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What happened, about 30:11 the story went from the Empire about to attack to the Empire had been driven back. I'm confused.

Is it possible that the name on this is wrong, I am 30 minutes into it and I've seen no alien girls.

Oh wonderful.... More regurgitated, repetitive, misspelled, ungrammatical and punctuated garbage...

Cheer~~~too many to be counted (usually not in hyperbolic use).(I thank you immensely.)😊

This story was disjointed. It didn’t have good flow and needs a lot of filler. It should be twice as long as it was.

Your Story writing Skills are: REALY POOR.

The frozen soldier stood there... Frozen, as if the frozen soldier had been frozen for too long, the long frozen, frozen soldier stired but they were frozen so the frozen soldier laid frozen in a frozen posture

Good story, but it's too repetitive

Good story mate😊

How many times did they have to take the lead when they were already in the lead?.

BOLLOCKSS

So it repeated at the end. >.<

Cool

Too much repetition!