I don't mind Naruto getting something good happening to him. But how do you take Naruto's story and bleach elements and make it sicky sweet. the original can in Naruto is a nice guy and he basically gets dumped on for most of his life and this one they're making him a Mr., nice guy again. He may not get dumped on as much but cheese come on. Let him be a tough guy.
I really hate fanfics like this. This is such a waste of time that I don’t know why even bother making it if u don’t have a good well written plot and story. You start off with good ideas but finish with lazy writing. Naruto can’t be both a mean guy and a sucky sweet guy. And all this harem and females are just too much it makes Naruto the opposite of what you make him out to be.
I would love to see part 2❤❤❤❤🥰😍
part 2 pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part two please
I need more of this story
You had to make Sakura act like Zuko when he apologizes to Iroh.
I don't mind Naruto getting something good happening to him. But how do you take Naruto's story and bleach elements and make it sicky sweet. the original can in Naruto is a nice guy and he basically gets dumped on for most of his life and this one they're making him a Mr., nice guy again. He may not get dumped on as much but cheese come on. Let him be a tough guy.
What’s with female kurama
this is the type of fanfiction i realy don't like
Yeah to many fuckin harems, if you take that away, everything good
@@AE.NIX3 I don't like how it Just gave jim every powerboost Without jim working for it
I really hate fanfics like this. This is such a waste of time that I don’t know why even bother making it if u don’t have a good well written plot and story. You start off with good ideas but finish with lazy writing. Naruto can’t be both a mean guy and a sucky sweet guy. And all this harem and females are just too much it makes Naruto the opposite of what you make him out to be.
Part 2 plz
Part 2 please
Part 2 please
Part 2 please