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Should have turned this into tropical house or something, wasted potential idea.

Too much clashing, bassline is super busy, guitar ringing is a lot here.

This one sounds too much like the others. Maybe spice up how you introduce drums.

I think the biggest issue for this one is just sound selection is super niche, and the quality of the guitar sounds very plucky and reveals itself as midi notes rather than sounding cohesive (hard issus to fix so no real flame).

A beat with a short melody needs more respect in the arrangement to not be too repetitive. Try layering the melody with the same melody and new sound when the percussion hits to make a soft drop for some energy, and add a small reverse crash right before percussion to lead into it.

nice. i think kick sound is only problem of this song. hehe

first comment

love this

I am the newbie too, I look at your music and decide to public my music sooner. Because I think even my music is gud, bad, boring or listeners toughly criticize but it is important to have for improvement. To this track, I think you have idea but i cannot feel the genre of music. The sound you put in does not match with each others. The kick is hard, the lead is like rnb 90', the pad is soft. The tempo u need to increase, it may be slow and cannot bring real your idea on. There is no surprise point in this track. It smoothly pass and remain no inpression. Anyway, love your hard work and hopefully you work more, listen more, then the best result will come, I believe.

What daw is this

Keep grinding bro

THIS IS RLLY COOL what do you use?

For first time this ain’t bad I remember my first time😢

keep it going🤗

good beat bro, but you gotta work on arrangement, learn if a section is too busy or not, learn to mix properly, learn about bpm , learn what instruments are in mono and stereo

software?

Let's see those automaton channels, too.

keep it up bro

keep working on it

CHARLY ON THE BEAT 🗣️🗣️🔥🔥