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the old KISS method is still the Best,"Keep It Simple Stupid".👍🤔

Talk about a power nap. Boredom in the universe? I don't believe it. Go to another galaxy or universe.

"This video is truly amazing! The way you build the plot is so creative. 7:50 was incredibly tense

"The video quality and storytelling are outstanding, top-notch! 2:10 is my favorite part! 😍"

Children always get the best. ❤

This video took my emotions on a rollercoaster ride. If you enjoy this kind of drama,

I enjoyed your story thank you

It’s the art of deception. They don’t care it makes no sense. I’ve already unsubscribed from some channels because of it. Some had stories stop in mid sentence and mid story.

So tired of every alien woman in these stories being named Lyra. Can't you writer's come up with a new name. Your imagination sucks!!!

I enjoyed your story thank you

The story is nice, but it starts with the second half and finishes with the first half.

This is exactly the kind of content I enjoy watching! If you’re curious about love and drama stories, feel free to visi

OK. You had us following your story, but someone forgot to finish it. Not a good way to complete an otherwise good tale.

Incomplete!

Too short

Statement, statement, statement, study, study, study etc. god how much are you going to repeat yourself? If this dragging and repeating continues I will unsubscribe. Also clickbait because the galaxy was never in fear. Just another repeating and dragging story that talks about humanity's discovery.

Thank you. Truth is a hard pill to swallow. I've seen them & it's awesome.

I would suggest the author to let the narrating AI go through at least first and second grade to learn how to pronounce english correctly. Or drop the inane usage of non-human narration.

Why do you read the "dash " between words? It's supposed to be silent. You just give a short break in the commentary.

There was no relic, and there was no ship. When the hell are you folks going to learn honesty?

I enjoyed your story thank 3

The repeated words, rephrasing is the mark of Microsoft's word stupid coping of all text that was edited out as well as ignoring the end of final rewrite. If you forget to tell it to accept all changes.

Isn't AI great! NOT

That story was so full of holes. I would rate it a 1.

"Need a hand there?" she called out, her voice carrying a casual confidence.

Why would you protect those who lured you into a trap? illogical and lousy ending

There’s no excuse for dishonesty in a relationship, especially cheating.

There’s no excuse for dishonesty in a relationship, especially cheating.

A waitress came by, taking their orders: burgers, fries, and milkshakes. As they waited for their food, the conversation began to flow naturally.

You’re repeating the same thing in the video . Over and over. Please fix this. Thank you. It’s too repetitive.

I agree. A second part is definitely required!

While the story is decent the thumbnail is total clickbait having absolutely nothing to do with the story. I hope there will be a follow up because it leaves everything up in the air.

Am I loosing eyesight or she on first image have extra leg(s)?

Greatest Thumbnail Ever!!!

The story line was reversed at the end. First they blow up the old ranger station then later they reached it and climbed the stairs. This story has no ending and is jumbled up. Not a bad plot line, but no resolution. This story doesn’t deserve an ending because of lack of imagination. Too short, should be at least an hour long and end with her surviving and exposing the people who tried to stop her. Or broken up with a clear labeled “Part 2 - The tide turns” or something like that. The name Lyra is used too much. Lack of imagination damaged this story.

WTH no resolution...boooooo

I like your ability to spin a really good yarn. There is vaue in the saying that a story teller should always leave his or her audience wanting more. i refuse to fault you for leaving me with this longing.

Why is it that approximately 85% of the females are named Lyra?

I enjoyed your story thank you

I give it a thumbs up because I liked the plot, but I do expect a part 2.

@ekhidna4 someone is doing a knockoff of your story

Now we’re going to Chen again? You just earned a thumbs down!👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

I would like to hear more of this story.

So you've given everyone a little bit of a 'taste' . Where's the rest of tte story???

Part 2?

Not to shabby. decent start to a good series maybe.

Why do they use very bad quality captions? Earth not birth. First mistake is the last for me.

Can we ban 'the practiced precision' sick of that term...

Excellent story thank you ❤❤

Please can we have a second chapter?