@paragon1917 a sense of fleeting comfort and being thrusted forward into progress without you having a say in the matter. Idk , that's just how it made me feel.
@@matthew953 1. Matthew 6:26. 2. Christmas is no longer about pagan rituals God can make anything in this world about him as he did with Christmas and easter. As long as you don't idolize the tree or Santa it's not a sin. How can celebrating God be a sin? 3. Mark 2:27 and Mathew 12:12. God bless you Matthew. have a beautiful day.
@paragon1917 You can't worship God using customs of the heathen. Read Deuteronomy 12:30-32, Mark 7:6-9, and 1 Corinthians 10:21. Worshipping God in truth is a necessity.
@paragon1917 Matthew 6:26 isn't about the type of food you eat. It's about whether you eat or not at all. Read it in context. Read Leviticus 11, Deuteronomy 14, Isaiah 65:2-6, & Isaiah 66:15-17
@paragon1917 The Messiah calling the Sabbath a day for man means it's a blessing. So don't reject it, or else you won't be in the Messiah's kingdom with the people who keep Sabbath (Isaiah 66:23-24). Yeshua taught that it's lawful to heal sick people, but that doesn't mean you can go work your job as if the day doesn't exist.
@@matthew953 I'm seeing a lot of old testament Brother But we are no longer bound by the old testament laws unless they are repeated in the new testament.. those were laws of a servant not the laws of a son.
Breaking saturday sabbath is sin(Isaiah 66:23-24) And eating pork, lobster shrimp(Isaiah 66:16-17) And doing christmas easter(Deuteronomy 12:30) and praying to statues rosary, cross idols(exodus 20:4)
I love hearing about what people think of when they hear my music its the most valuable advice i can get becuase i often try to play a feeling i can't describe its kind of like a diary of my heart
@@StressHaze i don't know what you mean by "not a moment wasted"? So i assume you were just trying to find something nice to say. I'm sorry it seems i was wrong im glad you like it
@@paragon1917 it seems to have gotten caught in the algorithm wind, many ppl who were just mindlessly swiping up Proly saw it and immediately disliked it. Don't worry.
You gotta learn how to mix and master your voice, and try to put something behind it, either some acoustic guitar or a digital beat. It's really not bad but it's also not good lol but you can get there
Hey man, I'll give you some constructive criticism cause I feel that's way better than anything else people here are saying. I think your voice needs some work, the pitches aren't great but it can be fixed pretty easy with a little effort. Listen back to your voice as often as possible and really focus on what notes are either flat or sharp. That and it's hard to tell what tempo you're currently trying to go at. I suggest practicing it with a metrenome until the whole thing is locked in. The other thing is I think you could do a LOT more with the lyrics. I write a ton of lyrics myself and the best advice I could give you is to get away from a lot of the cliches and get creative with what you're trying to say, basically show don't tell. Rather than just saying "lately I'm going crazy" you could compare that emotion to something else. Keep it up though man! I'm sure you'll have something great come out if you just keep at it
Love the voice, bro But to be honest, I didn't really think the lyrics rhymed or fit well in a sequence, but that's just a personal opinion. I feel like you could actually convert this to a beautiful song if you want to. Good luck!
You have to work on thumbnail and title too to get views. Your current thumbnail is just either completely black or random images. Other than that good work 👍. And yeah I came from the emotional damage of that girl video where all the beef in the comment section was going on, people are devils nowadays they don't support potential creators like you man.
@@KABIGON4445 if he was looking for attention maybe ? But this soft dark warm looking thumbnail doesn't look bad at all. If anything it goes perfectly with the harmony n tune .The video getting progressively darker Reminds me of the warm summer evenings I spent with my cousin playing till sun set at our uncles farm .
Yo have you listened to "noone loves me like you do " ?
@@StressHaze Joji?
@@paragon1917 yup he's the one.
@StressHaze I've heard all his songs lol
Strange beginnings , getting into the feel of things and growing, fire burns ashes remain . Man , im high as fu
Do you play any instrument?
Each drop felt heavier than the last
Still here , nothings changed much
With my music or with your life?
@paragon1917 with the feeling your music has to it
@StressHaze what feeling is that?
@paragon1917 a sense of fleeting comfort and being thrusted forward into progress without you having a say in the matter. Idk , that's just how it made me feel.
@@StressHaze that's a good take on it thanks
So do you get how people who eat pork, break the Sabbath day, and do Christmas don't inherit the kingdom of God?
@@matthew953 1. Matthew 6:26. 2. Christmas is no longer about pagan rituals God can make anything in this world about him as he did with Christmas and easter. As long as you don't idolize the tree or Santa it's not a sin. How can celebrating God be a sin? 3. Mark 2:27 and Mathew 12:12. God bless you Matthew. have a beautiful day.
@paragon1917 You can't worship God using customs of the heathen. Read Deuteronomy 12:30-32, Mark 7:6-9, and 1 Corinthians 10:21. Worshipping God in truth is a necessity.
@paragon1917 Matthew 6:26 isn't about the type of food you eat. It's about whether you eat or not at all. Read it in context. Read Leviticus 11, Deuteronomy 14, Isaiah 65:2-6, & Isaiah 66:15-17
@paragon1917 The Messiah calling the Sabbath a day for man means it's a blessing. So don't reject it, or else you won't be in the Messiah's kingdom with the people who keep Sabbath (Isaiah 66:23-24). Yeshua taught that it's lawful to heal sick people, but that doesn't mean you can go work your job as if the day doesn't exist.
@@matthew953 I'm seeing a lot of old testament Brother But we are no longer bound by the old testament laws unless they are repeated in the new testament.. those were laws of a servant not the laws of a son.
Breaking saturday sabbath is sin(Isaiah 66:23-24) And eating pork, lobster shrimp(Isaiah 66:16-17) And doing christmas easter(Deuteronomy 12:30) and praying to statues rosary, cross idols(exodus 20:4)
Proverbs 28:9 [9]He that turneth away his ear from hearing the law, even his prayer shall be abomination.
Hey hey heyyyyyyyyy Long time no see
@@StressHaze nice to see you again
Ah my heart aches for some reason haha 🥲
That was the intent im glad you felt it
I can imagine this playing over a slow panning video of big green grassy fields with a distant tree and a swing.
I love hearing about what people think of when they hear my music its the most valuable advice i can get becuase i often try to play a feeling i can't describe its kind of like a diary of my heart
Also , hope you're well and light 🤵
Thank you i been theough wringer honestly
@@paragon1917 oh word? Wut happen?
@@StressHaze oh just some stuff dont worry its nothing too serious
@@paragon1917 🧑💻🫀
Want a challenge? liszt - la campanella
I don't remember how I found you to begin with lmao. Glad I did I guess. Sounds soothing b
Ummmm....not a moment wasted. Well wishes and happy Christmas? Life's got me all tangled up for the past few months .
You didnt like the song?
@@paragon1917 why would you ask that ? It's great.
@@StressHaze i don't know what you mean by "not a moment wasted"? So i assume you were just trying to find something nice to say. I'm sorry it seems i was wrong im glad you like it
@@paragon1917 😹
Lovely
Sing
i hate my voice
@@paragon1917 it's the only one we've got. Let's make the most of it. And anyways , urs is wayyy better then mine lmao
@@StressHaze thank you
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The title instantly reminded me of stars wars star killer L
thats what songs named after
👏😏
Woh , how did I miss this Anyway , another good piece to ur collection ✨
Ah. This is kinda relaxing . Feels like I'm listening to someone singing on an empty stage.
Bro just stop 💀
If you have criticism then tell me and i ill take it but don't tell me to abandon my dream and expect me to blindly follow that advice
Lmao u doing like the cartoon version of George F.Kennedy
Its actually just my accent
Wooooooo , ur voice got better ! It's much smoother the Before. Also , what's up ? How's life ?
Thank you I've been training also I'm just going through the wringer but its ok
@@paragon1917 lovely to hear from u every now and then para.
Such soothing sounds u play piano man.
Ur mom
Yes
😔
Is something wrong
@@paragon1917 nothings wrong.
@@StressHaze than whats with the sad face
@@paragon1917 don't over analyse my comment . Not all things have to make sense
I like it when they do tho
Ah it's here ..
Took forever and i still made some mistakes
@@paragon1917 u did ? I didn't even notice one-
@@StressHaze oh good i did tho
@@paragon1917 just means ur getting better :)
@@StressHaze thank you
Joji , hell ya
Idk why but this got like 15 dislikes wtf its not even my music its just and announcement
@@paragon1917 it seems to have gotten caught in the algorithm wind, many ppl who were just mindlessly swiping up Proly saw it and immediately disliked it. Don't worry.
@@StressHaze oh ok thanks
Waitin n waitin , it's started to rain already. When did my blissful ignorance leave me ...I have no clue.
I like this alot could i use it? And would you like to maybe work with me on other projects?
@@paragon1917 yea sure. But I'm really busy with my work rn. Maybe sometime in the future.
@@StressHaze of course
dawg what mf said this shit makes your ears bleed? bro replaced his brain with a cabbage.. nice track tho
Uhhhh , I can't keep staring at this video I feel dizzy ×_÷ gOoD jOb tHo
Keep up the grind💪🏾
My ears it hurts
I hate this
Sorry to hear that maybe im just not for you then
You gotta learn how to mix and master your voice, and try to put something behind it, either some acoustic guitar or a digital beat. It's really not bad but it's also not good lol but you can get there
Thanks for the advice bud i like to keep my music raw just piano and my voice
@@paragon1917 nice 👍 I'll keep an eye out for the full song, I'd like to see how it turns out.
@@monkmane2345 its alread out my friend i put it out a long while ago far before this comment
Lovely . I've always had a special place In my heart for slow piano melodies.
Then you should stick around i do them alot and always pour all i have into em
@@paragon1917 don't have to ask me to stay , I will to see what is to come :]
Beautifully done
Thank you
Keep going bro, you are doing great! Effort is better than talent!
Best backhanded compliment i ever got
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When you check out your homie’s “fire” diss track
Hey man, I'll give you some constructive criticism cause I feel that's way better than anything else people here are saying. I think your voice needs some work, the pitches aren't great but it can be fixed pretty easy with a little effort. Listen back to your voice as often as possible and really focus on what notes are either flat or sharp. That and it's hard to tell what tempo you're currently trying to go at. I suggest practicing it with a metrenome until the whole thing is locked in. The other thing is I think you could do a LOT more with the lyrics. I write a ton of lyrics myself and the best advice I could give you is to get away from a lot of the cliches and get creative with what you're trying to say, basically show don't tell. Rather than just saying "lately I'm going crazy" you could compare that emotion to something else. Keep it up though man! I'm sure you'll have something great come out if you just keep at it
I really appreciate this. Thank you
It's good bruh 😁
Love the voice, bro But to be honest, I didn't really think the lyrics rhymed or fit well in a sequence, but that's just a personal opinion. I feel like you could actually convert this to a beautiful song if you want to. Good luck!
Thank you
You have to work on thumbnail and title too to get views. Your current thumbnail is just either completely black or random images. Other than that good work 👍. And yeah I came from the emotional damage of that girl video where all the beef in the comment section was going on, people are devils nowadays they don't support potential creators like you man.
Thanks
@@paragon1917 I came from that too and I have to say you have potential. Don't give up. The internet is emotionless and cruel.
@@paragon1917 yeah what he said is true Thumbnail is also a very important part of video Make sure you use the good ones
@@KABIGON4445 if he was looking for attention maybe ? But this soft dark warm looking thumbnail doesn't look bad at all. If anything it goes perfectly with the harmony n tune .The video getting progressively darker Reminds me of the warm summer evenings I spent with my cousin playing till sun set at our uncles farm .
@@StressHaze does any word in my sentence means "bad" 🌚 I think not🌚 Make sure you read things carefully