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Mr Tim's Classroom
Australia
เข้าร่วมเมื่อ 1 ก.ย. 2019
Mr Tim's Classroom is a weekly broadcast targeting parents and primary aged school children. The objective of this channel is to provide parents with up-to-date information and content on a range of parenting related issues related to education and the well-being of children. The impetus for this vision is two fold. Firstly, the channel will address a myriad of myths, misinformation, and money-grabbing tactics by unscrupulous commercial 'education' operators. There are so many products promising all sorts of remedies and solutions to enhance children's academic performance. My aim is to provide honest, genuine input based on 20 years of experience in the education sector to empower parents to make wise, child-centred decisions, as opposed to anxiety-driven choices that neither serve the child or the financial investment required. Secondly, the channel offers, engaging and encouraging writing lessons to equip children with powerful tips and techniques for success in the classroom.
How to Show Not Tell When Writing Creatively (Surprise Visit from Charlie the Chicken)
FREE WORKSHEET: drive.google.com/file/d/1bmAUU6L9CEV0OzagBsXwLF0VtpI6u0fC/view?usp=drive_link
The Show Not Tell writing technique is used in various types of creative writing. It allows for the reader to experience the story and characters through actions, thoughts, sensory details, and feelings, rather than just a factual description. Using this technique helps paint a picture of the scene for readers.
Enjoy this short video and download the attached worksheet. Try it at home and let me know how it goes! :)
Timestamps:
00:00 Intro
00:31 Charlie the Chicken?!
01:56 Lesson Intro
03:33 Example 1
04:09 Example 2 (Sad)
04:52 Example 3 (Scared)
05:52 Example 4 (Happy)
06:32 Example 5 (Surprised)
07:10 Things to Remember
07:56 Free Worksheets
08:10 Outro
The Show Not Tell writing technique is used in various types of creative writing. It allows for the reader to experience the story and characters through actions, thoughts, sensory details, and feelings, rather than just a factual description. Using this technique helps paint a picture of the scene for readers.
Enjoy this short video and download the attached worksheet. Try it at home and let me know how it goes! :)
Timestamps:
00:00 Intro
00:31 Charlie the Chicken?!
01:56 Lesson Intro
03:33 Example 1
04:09 Example 2 (Sad)
04:52 Example 3 (Scared)
05:52 Example 4 (Happy)
06:32 Example 5 (Surprised)
07:10 Things to Remember
07:56 Free Worksheets
08:10 Outro
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Thanks a lot
You presented the lesson in a format that is so easy to understand and apply thank you
nice
This is actually really helpful
Thank you
Excellent presentation. Easy to follow and put into practice
Thank you
Thanks for this video. Even thought Im not a kid, I still found this very helpful XD
"Thanks so much! Keep up the good work. It made a big difference for me during exam time."
I am waiting for next video!!❤
Working on creative writing with my boys at home later today. We will be watching this video before we get started.
Hi
It is dan
Thank you so much I have a creative writing competition and I hope I win this thanks a lot for the 7tips
Mr Tim! I’m Mo! See you on 24th July!
this video was so great
i used to get taught by you Im Justin :)
Wow this video is awesome
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Keep going Tr. Tim your teaching is good and memorable!
No worries if students
Thank you great job keep up the great work 😊
sham-poo
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Really helpful and informative.
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hi mr tim! its me jayden cai! i was in your Monday class meeting today! hope you have a great time!
Your business looks like it can make u money😂
the most useful video ever. .pls make more vids
It is a really high quality video considering the number of views.
Wonderful!!!
Best video after a longggg morning of searching. Thank you!
Thank you. I had fun making it. I plan to make many more (: Glad you found it useful.
@@mrtimsclassroom5023 the best video I've ever seen about creative writing
This is perfect. Helping my kids with their creative writing at home, and this is an excellent resource, thank you.
Hi Tim I’m iris Esther’s friend from pacific hills
Hi Iris... thanks for watching my video (:
🏃 Promo>SM
Great. A question! 4:50 don't you think that "would" would be there instead of "was" Furniture would gone
Hi, thanks so much for your questions. You mean in the following "What if you woke up one morning and all your furniture was floating?" you mean replace 'was' with 'would'? It should be 'was' because it is a hypothetical scenario that occurred in the past as a stimulus for a story. The idea being that the writer imagines this had happened and then writes a story based on the idea.
I had mr Tim as a teacher for 4 years and I have gone from a D- student in English to an A+ student. Mr Tim is the best teacher ever!!!! Definitely should get him to tutor your kids!
Thank you and great to hear!
Nice explanation this helps a lot
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Hi MR TIM your video has really helped me a lot in my writing thank you for your help
Great to hear Ahmad. Glad it helped (:
Hi Mr Tim, its Adam, great video, it was helpful for the mega quiz!!!!!!!!
Glad you enjoyed it Adam (:
Very helpful and presented well ..please do more videos.
He's my dad
Oh really?
Dear Mr Tim, thank you for your wonderful class, it is help me a lot writing in school. Thank you. From Mark
My Pleasure Mark. What a star you are!!
Hi Mr Tim
Hi Lawrence... thanks for watching
very unique style. the website as in the description is not working. Would like to hear more of your talks
Nice video Mr Tim it’s me Lachlan
Mr Tim, it's Jane and your video really helps. Thank you!