challenge guys btw.
Akira once said, “Blue is overrated” or smth in a video.
I just think cats licking each other is inappropriate for the target audience
So true
XD
Cats groom eachother though... by LICKING EACHOTHER LIKE A MOTHER LICKING HER KITTENS
@@dragonpies9052 r/wooosh
Dragon Pies 🤡🤡
Ashfur: *tries to marry Brambleclaw*
Squirrelflight: YEET! *steals boi from ashie*
Ashfur:....
Also Ashfur: *asks HaWkFrOsT to marry him*
HaWkFrOsT: YES
My nitpick:
“Honestly, why do people hate Ashfur? He's *smoking hot* “
I see whatcha did there
I am 😌😌
What have you done this time, Akira?
Edit: This was posted recently. Thanks for all the likes!
70th like haha no 69 for u
You do realize nobody goes back to the comment, so what’s the point of thanking them if the people who liked it will never see it, the people who scroll will see it though, and they’ll cringe and won’t like
ScøutZA It doesn't really matter to me, though.
@@Myheartz4u Hi.
@@Myheartz4u Well.
Why does Leafpool cure cats?! I mean, I know she’s a medicine cat and all but like, WHY?
I know!!! I love your icon!
Sweetberry warrior Cats Thank you!
Is that the newest book?
Um, because she's a medicine cat? Lol
IM DYING WHY DID IT HAVE TO END WITH HER BLOWING UP DANG
I'm still laughing about the random microwave tho.
jay feather: what in starclan is going on
Me: I'm so sad knowing your blind it was kind of a love story and a sad story and a funny story
Jay feather: ... what?
Okay, so, y'know how the dead cats aren't alive? Yeah, I HATE that.
Ikr
It’s so annoying
I HATE that the dead Tigerstar isn't alive.
UGHHH YEAH.
THEY ARE CAPABLE OF BEING ALIVE.
Can’t believe cats breath in these books,sigh SO unrealistic
They also exist,It’s so unrealistic.
Yeah.. we also play icehockey but it’s whatever.
I know, and the fact that they are real in the story is the MOST UNREALISTIC THING eVERRR
My nitpick:
In this drawing, along with multiple others, ash fur is drawn with 6 marks on his forehead. They don’t explain this in the books and I’m left not able to sleep at night wondering HOW MANY MARKS THERE ACTUALLY ARE ON HIS HEAD.
4:25
Squirrelflight ran to Brambleclaw as fast as she could, trying to save him from the fire.
Brambleclaws eyes widened as he stared at the horrified she-cat, a gleam of confusion burrowed deep in his amber gaze. “What fire?”
OMG!! Life is so unfair for Deadfoot, he has to walk on three feet!!
Wait, who's Deadfoot again??
They're are never enough TigerStar remakes to be misunderstood.
Ikr
*sniff* this was so emotional and beautiful, the plot, the drama, the action, the romance, this whole story brought me to tears.. i wish there was an actual book with this story written.. *sniff* great job
"Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels" is an underrated line
"A stick?" Lionpaw, trying to be a medicine cat
a StIcK?
Why couldn't Ashfur's luscious long golden locks be cannon!?
They are cannon-
IKR
They arent cannon since words cant express them
The warrior code (according to Hollyleaf, the code expert)
1. Defend ur clan
2. Hunt on ur own land
3. Feed ur kits and eldrs
4. Respect ur food
5. Kill Ashfur
6. Write code on the beach
7. You can't read this rule
(It's at 1:33)
Ashfur and Bramblestar's love scene was amazing.
*looks at title*
hmm... i never wouldve guessed that "perfect" was spelled that way
XD
I Think We Need More Cross Clan Romances That Don't Involve Thunderclan.
2:46 Ashfur's just lying upside down in the same position in the corner, LOL
Again, Akira, you put together an amazing video. This one wins first prize, clearly.
So um...
My question/opinion on the warrior cat books:
What color are Dovewing’s eyes?
What color are anyone’s eyes?
What even are eyes?
FuturePresentations pfft! You believe in eyes?
spaghootles not really. Do you?
Dovewing in MAPs is a friggin eye-color changing creature
*wheeeeze*
@@rekittyxxx7211 eyes are just a story parents tell there kids, like santa.
Nobody:
Everyone with a sane mind:
This Fanfiction: Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels
Edit: I didn’t expect to get any likes let alone this many likes for this joke thank you all
Edit 2: omg thanks for the likes again this is just a silly joke I made up and everyone likes it I’m happy 🙂
“Everyone with a sane mind” _sorry that doesn’t apply to me_
Nobody:
Nobody at all:
Not a single soul:
Not even lionblaze:
Not even thanos:
Me: **writes fanfiction from ivypool's POV that's about Dovewing being worse than her and dovewing being a butt to her and acting like she's SOOOO much better and ivypool is singing Walk Without The Stars and dovepaw being the villain instead of ivypool**
wow
I love how this was mentioned and forgot about five seconds later.
Omg same XD
My nitpick: there aren't enough ginger cats in Riverclan.
The different voices you made ajshdkashdkasjhd
and w o w
Everything flowed together in a terrible but smooth- I-
Crowfeather shouldn’t exist because birds don’t.
Amy Ingraham So Jayfeather doesn’t exist either
Or Feathertail
Med cats NEED to be able to have a mate... Wait no! Then Leafpool wouldn't be breaking the Warrior Code
This is a work of art. I kinda want to get this printed
4:38 ah yes jayfeather, I can relate on an infinite level
So....the Firestar children are having a rough time with their boyfriends.
get a move on sparkpelt, you cant be a widow forever
Things that were in this fanfiction
Romance
Ships
Drama
And finally weirdness
”I have several questions…”
Does that means that jayfeather could see when leafpool gave ashfur a good L I C K
Bright guardian akira I need you to remember this line of text
"Scattered across a strange universe of cats"
I will tell you when you need to forget
I hate that Longtail had a long tail!
I know, that’s soooooo far far fetched
Hawkfoot 101 oh yes! It’s truly awful!
Cupcake_Girl lol
He wasn't mentioned to have a long tail in the books...
my criticism:
why didn't they use swords to fight?? They're WARRIORS after all, not just feral kittens.... smh
Note: I introduced the series to my brother and he legitimately said this
Because its suppost to be realistic and cats dont use swords
When he said, “Brambleclaw sat perched in the tree and when Squirrelflight walked below him, he jumped down and screeched, “YEET!” I died on the inside.
Edit: No one did what he said. The story’s only fault was that it was too PeRfEcT
The New Prophecy is so interesting! I like the part when they walk :’)
Hopwhisker is the first and only cat to ever be described as calico (Yes, really).
MORE CALICO CATS
There all pretending to be tortoise shell
@@zoe.b.8548 how did you know...
@@shifter4899 idk
@@shifter4899 Because every single calico cat is described as a tortoise shell with white.
Why are there SOOO many Firestar clones? We need the original:
Jake!
JAKE IS EVERYONE'S FATHER.
JAKE IS *YOUR* FATHER.
I love your intro, it’s so good and short
I love how Ashfur stares at Hollyleaf at 1:49 like "Yeah, I'm dating your mom, whatcha gonna do about it?"
"And then Squirrelflight spontaneously combusted"
Why do so many cats have fur?! Fur is so overrated.....like so many cats have fur!
Why cannot they have HAIR instead?!
Well, there’s rock... and... good point..
Like Ashfur's long golden hair.
AshFur have a long blonde hair! This should be the new fashion of Warrior Cats!
im crying this is the best fanfiction ive ever seen
truly artistic.
And then Squirlflight spontaneously combusted
Me: wha...
Also me: u know what? I don’t want 2 know
I am upset with the lack of dogs in warrior cats. They’re discriminating against other species!!
Warrior cats is mainly books about "Cats" So That's why.
Snooper BRUH its a joke at the end of the video he says “in the comments leave criticism about warrior cats that is WAY too nit picky” so I did just that. It’s a joke
@@not_wednesdayadams I didn't watch the end so meh, Good point.
@@megalovore *COUGH* R/woooosh *COUGH*
@@PuddlesTheMolten r/ihavereddit
Blue Star didn't think that her kits would freaze to death in a snow storm parenting IQ 1000000.
Ashfur: "M'lady" *Tipping his fedora*
Squirrelflight: *Spontaneously combusts*
I literally cried laughing for 5 minutes straight 🤣🤣🤣
Questioning everything that has happened in this. You should do more of these
This reminds me of when I play the 'one word at a time' game with my friends to make stories. This is actually incredible, you should totally do it again! Pleaseeee lol? Now that I've joined your amino I REAAAALLY wanna join in with these things and write some mighty wack comments heh
I would love there to be a part two. In fact these stories are just classics.
Yes pls do a part to. It was cringe but good and REALLY funny. I loved it
10/10, great fanfic. Would love to see fanfic part 2 xD
Loumorgsie 17 lol same
My gosh. I need a part two. MAKE THIS A SERIES PLEASE
" *Leafpool stared at Jayfeather as he tried to eat a rock* " That got me laughing