PS if anyone is wounding about George and who Henry is. They are the same person I was going to call him Henry and changed it to George instead and I guess I miss it during the editing. The yoke is on my face.
Thank you for the story and what we already know will be an awesome narration! This has been one of the hardest 2 weeks I have ever experienced in my 40 years and it's good to be able to enjoy this and momentarily forget about the hardships!
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This was a great story tonight. I am quite glad there will be another part or ending to the story. Fantastic narration as always. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend 🥰 💖 🤗 🌟
Can't wait for the rest of the story to be released. I'm a 9 year recovered alcoholic and everytime the character talked about drinking a bottle of liquor, i just kept thinking "damn it man, stop and focus on what's happening".
Wow! 9yrs! & Saying it on a public forum? Can't imagine the shit you've faced? How inspiring! Really made my day! Not in a weird way, but, SO much respect! Had a crap day with other humans, then, I see your msg, someone who has taken control of their life! To quote The Princess Bride " life isn't fair" For us who have been through it, no one really understands! Until life hits them hard! Sleep deep& content, knowing, you've come a hard path & conquered! Blessings!
Back at it again with another chilling story + a CREEPTASTIC narration! Executed brilliantly, leaving us with another TOP NOTCH video!! 👌🖤 Thank you, Dr. Creepen! 🥰 Thank you very much!! xoxo 😈
Ooh.... This creepy tale is a great way to start thinking about all the ghouls and ghosties for Halloween...... Can't wait until the conclusion of this story.... Take care of that angelic voice of yours.... Way to many more creepy tales to read that only you can Dearest Dr......
I certainly like the way the story coming along I can't wait for 3rd and 4th instalments and meat locusts story yeah I can't wait for that too.... You certainly know how to spin a good story Dr....
@@alexwilliams9900 Never been on Reddit, I'm old n tired of loading new software... The Doc stated 3rd-4 instalments were coming next week at the end of the Silver mine story.. oh thanks for your awesome story Alex or Tennis 6626, hope some sick stuff is coming next week, let's rock n roll, Alex...
Whew! Ok, so I must first give Praise to Positive Tennis 6626 for such a compelling story, I’m totally drawn in, and clearly there’s a sequel to look forward to. I’m all good with that! Another hearty thanks goes out to the Dr, as no one else could have brought this to life the way he can. So again, to the author, what luck! This particular story had what seems to be a few of the staples of a successful CreepyPasta. A cursed but desired place, plenty of warnings telling the protagonist what NOT to do. And all the while him doing exactly what he was told not to do. And of course a totally innocent group of kids, apparently gorgeous ones, that are being tenderized especially for the creatures of the mine. Yep, so far it all checks out! Oh, and of course after all his spending just to make this an actual possibility, he’s now broke, and living at the bottom of a bottle. Where all of the BEST decisions are often made! So with all of the building blocks in order, we can proceed with some horror the likes of which he is just as greedy to go after as as the flying ghost coming at him right now. Personally, I think it should be made into law that anyone who wants to build on land with even the slightest of haunting stories behind it, be mad to listen to a minimum of 10-15 CreepyPastas. Then allow them to decide. This was great, and I can only imagine the follow up will be just as good if not better!! 👏👏👏👏👏
To support this channel we need to give TH-cam algorithms what they want! Watch early, watch to the end, like & subscribe! Then to give Dr Creepen what he deserves, watch adverts fully! Some can give £€$, but if we can't? At least watch advertisements! It's the least we can do for such quality content! By the way! Don't know the narrator! Just support the arts!
Yeah The Good Dr. Is In The House! 🧡💚 Hi A.J., it's Michele! 💙💜 This is a Great Series, can't wait for all 4 parts on Friday! 🥰 Your Narration with that Soothing, Sexy Voice was Awesome! 🤗 Thanks for All Your Hard Work, it's Very Much Appreciated my Dear Dr. Creepen! 😘 Sweet Dreams and Bye, Bye! 🤷♀️✌🌹👻🐶😻🐢🐾🐠💋👀🙏
Let me guess , we won't get the next part for 6 months . I swear 3 weeks ago we were suppose to get the conclusion of meat locust . Love the stories but the waiting kills me sometimes. Can't remember previous chapters sometimes due to the time between
Can't wait until Samhain! As pagans, doing our own rituals! But, looking forward to your beyond marvelous narration on a spooky story! Seriously, contact Peter Warnock (UK) To get a professional voice-over reel! You deserve ££££££££££££££££ Much Appreciation!
From the story, we KNOW they can be killed... So I wonder if a good number of men with modern-day weaponry went down into the mine, could they clear it and destroy all of the walkers🤔
NOOOOOOOO! He flown towards you? NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Arghh! Sweet dreams? NOOoooo! Need to know end of story! Pleasssssse? Lol! But, Seriously, want to protect your voice? Learn straw voice technique or Estill Technique. Will help you protect your voice! Will give you career longevity! My daughter is a voice over actress. Only reason I know this shit! Your voice is an amazing career opportunity! Contact me or learn Estill! I can give you links!
Thank-you so much Dr for narrating my story. I hope everyone enjoys my story . There might be a Halloween special in the works.
It's a great story, I can't wait to hear the rest of it.
PS if anyone is wounding about George and who Henry is. They are the same person I was going to call him Henry and changed it to George instead and I guess I miss it during the editing. The yoke is on my face.
How do you get story put on here
Go to his subreddit and submit a story.
Bring that Halloween candy to Doc so he can share it with us!
I love the 'My Property Is Not Normal and Cole' reference at 30:57.
I was hoping someone would get that.
Same
I heard the reference and literally squee-ed
Man i caught that too it his the same author cause of so I need more of his shit
Aye . I just said that too B4 I read any comments
Story was original and well written, thank you. Doc you always kill it your voice and execution was spot on, thank you.
Thank you for the story and what we already know will be an awesome narration! This has been one of the hardest 2 weeks I have ever experienced in my 40 years and it's good to be able to enjoy this and momentarily forget about the hardships!
Sorry for the rough 2 weeks. It will get better. Just wait till 50!!
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@@carlia5615 thanks
Magic, another fantastic story. Thanks for your dedication Doc. 💗👍✨🎉
Can't wait for more. Thanks Doc
that was absolutely amazing! please give us part 2 asap! I'm so happy I found your channel.
Whiskey & coke..... lip smacking ahh! After another crap week....enjoying & can't wait for more! Have a great weekend & B/H!
This was a great story tonight. I am quite glad there will be another part or ending to the story. Fantastic narration as always. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend 🥰 💖 🤗 🌟
Thanks again!
I like the direction this is heading in! I can’t wait. Thanks Doc!
When I wrote it I was going for a slow burn. With just enough fanning the flames to get you hooked in.
@@alexwilliams9900 Well, it worked & I’m loving it! You do good work. Thank you
You and me both!
I really enjoy your talent for narration and all the author's writing talents!
Glad you're out here tonight excited to hear your story
Hope you enjoyed it!
good evening Doctor hope you are having a great weekend
You too!
Happy Saturday and enjoy the video all! Thank you Doc ✌️❤️☠️
Very good story 😁
I wait with anticipation for the next part , thanks for doing what you do 💗
You're welcome 😊
The greatest narrator ever if you ask me I can't listen to creepypasta if your not reading it
I like how Mark keeps changing up his drinks 🍺
Lol low key I just looked at the bottles at our in home bar and just went down the row lol.
No drinks left, but I’m relaxed and listening.
So far story is very enjoyable and I can’t wait to her parts 3-4
Can't wait for the rest of the story to be released. I'm a 9 year recovered alcoholic and everytime the character talked about drinking a bottle of liquor, i just kept thinking "damn it man, stop and focus on what's happening".
Wow! 9yrs! & Saying it on a public forum? Can't imagine the shit you've faced? How inspiring! Really made my day! Not in a weird way, but, SO much respect! Had a crap day with other humans, then, I see your msg, someone who has taken control of their life! To quote The Princess Bride " life isn't fair" For us who have been through it, no one really understands! Until life hits them hard! Sleep deep& content, knowing, you've come a hard path & conquered! Blessings!
@@mumo9413 thank you. You've made my day also.
Congratulations. Honestly I think any addiction is hard to kick. 9 years is impressive. Keep it up!!!
Interesting take on The Haunted Mansion. Looking forward to the conclusion.
A person of culture I see good eye.
Thank you doctor!!! Can’t wait till next Friday!
Okay so this story had me hooked and then BAM... wait for part 3. I hope everyone has a wonderful evening or morning. Wherever your home may be....
After that intro, I need a smoke
Yet another enjoyable creepy tale. Can't wait for more. Thank you for the reading. Wouldn't be the same without your voice.xx
Glad you enjoyed it
This is a GLORIOUS read! Imma need ALL THIS! lol
Thanks always nice to hear you like the story.
@@alexwilliams9900 welcomed! Keep up the GLORIOUS work
Thank you Dr.!
I caught that "my property isn't normal" nudge
I love the " My property isn't Normal" Easter Egg
Back at it again with another chilling story + a CREEPTASTIC narration! Executed brilliantly, leaving us with another TOP NOTCH video!! 👌🖤 Thank you, Dr. Creepen! 🥰
Thank you very much!! xoxo 😈
Ooh.... This creepy tale is a great way to start thinking about all the ghouls and ghosties for Halloween...... Can't wait until the conclusion of this story.... Take care of that angelic voice of yours.... Way to many more creepy tales to read that only you can Dearest Dr......
Omg tell us the end !
I certainly like the way the story coming along I can't wait for 3rd and 4th instalments and meat locusts story yeah I can't wait for that too.... You certainly know how to spin a good story Dr....
So you must have been one of the lucky one who read this on his Reddit then.
@@alexwilliams9900 Never been on Reddit, I'm old n tired of loading new software... The Doc stated 3rd-4 instalments were coming next week at the end of the Silver mine story.. oh thanks for your awesome story Alex or Tennis 6626, hope some sick stuff is coming next week, let's rock n roll, Alex...
Glad you enjoyed it
I hope you get all the sponsors!. Fuck TH-cam ads.
Ahhh man I hate cliffhangers especially when it's at a good part
AAAAAA THE REFERENCE TO MY PROPERTY ISNT NORMAL!
Whew! Ok, so I must first give Praise to Positive Tennis 6626 for such a compelling story, I’m totally drawn in, and clearly there’s a sequel to look forward to. I’m all good with that! Another hearty thanks goes out to the Dr, as no one else could have brought this to life the way he can. So again, to the author, what luck! This particular story had what seems to be a few of the staples of a successful CreepyPasta. A cursed but desired place, plenty of warnings telling the protagonist what NOT to do. And all the while him doing exactly what he was told not to do. And of course a totally innocent group of kids, apparently gorgeous ones, that are being tenderized especially for the creatures of the mine. Yep, so far it all checks out! Oh, and of course after all his spending just to make this an actual possibility, he’s now broke, and living at the bottom of a bottle. Where all of the BEST decisions are often made! So with all of the building blocks in order, we can proceed with some horror the likes of which he is just as greedy to go after as as the flying ghost coming at him right now.
Personally, I think it should be made into law that anyone who wants to build on land with even the slightest of haunting stories behind it, be mad to listen to a minimum of 10-15 CreepyPastas. Then allow them to decide. This was great, and I can only imagine the follow up will be just as good if not better!! 👏👏👏👏👏
Wow what a review, I’m glad I can draw you in and I hope you will enjoy part two.
To support this channel we need to give TH-cam algorithms what they want! Watch early, watch to the end, like & subscribe! Then to give Dr Creepen what he deserves, watch adverts fully! Some can give £€$, but if we can't? At least watch advertisements! It's the least we can do for such quality content! By the way! Don't know the narrator! Just support the arts!
Great 👍
I can't wait💙
Cole!!! He's a monster Predator! ❤
Thanks for bringing me back to semi stability even to I projected a lot and simper too hard :(
The reference to cole ... cmon.. did everybody sleep on that???
I didn’t even wanna hit like cuz it was @ 777, & I didn’t wanna ruin it, but I had to. Great job.
Yeah The Good Dr. Is In The House! 🧡💚 Hi A.J., it's Michele! 💙💜 This is a Great Series, can't wait for all 4 parts on Friday! 🥰 Your Narration with that Soothing, Sexy Voice was Awesome! 🤗 Thanks for All Your Hard Work, it's Very Much Appreciated my Dear Dr. Creepen! 😘 Sweet Dreams and Bye, Bye! 🤷♀️✌🌹👻🐶😻🐢🐾🐠💋👀🙏
Haha Hey Nice Easter egg to my property isn’t normal creepypasa
I like to put little Easter eggs in all my story’s.
Let me guess , we won't get the next part for 6 months . I swear 3 weeks ago we were suppose to get the conclusion of meat locust . Love the stories but the waiting kills me sometimes. Can't remember previous chapters sometimes due to the time between
They’re only 4 parts to this story. Do not worry there is a Halloween special I’m working on hopefully have it done before Halloween lol
Another amazing one after that terrible terrible gym teacher... thank you so much my dear doc 💜🖤💜
You're so welcome!
Moral of this story don't fuck with native burial sites
Hey doc🥰🥰
✅
The guy Mark in the story is an alcoholic.
Can't wait until Samhain! As pagans, doing our own rituals! But, looking forward to your beyond marvelous narration on a spooky story! Seriously, contact Peter Warnock (UK) To get a professional voice-over reel! You deserve ££££££££££££££££ Much Appreciation!
From the story, we KNOW they can be killed... So I wonder if a good number of men with modern-day weaponry went down into the mine, could they clear it and destroy all of the walkers🤔
♥️
anticlimatic
This is only the 1st half of the story.
The main character would benefit more if he wasn't such a boozer.
NOOOOOOOO! He flown towards you? NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Arghh! Sweet dreams? NOOoooo! Need to know end of story! Pleasssssse? Lol! But, Seriously, want to protect your voice? Learn straw voice technique or Estill Technique. Will help you protect your voice! Will give you career longevity! My daughter is a voice over actress. Only reason I know this shit! Your voice is an amazing career opportunity! Contact me or learn Estill! I can give you links!
You should say it's not completed in the information . Man super disappointed with this one
Fair point. I hope you'll join me next Friday for the conclusion.
Stop being offended so easily or you will have a hard life of disappointment ahead of you
So weak these days
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