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Keep it up! You're getting better!

Hmm, way better than og if I'm not lying. Keep it up! If you need advice I'm here!

Try to take your time with the song, and not to rush in it at all.

When Stewie comes up, you should take out some inst until the song resumes to before, or you should add more inst. When making the song, you should at least have one part that says "This is the main part of the song". That main part of the song should be the best part of the song. Towards the end, you should probably reference the beginning again, like when Edd and Tom were singing, but add Stewie in that.

And try having the song add up to 5 or 4. And when you speed it up, have it be 2.5 or 2. As it'll speed up just right enough. If you choose for the beat to be longer, like 9 or 10, then the same rule applies, just split in half when you make it faster. Try using audio clips and riser and symbol for parts that let you know, "The song is gonna change after this point" Like when Stewie comes in, or when Edd shows corrupted. But make sure the the riser and symbol isn't too loud or too quiet, or too weak. On Edds FAKER part, try using reverb 1 or 2, and do the same to Tom, as it'll sound like a flashback/faker part.

The song needs improvement for sure, but however I do say that it could be the inst and the vocals don't fit up too well. The drums snare should be percussion, or something less... loud... Maybe try adding hat in between the percussion and kick.