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incredible. i just got done reading romans 1-5, and this poem fits perfectly with it. your videos are inspiring

Great, just be mindful of your background music. I understand the affect that it causes for the intensity but it can be distracting to the viewer to where we cannot hear you clearly. The words are powerful and relatable keep going.

I love it but there is always things for you to work on. When you are delivering your poem make sure you enunciate each word clearly, even though in your head it might sound clear it may not be. There were times when you would be saying something so fast that I did not understand what you were saying. With all that said it was great, loved the words and video and as a matter of fact I'm going to show it to my teacher when spring break is over. Don't stop, great job.

Nice work Poet !!!

I love it !