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And why do you keep saying the likes of someone that doesn’t make sense either lol… good story idea tho

The dragon wouldn’t have called Goku by that name idk how that made sense to you smh

rage Form Goku is cool

I hppe you feel better

Im so glad youre continuing this story. You really put in so much effort into your videos, and its appreicated and recognized!

First off congrats on another awesome part. Secondly, WOW I was wondering how you’d go about the training arc, and you DELIVERED, also great ideas with Krillin keeping his body and making the permanent death have an impact. Keep up the good work and don’t be scared to kill people off just make it worth it !!!!

Wish you good recovery please continue

I don't get to see any pokemon what if stories,this needs to happen more often XD I like it also.....I'm still a new writer even though I started back in 2021 or 2022 then I stopped for a year for whatever reason even though I have ideas in my head,weird,people have told me writers block,but how can that be if you have ideas? but it might be the same way with artblock,like I can still draw if I have ideas (or don't,but that's harder) I want to write a pokemon story,but I keep running into problems that's just a me thing apparently,I was following the anime with my story (cause without that names of towns and characters would be entirely different cause of my forgetfulness ;-; ) but then I started thinking of the problem I started thinking of and the reason it made me stop writing,,how will I age ash's friends when he meets them? cause in my story I do want to age him up for every gen,but I've not solved that problem,no one seems to know the answer me question on that when I ask ;-;

there's so many dragon ball what if stoy tellers on youtube and I'm still finding new ones every now and then,I like your story so far,no idea why youtube recommended me part 3 instead of 1,I like to go in order youtube XD

I really hope yamcha gets even more character development

Kingler jolteon would be my choices in kanto as well

This is a banger keep going and hope u feel better

I would like to see another part

It's nice hearing an update on Krillin and Master Roshi while Goku trains King Kai, but it's unfortunate to hear about Chiaotzu's situation. 🫤 Seen Goku and Krillin training together again is nice moment for them, and even in the afterlife, it seems like Krillin found somebody he could be with. 🙂 I wonder if Gohan kept his tail or not, because if so that could come in handy against the Saiyans although kind of a double-edged sword. Maybe Raditz turns against Vegeta and Nappa in the fight when seen Gohan it remind him of Gine like how Goku reminded him of Bardock. 🤔 Finally curious to see just how stronger everybody is in the next part. 👍 Anyways another really good part, and looking forward to the next part soon.

I very much enjoyed this part, but please do take care of yourself first. Take all the time you need to recover, and only post when you're sure you feel up to it. With that said, I am looking forward to the next part whenever you can make it but no rush. :)

Thanks for doing this even though you were sick.

I wonder if Tien will wish for saiyan potiential or hybrid potiential of a triclops and saiyan. I know its out of character for him but seeing how the risk are higher here for him I don't blame him

Gotta say love tien's character in this you're doing justice

Probably my favorite what if right now hope you get better soon

Great video bro. Cant varit for the next part

You have no need to apologize. I pray that you feel better, but take the time to recover and focus on your health.

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Woah I really enjoyed this what if anyways I pray you get better and continue to make videos also you NEED to take a brake because of your illness some resting will help.

SUPPPER ❤ The amount of characterization, callbacks, power increases, and attention to Dbz world details is very true to form! 🎉 It'll be cool to see if Raditz regrets his actions and defies Vegeta, or joins the Saiyans in an early grace?! Really though, Goku should be able to take them all down easily, I wouldn't mind if you low-ball and just give him the 19x increase he got in cannon. 1,600 x 19 = 30,400 That's not even counting Goku having training partners, extra time, a more GT like attitude, or even mastering his techniques better! Here's hoping no one bites it before he gets there though 😢 But we all know Popo's pecking order.

wow i really enjoyed this part and i hope you will recover from the illness and take your time, we can wait for the next video

This part is so tragic but also such a good addition, i really hope this continues you are such an eloquent story teller thank you for another amazing part

I think goku and gohan are gonna need False ssj and the wrathful form respectively in order to combat against vegeta and nappa oh and Radtiz to and maybe you can reference sparking zero by having goku go into the real ssj against great app vegeta

I was delighted to see part 3 come out today i really like qhere this is going too and very interested to see where it goes in the future

First also pfft Krillen still a kid so he a short king😂

That soild team for gen one story buster also I made ya your Pokémon team in my channel in a app so if you do gen two for your Pokémon team then I will make it right way

That's a solid team not gonna lie

Really cool whafvif

Ay, Kingler, Jolteon and Tauros! Honestly very solid picks

I have done so many stories of this exact topic in VCs with friends. Vegeta and chichi get together because of anger at goku and train together, raditz was brought back, Piccolo fused with some of his people, tien, krillin, chaotzu, yamcha and chichi all went to king kai for training, learned kaioken and unique techs. Yamcha Spirit wolf fist (charged hands with energy claws) Chaotzu Spirit telekinesis (freeze target and attack them with spirit energy like being center of spirit bomb) Krillin Kaionzan (kaioken infused kienzan/destructo disc) Tien Kaio kikoho (he uses up life to use it normally but this gives him a multiplier that gives him more with less) Chichi Kaioken x50 to 100 as opposed to the others x10-20. She is the ox kings daughter after all. Piccolo gained better base and more regen from his people and kaioken x2 at max. It rips his cells but his regen heals him, constant increase to his base that never stops. Raditz makes a monday through sunday, week, month, year, decade and century moveset, goes majin and never ss3 Gohan never stopped training Vegeta jr and trunks(in place of goten) Are taught better even by their big bro gohan Android 18 gets the android 17 treatment and gains super 18(no massive forehead) Buu gets slain by vegeta and chichi, dark buu was the energy overflow when they were giving energy to buu before his awakening and became super buu in appearance not kid buu) yamcha, chichi, tien and gohan got mystic form but were ultimately absorbed one by one because they had no time to get acclimated. Goku and raditz had to fuse but that was permanent(no cop-out bs here. That was the original plan by toriyama) Cell was stronger but defeated by raditz and goku with help from vegetajr, vegeta and gohan. Freiza was defeated by goku and yamcha, but raditz and piccolo tried to demolish the remains. I did the frieza gets with yamcha storyline. A bit differently but still. Frieza isn't an enemy anymore. Big contention with raditz and vegeta. But ultimately not a big problem except for a few massive fights. No golden frieza enemy. Yamcha and frieza do leave together for awhile. they are not seen again until after the cell saga. King cold came alone for revenge but... he did some training. it was a decent fight but he was defeated by vegeta jr. I wanted to give the humans something useful as well as shore up wasted potential. I wanted fights to be more than MC is the only one that can win. Even though I didn't mention big wins for the others like tien choutzu, or piccolo but I did cover the movies a few times and made them canon in my retellings. They get Ws vs movie villains. If you are curious hit me up sometime and we can chat on discord.

*gasp* he dares question Lord Helix's power!? Edit: On another note, Ash is an absolute monster in the Anime. Bro throws entire trees as if they are twigs and hold Cosmoem with a single hand. Cosmoem! The darn thing weighs a metric ton! On another note, Solgaleo not being Psychic/Fire type and Lunala not being Psychic/Dark type is annoying me a bit. Their canon types of Psychic/Steel and Psychic/Ghost make absolutely no sense in relation to their names, nor their lore.

Istg they gotta lock in when majin buu comes around

1:22:30 hes stronger hes smarter hes better

What if Goku fell in love with Launch?

The return of the true darkest timeline. But man Nappa is a true friend.

Algorithim Fuel⛽️

You thought that you could write vinland saga and we wouldn't notice

Yknow what I just realised, so far this story is basically just vinland saga

Would goku still transform to ssj?

My kanto team would consist of Tidalwave the Blastoise, Drillbit the Beedrill, Swoop the Aerodactyl, Ectotron the Gengar, Sparkplug the Electabuzz, Rhinox the Rhydon