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번역 1: "But know this! Standing idle when witnessing evil is just another form of evil." - 'idle'라는 단어를 사용해서 아무것도 하지 않는 상태를 강조했어요. 번역 2: "But be aware! Remaining passive in the face of evil is another type of evil." - 'passive'라는 단어를 사용해서 적극적으로 대처하지 않는 상태를 강조해봤어요.

보고서 작성할 때 필요한 용어에요! 감사합니다!!

번역 1. "Youth is like a blank canvas; what picture will you paint on it?" 'blank canvas'라는 표현을 사용해서, 청춘을 새로 시작할 수 있는 무한한 가능성의 시간으로 비유하며, 우리 각자의 선택이 어떻게 미래를 그려 나갈지를 묻는 질문입니다. 번역 2. "How will the art you create in your youth shape your future?" 'art you create'와 'shape your future'를 사용해서, 젊은 시절에 우리가 만들어가는 결정과 행동이 어떻게 우리의 미래를 형성하는지에 대한 깊은 성찰을 제공합니다.

번역 1. "Of course, we can't know everyone's story. Everyone has a real story they want to keep hidden." - 'story'라는 단어를 사용해서 개인의 이야기를 강조했어요. 번역 2. "Certainly, not all tales can be known. Each person has their own true tale they wish to conceal." ‘사연'을 좀 더 서정적으로 'tale'로 표현해봤어요. 각자의 비밀스러운 이야기를 존중하는 것의 중요성을 보여주고 싶었습니다.

번역 1. "Why do you think you can live like that? Where in this world can you afford to live carelessly?" 'live carelessly'라는 표현을 사용해서, 대충 살아가는 삶의 태도를 지적하며, 우리가 어떤 선택을 해야 하는지 묻는 거죠. 번역 2. "How can you justify living so lightly? Is there really a place in this world for living without giving your all?" 'living so lightly'와 'living without giving your all'을 사용해서, 삶에 대한 진정한 참여와 노력의 부재를 비판적으로 다루어 보았습니다. ⚠️ 해당 OTT 서비스가 제공하는 번역과 다를 수 있습니다. 강조하려는 바에 따라 번역이 달라질 수 있음을 알려드립니다. 사진 출처: namu.wiki/w/소년시대?rev=377

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We've spent almost a century to find Dark Matter and Dark Energy but still there's no sign of them. The problem of modern physics is they're trying to explain everything with particle physics and the physics is being cornered more and more to the dead end. To escape the dead end, they invent or design another imaginary particle in vain instead of trying to revise their way to approach to the problem. No matter what we try, a thing which doesn't exist can't be found. May be it is time to find an Alternative Way to Explain Dark Matter and Dark Energy. 4-D Hypershere model of Universe can easily explain Dark Matter, Dark Energy, Void and even the reason why the measurement values of Expansion Rate are around 70 km/sec-Mpc. Dark Matter, Dark Energy, Gravity, Void and Antigravity, ... all these are same phenomena. They just look different. I agree to the idea that the interaction between mass and space must be explained with quantum mechanics. But that doesn't mean gravity is the QM phenomena. That's because gravity is not a force. Dark Matter, Dark Energy, Gravity, Antigravity, Void... all these are just joint effects of the expansion of the Universe and the curvature of spacetime. Details are given below. Einstein’s theory of General Relativity states that spacetime is curved by the presence of mass. This curvature influences the motion other objects with mass and gives rise to gravitation. Thus, gravity is a result of geometric features in spacetime. However, we also observe gravitational effects - curvature of spacetime - in areas without any detectable mass. This has given rise to the concept of dark matter, which is matter that does not interact in any detectable way with normal matter, except through gravity. So, there is some large quantity of dark matter scattered throughout the universe, which curves spacetime and causes gravitational effects just like normal matter, but we cannot see or detect it with any known method. An alternative theory to the identity of dark matter is proposed - it is not matter at all, but rather an intrinsic curvature of spacetime. In other words, spacetime is not naturally flat. Even in the absence of matter, we observe some inherent curvature of spacetime. So, the question is now - why is spacetime naturally curved? Why is it not flat in the absence of mass? The universe is 4-dimensional, with 3 spatial dimensions and one dimension in time. Rather than consider time as a linear dimension, we can consider it as a radial one. Therefore, rather than describing the universe with a Cartesian coordinate system, we describe it with a 4-dimensional spherical coordinate system - 3 angular coordinates, φ1, φ2, φ3, and one radial coordinate in time, t. We live on the 3-dimensional surface of a 4-dimensional bubble which is expanding radially in time. Thus, the Big Bang represents t=0, the beginning of time. The crucial point is that the expansion of the universe is not homogeneous in all directions. The expansion rate at one point on the bubble’s surface may differ slightly from another point near it. The universe is only roughly spherical in 4 dimensions, the same way that the Earth is only roughly spherical in 3 dimensions. The same way we observe local mountains and valleys on the surface of Earth, we observe local “mountains” and “valleys” on the surface of the universe bubble. The inhomogeneity of the expansion of the universe has given rise to natural curvature of spacetime. This natural curvature causes the phenomenon of “dark matter”. “Valleys” in spacetime pull matter in, similarly to the warping of spacetime of massive objects. So “dark matter” is really “valleys” in spacetime that are expanding slower than the regions surrounding it. These valleys tend to pull matter in and create planets, stars, and galaxies - regions of space with higher-than-average densities of mass. Conversely, “mountains” in spacetime will repel matter away, an “anti-gravitational” effect, which gives rise to cosmic voids in space where we observe no matter. Each point on the surface of the universe bubble traces out a time arrow in 4-dimensional space, perpendicular to the surface. These time arrows are not parallel to each other since the universe is not flat. This causes points to have nonzero relative velocity away from each other. It is generally accepted that the universe is expanding faster than observable energy can explain, and this is expansion is believe to be still accelerating. The “missing” energy required to explain these observations has given rise to the theory of dark energy. The time dilation caused by non-parallel time arrows can be proposed as an explanation for dark energy. Alternatively, dark energy is real energy coming from potential energy gradients caused by non-parallel time arrows. As a sanity check, we can calculate the expansion rate of the universe based on the universe bubble model. Since the radius of the universe bubble is expanding at the speed of light in the time direction, it increases at 1 light second per second. Therefore, the “circumference” of the 3-dimensional surface increases by 2π light seconds per second, or about 1.88*10^6 km/s. This expansion is distributed equally across the 3-dimensional surface, so the actual observed expansion rate is proportional to the distance from the observer. At present, the age of the universe is estimated to be 13.8 billion years, so the radius of the universe bubble is 13.8 billion light years, or about 4233 megaparsecs (3.26 million light years to 1 Mpc). Thus, we can calculate the expansion rate of the universe, per megaparsec from the observer, as: Expansion rate = ((d(circumference))/dt)/radiusofuniverse=(1.88*〖10〗^6 km⁄s)/(2π*4233Mpc)=(1.88*〖10〗^6 km⁄s)/26598Mpc=70.82(km⁄s)/Mpc The popularly accepted empirical expansion rate is 73.5 +/- 2.5 km/s/Mpc, so our calculated value is close. There may be some additional source of expansion (or observed red shift) to make up for the discrepancy. For example, if two adjacent points have some gravitational gradient due to non-parallel time arrows, then light passing through these points will be red-shifted. - Cited from www.academia.edu/82481487/Title_Alternative_Explanation_of_Dark_Matter_and_Dark_Energy

저는 해외 경험이 없어서 진짜 외국인들이 쓰는 표현을 배우기가 쉽지 않아요. 영상을 통해 많이 배우고 도움받고 있습니다. 일기도 써볼게요! 항상 감사합니다!!

Strolling along the beach is my jam.

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Update: Since the release of this video, there have been significant developments in Sam Altman's situation at OpenAI. He is back in his role as CEO with a new board. This unexpected turn of events reminds us of the dynamic nature of the current issues and the importance of staying informed. Thank you for your understanding and for being part of our community!

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카페 너무 멋지네요!! 추천 제대로에요~^^ 코시롱식당 안 가봤지만 가보고 싶어요~♡

이외에 binge-watch movies 나 marathon을 동사로 사용해서 marathon movies 혹은 watch movies back-to-back도 가능합니다~!

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집어주신 용어 표현 이외에도 좋은 단어들이 참 많네요. I treasure the moments - treasure을 동사로 사용해본 적이 없었던 것 같은데 오늘 써먹어 봐야겠어요^^ 그리고 일기장의 주인공이 정말 긍정적이고 아내와 어머니에 대한 사랑이 느껴져서 따뜻하게 읽었어요. 감사합니다!

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"for many weeks in a row" 는 처음 들어본 표현이에요! 유용한 표현들 감사합니다. 그리고 타자 소리와 글을 써내려 가는 감성이 정말 좋아요. 타자칠 때 제 눈도 그 글을 따라 읽으면서 영어 문장을 통째로 보는 것보다 더 편했어요. :) 글 내용이 조금 슬퍼요ㅠ 가족과 시간을 보내기 힘든 40대의 일기라..ㅜㅜ 글쓰신 분이 가족과 즐거운 시간을 보냈기를 바랍니다.^^

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여러가지 유익한 축하표현들 잘 배웠습니다 . 두분선생님께 감사드립니다.

감사합니다 ㆍ그리고 run on sentence 의 예시들을 모두 다 고쳐서 설명해 주시면 고맙겠습니다

영어 글쓰기에서 문장 부호 사용이 아주 미숙했는데 쉼표 사용법을 잘 가르쳐 주셔서 정말 감사합니다. 다음 시간엔 다른 부호 사용도 기대하겠습니다. 수고 많으셨습니다.

늘 수고해주셔서 감사합니다 영어쓰기에 많은 도움됩니다

두 선생님들의 feed back 5를 듣고 문장 쓰기에 많은 도움이 되었습니다. 감사합니다.

좋아요

좋아요

감사합니다 글쓰는데 반복 단어와, 같은 문장의 패턴을 쓰지 않도록 자세히 설명해주셔서 많은도움이되었습니다

좋아요

좋아요

'사진 속 여자'에 관한 글의 피드백을 보니 영어 글쓰기에 많은 도움이 될 것 같습니다. 피드백으로 고쳐주신 글을 보기 전에는 그 글이 별 문제 없어 보였는데....정말 영어로 바른 글쓰기가 쉽지 않겠습니다. 수정해 주신글로 많은 공부가 되어 감사합니다.

Writing is rewriting 이 매우 흥미롭군요. 초안이 다는 아니지요 다시 쓰고 또 다시 쓰고... 선생님들의 말씀을 참고하여 영어쓰기를 연습해보겠습니다. 감사합니다.

문장과 단락의 차이를 잘 설명해 주셔서 차이점을 확실히 알게되었습니다. 매우 감사합니다.

리아님 목소리 좋아요

리아님 좋아요

리아님 화이팅!!!

It is interesting for your feedback of English writing. And I've learned of the way of introducing myself. Thank's two of you for the correction of the wrong words or sentences. I hope seeing you at the next class. Bye!

공부도 오래 하시고, 강의도 하시는 선생님 두 분이 유투브로 글쓰기를 알려 주신다니! WAZ채널 번창을 응원합니다~

정치와 종교 얘기는 외국에서도 민감한 주제네요. 외국인과 얘기하면 경직되서 말이 안 나오는데 가벼운 내용의 대화를 좀 숙지하고 있어야 겠어요.

기본적인 내용부터 차근차근 알려주니 이해가 잘 되네요. 버터바른 발음이 ASMR로만 들어도 기분이 좋네요~

글쓰기에서 의외로 실수했던 부분이 있네요! 좋은 수업 감사합니다~!! 더 많은 수업 기대하겠습니다~!! 😄😄😄

리아쌤 홧팅

I have enjoyed this contents. Tow of you have had very good job. Thank you so much for your effort. I can't wait the next topics. Have good rest tonight.

대화식 강의 좋네요 귀에 속속 들어오네요