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So who are the blonde and the redhead?

Jack should at least have had a Towel for the first battle...

How many heroes are there with the last name of "Carter"?

And part 2

The moment Alex starts to talk about failure is when I know Alex is a wimp

If the device draws energy from space -- why did Jake have to plug it into a power port before demonstrating it? And why did it draw energy from other devices near it? Doesn't make sense. And if the story is about a shoebox-sized box, why do all the illustrations show an Arthurian, Excaliber-like sword? There is nothing in this story that makes any sense. 👎 👎 👎

waist of time . repeat in half way

LAME

story was as expected but your AI art work was ridiculous . AI makes a lot of mistakes so you need to pay attention to what you put on screen . one good picture would have been better than all the messed up pictures that you used unless looking stupid was what you were going for in which case it was a great success

Where did you get the pictures? Really. Great.

Great story 👏

I wonder if it was the same John Carter of Mars

Get rid of the silhouette.

Hate the narrators speech pattern... Your story is to slow, get to the point......

Damn, the ai animations are so cursed 😂 reminds me of "Mass Effect Andromeda" 😂

Wonderful story!!! Waiting for part #2!!!❤

Enjoy your work

Those scary crayons!

Darn shapeshifters

While I'm greatly enjoying these stories.. don't start something you cannot finish. Leaving a reader hanging will get you ignored later.

wth......that pictures are weird....arm angles disconnected....why is that leg just floating there not connected to anyone???.......

so did anyone notice that the number of fingers on her hand seems to change every time the picture changes?

Did I misunderstand the beginning of the story said the enemy had left and in no time there were foot patrols and things hovering scanning for survivors? Very confusing. And what the heck happened to his radio? When he needs it it's MIA? And yes please do away with the captions, thanks.

why is it ALWAYS glowing luministic blue skin?

Great story about the blood of the covenant being thicker than the water of the womb

Please DITCH THE CAPTIONS. They interfere with the story; if anyone needs them, YT's closed captioning works at least as well - smaller and less interference with the visual(s). I notice a few content creators have begun discontinuing captions. Many upvotes & shares to those who do. Thanks for your consideration.

Agreed I don't support half stories, and I wish the artwork matched the people described in the story, these things leave you hanging, I don't like this at all

This one is one of the better stories really liked it

In your videos, you provide text with the narration. The trouble is that your text is often not correct. This shows sloppiness and should not be tolerated.

Three-fingered human hands? Well, it's a change from six. How about averaging it?

Love the picture of the HEADLESS person walking along with the others.

The first picture of the child sitting on the sholder of the man does not fit!

X-37

E=THEN=ETHAN

Where the hell did the army come from.

Nice but the jump to the final battle is unexplained and too sudden

Too many ‘unredable’ expressions

The storyline isn't bad, but whoever is writing for your AI reader is terrible! A "hare" is a rabbit. The would you are looking for is "Heir."

Q: Why was the hair in stasis? A: They were out of shampoo and conditioner.

Obsidian armor? Obsidian is volcanic glass -- it's brittle and it shatters. Hardly suitable for armor. Just another example of AI throwing around impressive sounding words without having any idea what they mean.

And when did they get an army to go to war with a bunch of outcasts?

Can you get the pronunciations right. It's annoyjng

What happened with the competition of warriors?

Chat GPT thinks all alien females are named Lyra. And all humans are Chen, Rodriguez, or Patiell. And all new things are Unprecedented.

I enjoyed listening to this story 👍...

Another unfinished story....

This is a good story, a reasonable amount of suspense, and a decidedly good freedom from the usual sappy “and then he got her pregnant and they lived happily ever after on the planet earth making hybrid babies“ ending. I have no qualms with the idea of hybrid babies. It just gets a little sappy and a little overwhelming when so many stories are like that. Plus, it’s much more likely that an alien would want to feed off of humans then make with them. It is not impossible statistically, mathematically, that lifeforms would evolve on other planets similar enough to human beings, using basically the same sort of carbon based biology, and DNA, that humans and those aliens could be genetically compatible. But it is infinitesimally small as far as chances go. Much more likely that humans and aliens, if there were ever a way to come into contact, would either war with each other for resources, or might establish trade, even friendship perhaps. But intermarried interbreed? Intermarry, possibly. But it would be a sterile union. Interbreed, almost certainly not possible.

I do agree another science fiction story that doesn't match the title to the story what a shame the story just came to an end leaving a person hanging

ETHAN

Two parts are mixed up. Not great.