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i love those blue skin

And you want to know the worst part, this actually seemed like a potentially pretty interesting story but I just can't get past the god damn redundancies. Thumbs down for not even putting forth minimal effort.

Forget editing, did anyone even proofread this sloppy pile of dog shit? He goes to their house to have conversation with mother, introduce themselves, walk into house to have conversation, then out of nowhere they're on transport to a different building, meeting mother for first time again and introductions again, they go on a walk to a table to talk, talk for five seconds at the table then it's let's go have a conversation on a walk? What the fuck was the point of going to the table then. For fucks sake if you're going to use AI to churn up some bullshit you could atleast put in the effort to proofread and erase redundancies. Lazy bastards

What a LETDOWN. Life is too HARD & HEAVY. why make the REALITY OF LIFE destroy a story.

Lavender skin and silvery hair?? The picture shows a lady with light blue shin and reddish hair. Since you have to make the picture in the first place the least you could do is tweak the colors right. Or is it my monitor that is off, but only here? 😞

Disappointed in this story. BLAH, BLAH, BLAH. Anybody knows the BEST way to get warm is not only by Fire but Making-Love. Or you just want to talk the same words Endless?

please make a part 2 for this story

Interesting dynamic to the story. It flowed one way in the beginning and switched to a different tangent.

Tension with a lame release twelve words excluded? So if it were the point why do it at all???! Just broken and so, so very Lame I wished to put it out of my misery.

Great start to the story. Definitely needs a part two😊😊😊😊

Hey, at least there’s a nice picture! LOL

Wait a minute didn’t he just say that the ship was warm? Why leave the ship for a cold cave? And maybe she had food on the ship for the both of them?

But something far worse... A woman 😂🤣

This story repeats and is all chopped up.

how are they using hand weapons while flying through the battlefield on a ship. Sometimes they seem to be on a station and sometimes on a ship. Come on now. At least proofread your AI stories.

Yeah...I'm thinking, I just ain't high enough to follow this story. The plot changed somewhere, it's like there were 2 versions of a story with same character names, but different roles.

I like this story and the lovely princess (?) looking so so superficial and and party goer treating him as a primitive pet and not totally stupid showing off to her guests. When he discovered at a party that there was a conspiracy among her guests he decided to help her so he warned her. Afterwards the failed conspiracy he realised that she was far more powerful and realised that she was a master manipulator and extremely intelligent. She offered him power and why not love ❤? They will fall in love ❤...

Oh, come on. This story should've been at least 10-15 minutes shorter! It's simply crap with all these repetitions and beating around the bush. The plot in the story gave you a golden opportunity to go into details about understanding human emotions, which you utterly wasted. and where the story ended..... JEEZ 😖 it's like an action movie with lots of battle but with no substance.

This would be a great book!

Baby lock them doors and turn the lights down low

I like story very much, looking forward to see more of your videos

The story didn't flow. They spent a large amount of time changing traps and then went somewhere else to the weapon. It made no sense just a human team went through traps and other delaying features of the palace only to find the enemy already at the goal line. It seemed it seems very disjointed and quite illogical.

Why does the mc in all these hfy stories have the mental faculties of a teenage kid.

Needs a sequel

This could be refined into a good story but it needs some of the repetition removed; and a quick comment somewhere about why the nurse was incapable of finding a "MATE" which should be the natural outcome and final state that ends the frenzy.

King of anti-climax stories. I think I've seen 3 of this kind of ending, with twists, in a row.

Gender Swap Crap

Here we go again with 'click-bait' slides that show an alien female that's maaaaybe 5'ft10"inches tall😏 (1.778 meters.!), and the narration reveals she's 9'ft tall☹️ (2.743 meters.!) That's a bit of a stretch. 😎 I'm 5'ft11.5"inches tall(dammit!!! Why couldn't I get that other .5"inches.?!) The tallest 'chick' I ever dated was 6'2". Not as big as deal as some men tend to think if you make up for size difference in other areas😎. It was our friends that hangups about our hieght difference. We started out as friends 1st, and gradually grew to enjoying spending time together. That was 37 yrs ago. My wife of 20yrs is 5'ft3"inches. Have to admit, I prefer it.

Yet, thanks to this story, I'll never know whether they were rescued nor by which species. I'll never know how their relationship adjusted to a rescue nor whether her species would accept their relationship. And so forth. You destroyed this story because, frankly, you do not understand the elements required of a story. You don't shut the story down right in the middle. This is a story that only succeeds if you wrote a Part 2; maybe a Part 3. Guess it doesn't much matter because you will just keep posting the same bunk over and over. It is frustrating and I'll use TH-cam's Do Not Recommend Channel Again feature. See Ya.

I liked it, would love a 2nd episode

So...the guy has a breech in the station's hull, and spends critical time explaining human societal norms to a pair of alien babes. This is NOT a serious scifi author...on the plus side, at least it's not dino porn.

This is undoubtedly one of the most ridiculous, tediously, infantile "stories" I have ever listened to. Just how many times can you repeat ABSOLUTELY NOTHING? AND, they are quick studies, learning each other's new language, customs, idioms....so, how long did it take to teach her what a KISS is? How long did it take to be sure they could eat the little critters? Did they have fur? What did the little critters eat? And where? I think I would be tracking THEM. And, are we really supposed to believe that it is warmer in a tiny cave then in her ship that was safely enclosed??? What were they burning to keep the cave warm? Were there more blankets in the ships? Beds? Mattresses? Flashlights? Candles? Metal? Couldn't they merge supplies? What... There wasn't a SECOND COAT???? This story is so ridiculously written. Apparently, the people in the future are so unprepared and stupid that they don't think to bring emergency supplies as they travel IN SPACE. Like, gee, what could possibly go wrong THERE, Beev?? Maybe I should have brought some protein bars, flares, SOMETHING TO KEEP WARM IN, and TOILET PAPER! A tent for use in the sub zero climates of SPACE!!!!! SURE WOULDN'T HAVE HURT! SET THAT BABY UP INSIDE these metal walls to protect from the cold of SPACE.... And at least use the toilet!!!! I am sorry. I just can't turn off my brain when I listen to, or read, one of these insufferable, idiotic stories! ... And when I read a review that says SUCH A LOVELY STORY!!! ...OH NO. NO YOU DIDN'T... YOU REALLY DIDN'T....I guess I need what you are smoking! Otherwise, Don't waste your time on this. You will be very disappointed.

Well, just a really improbable coincidence! Never a ship had an emergency landing there on this planet in millions of years and no not only within minutes, but also close enough to each other to see the crash from the other landing point. She seems otherworldly? Well, on earth she would be, on her planet he would be, and on this planet both are; they felt the closeness neither of them had anticipated - maybe because she is still unconscious?

Repeating the story is not recommended. It turns you off from listening to the story. You have done this way to often

I like your stories but I wonder why you repeat certain sentence over again!!!

Very lovely story