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HI I'm 2 years late. It looks as though you have not posted for quite a while. I suspect you won't see this post. I like what you have done. Your videos are clear and well done. I do want to encourage you. It seems your voice is getting lost or overlooked. There are a bunch of people putting out similar things now. Perhaps if you pulled all your posts. Then, simply re-post one a week, just as before. That is if you have time, patience, etc. At least they would have a more current date on them. Hopefully, you get more views. With AI getting popular, there may be a lot more people looking around for guidance. I'm going to look into that a little myself. For doing shorter things. It may prove useful. I don't want to get or make an AI written book, but it may make for a useful tool. I did look a little once before (editing). I am not sure that I can afford your, or for that matter, anyone's rates. That is NOT an attempt to get the price down. Just a fact. You have value. Don't give your skilled work for free. I will check again. I wish you luck.

Fantastic advice, I love your teaching style.

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Excellent explanations and clear "How to" steps for formatting manuscripts. Thank you!

Your content is a GOLD MINE. thank you for all the hard effort put into these, they're so useful 😍

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These is well explained thank you. I believe you find what you need at a given time and i am glad i found you...🙂🫶

maybe also add to use all five senses

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Where did you go? Good video

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I am curious how you feel about it now

Awesome video!

What if the character is telling or narrating her own story though? For example, in a character bio that is not necessarily for a novel but for some other medium.

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Very helpful, bridgette. This one was the best for me, so far. I will keep pressing in.👍

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Madam Powers! Are this channel and your writer coaching website still active? Are we getting a sequel to Keeper of Shadows? I am 2/3 of the way through and absolutely loving it. I need more! Also, I found you recently and 100% agree that you’re underrated. The tools you have provided have been invaluable.

This was the best video on transitions. This video should have more views! Thank you so much!

I would love more explanation on active descriptions. And examples are SO helpful. Thank you. 🌷

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What about a fight scene in which one character is using a large dildo like it’s a light saber, while his opponent is using two dildos like a pair of nunchucks. How would you describe that fight scene.😂😂😅😅😅🤣🤣😆😆

Don’t you mean, faster then a slave master cracking his whip on the back of a run away slave? 😅😅😂😂😂

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I wish I can put into words how thankful I am for this video. You've explained it in a very considerately paced, non-intimidating way. Thank you so much.

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Thank you! This was an extremely helpful video.

Love the way you break down these subjects. 💪🏿

Thank you!

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Your web site says, "The Ultimate Guide to Dialogue Puncturation"

we are interested to learn how to make fast pacing in a story.

I enjoyed this video, thanks for putting it out into the world for us

can you make videos for how to write a gripping screenplay?

I loved the examples of the active description- i haven’t heard other people discuss this, and I’m excited to comb my manuscript with this now ❤❤

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I really enjoy this and I’m learning a lot from you. I’m grateful for what you doing.

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Your videos are packed with useful information! I'm so glad you're taking the time to explain these points to us. I particularly like your examples. They bring the information to life. Thank you so much. Love from Colorado.

I'm British so imagine the differences you find in our country. We have a lot more dialects than you have in the states. Also kids talk different from adults. As a middle grade writer, I have to be aware of that.

Great video. I'm finishing a historical novel, (based on a true story) sending the manuscript to my publisher and editor at the end of this year. I used the whole listing of types of scenes as a checklist, what you've listed here strengthens my confidence that I've written a well-structured story on instinct. By the way, the book is in Dutch. Unless it becomes an overwhelming success, I guess there will be no English translation.