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Plotwell creates videos and courses centred on story structure. Our first series, Unstructured, dissects popular movies that break the rules. If you want to learn more about story structure, visit plotwell.ca and check out How To Speak Story Structure, a 10-part course covering the fundamentals of storytelling that will help you nail your movie, novel, and musical.
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How to Build a Story AROUND Your Character
Do you have an idea for an incredible character, but you don't quite know what story to fit them into? What if instead, you built your story AROUND your incredible character? In this lesson, we're diving into how you can link a great character to the Three Core Elements, and the two main roles they might fill in your story!
(Turning a Character Into a Story)
This is a lesson from Plotwell's mini-course "Story Structure Foundations". You can watch the other lessons here:
Lesson 1: The Three Core Elements - th-cam.com/video/AzU4u9lZk9M/w-d-xo.html
Lesson 2: Starting With A Premise - th-cam.com/video/Ol8SHMo3Ego/w-d-xo.html
Lesson 3: Starting With a Character - THIS VIDEO
Lesson 4: Starting With an Event - COMING SOON
Lesson 5: Fixing Your First Draft - COMING SOON
Lesson 6: Different Mediums - COMING SOON
Lesson 7: Other Mediums - COMING SOON
This mini-course is a part of a FREE mega-course available now! To watch these videos and more, click the link and start your journey today: plotwell.podia.com/the-ultimate-story-structure-mega-course
00:00 Introduction
00:38 The Two Roles for your Character
01:04 Turning Your Character into the Protag
03:34 Turning Your Character into the Antag
04:33 Outroduction
At Plotwell, we make online courses focused on story structure, whether for novels, movie, screenplays, manuscripts, stageplays, musicals... the list goes on. Whatever your story, learn to tell it in an engaging way. Improve your plot, master theme, power-up your character arcs and make your story memorable. Our free writing courses are available through our website, plotwell.ca or plotwell.podia.com/ - start your storytelling journey today.
(Turning a Character Into a Story)
This is a lesson from Plotwell's mini-course "Story Structure Foundations". You can watch the other lessons here:
Lesson 1: The Three Core Elements - th-cam.com/video/AzU4u9lZk9M/w-d-xo.html
Lesson 2: Starting With A Premise - th-cam.com/video/Ol8SHMo3Ego/w-d-xo.html
Lesson 3: Starting With a Character - THIS VIDEO
Lesson 4: Starting With an Event - COMING SOON
Lesson 5: Fixing Your First Draft - COMING SOON
Lesson 6: Different Mediums - COMING SOON
Lesson 7: Other Mediums - COMING SOON
This mini-course is a part of a FREE mega-course available now! To watch these videos and more, click the link and start your journey today: plotwell.podia.com/the-ultimate-story-structure-mega-course
00:00 Introduction
00:38 The Two Roles for your Character
01:04 Turning Your Character into the Protag
03:34 Turning Your Character into the Antag
04:33 Outroduction
At Plotwell, we make online courses focused on story structure, whether for novels, movie, screenplays, manuscripts, stageplays, musicals... the list goes on. Whatever your story, learn to tell it in an engaging way. Improve your plot, master theme, power-up your character arcs and make your story memorable. Our free writing courses are available through our website, plotwell.ca or plotwell.podia.com/ - start your storytelling journey today.
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Turning Your Premise Into a Complete Story
มุมมอง 167ปีที่แล้ว
Do you have a killer premise that you don't quite know how to turn into a story? In this lesson, we're exploring exactly how to overcome this hurdle and milk every last drop from your incredible premise using the Three Core Elements. Plus, we'll show you an example of how to connect your premise to the Three Core Elements so you can flesh out your story from there. (Outlining Your Story From A ...
3 SECRETS to outline your story in under 5 MINUTES!
มุมมอง 119ปีที่แล้ว
What if you had three secrets that could help you outline your whole novel, screenplay, book, film, or story in under 5 minutes? It seems too good to be true - but with the power of Universal Story Language, it is not only possible, but easy! And in this lesson, we'll be jumping into the Goal, the Need, and the Antagonist to see how nailing down these three essential parts of your story's core ...
The Ultimate Tool to Write a Symmetrical Story
มุมมอง 238ปีที่แล้ว
Humans love symmetry - so shouldn't your storytelling reflect that? In this lesson, we're diving into Universal Story Language's symmetry to help you create a more balanced story, including how each step reflects another, the two sections that reflect one another, and how to make sure that your story reflects itself to create a more powerful and impactful story. (Fixing Your Story with Symmetry...
How to visualize story structure - the symbols of storytelling
มุมมอง 800ปีที่แล้ว
No matter what story structure or storytelling method you use, you may have trouble actually visualizing what all those terms like Climax and Inciting Incident actually mean. So what if there was a set of symbols that walked through each step of your story? In this lesson, we're covering the symbols of Universal Story Language so that you can easily picture each step of your story, and easily r...
How to write the perfect ending to your story.
มุมมอง 201ปีที่แล้ว
What is the secret to an incredible ending? It's simpler than you might think - it all comes down to your Aftermath. And in this lesson, we're diving into the Aftermath to learn exactly how to nail the end of your story, whether with a song, dance, or celebration, and all the secrets to writing a good ending to your story. (Writing the Aftermath) This is a lesson from Plotwell's mini-course "St...
Don't mess up the most important scene in your story.
มุมมอง 77ปีที่แล้ว
Everything in your story has been building up to this - the Story Climax. But before you write this pivotal moment in your story, you need to make sure you know exactly what this scene needs to do. In this lesson, we're exploring the Story Climax, including how to write the climax of your story, how to write a great ending, and how to make sure you nail your finale and create an unforgettable s...
Before you finish your story, WRITE THIS.
มุมมอง 52ปีที่แล้ว
Before you write your Story Climax and bring your story to an unforgettable end, there is one secret scene that you need to include to make sure your ending makes an impact. In this lesson, we're diving into the Final Plan, including how to set up your Story Climax, how to show off your secondary characters, and how to use it to build excitement for your unforgettable ending. (Writing the Final...
Write Impactful Stories | Understanding the Inner Gateway
มุมมอง 51ปีที่แล้ว
Are you ready to get to the HEART of your story? Want to know the secret to writing impactful and resonant stories that will change your audiences lives? Then it's time to master the Inner Gateway. And in this lesson, we're diving into the moment that connects your A Story and B Story, relates to character arcs, shows your main character's change, and can turn even the most bland story into an ...
How To Make Your Second Act POWERFUL - A Quick Guide to the Rock Bottom
มุมมอง 82ปีที่แล้ว
There's a moment in your second act when everything falls apart - but the only way to make it powerful is to use a phase we call the Rock Bottom. It's all about showing just how much everything sucks for the protag. And in this lesson, we're covering what the Rock Bottom is, a secret character that will help change everything, and answering questions about your story's low point, writing the ro...
How To Write the WORST Scene of Your Story.
มุมมอง 119ปีที่แล้ว
Believe it or not, most great stories are awful. Well, awful in exactly the right place. Introducing the Moment of Peril, the worst part of your story (for your protag, at least). In this lesson, we'll be diving into what makes a great Moment of Peril, how to include the concept of death in this horrible moment, and how the end of your story will be boosted when you nail this scene. (Writing th...
Make Your Story AWFUL - Understanding the Power of the Downhill Fall
มุมมอง 172ปีที่แล้ว
What if we told you that in order to make your story GOOD, you needed to start by making it AWFUL. That is, you need to make things AWFUL for your protag! And there is one perfect place to heat things up and toss your hero straight into the fire - The Downhill Fall. In this lesson, we're covering questions like "What is the Downhill Fall" "How to fix Act 2" "How to add conflict to my story" and...
This Scene NEEDS to be in the Middle of Your Story - Writing the Midpoint
มุมมอง 388ปีที่แล้ว
You've probably heard the term Midpoint before, but it's more than just the middle of your story. In fact, nailing your Midpoint can fix your second act, shift your story in a whole new direction, and hook your audience back in by raising the stakes. And in this lesson, we'll dive into writing the Midpoint and explore questions like "how to write the midpoint" and "what is the midpoint" with id...
Fix Your Second Act! What is the Uphill Climb in Writing and How to Use It
มุมมอง 82ปีที่แล้ว
Do you feel like your second act is sagging? Don't know how to fill up all that space with exciting events that are integral to your story? Have no fear! It's time to use the Uphill Climb. In this lesson, we're diving into the Uphill Climb to discover what it is, how you can use it to boost your second act, and how this phase can point toward your Midpoint to guide your audience in the right di...
Writing a great Antagonist | How to use the Moment of Danger in your story
มุมมอง 64ปีที่แล้ว
If you've wondered exactly where and how to introduce your antagonist, there is one surefire way to start them off with a bang - by using the Moment of Danger. In this lesson, we're covering what the Moment of Danger is, how to use it to make your antagonist memorable, and answering questions like "how to introduce the antagonist" "how to make my antagonist stronger" and "antagonist in story st...
Start Act 2 With a BANG - How to NAIL the Testing Phase in Your Story
มุมมอง 72ปีที่แล้ว
Start Act 2 With a BANG - How to NAIL the Testing Phase in Your Story
What is the Outer Gateway in Story Structure? How to Split Act 1 and Act 2
มุมมอง 299ปีที่แล้ว
What is the Outer Gateway in Story Structure? How to Split Act 1 and Act 2
What is the HESITATION Phase in Story Structure? A Quick Guide for Writers
มุมมอง 160ปีที่แล้ว
What is the HESITATION Phase in Story Structure? A Quick Guide for Writers
Is Your Story Missing its HOOK? How to Write the Inciting Incident/Call To Adventure/Catalyst
มุมมอง 195ปีที่แล้ว
Is Your Story Missing its HOOK? How to Write the Inciting Incident/Call To Adventure/Catalyst
What is the SETUP in Story Structure? How to start your story with a bang!
มุมมอง 202ปีที่แล้ว
What is the SETUP in Story Structure? How to start your story with a bang!
The Best Story Structure Model in 2023? A Quick Guide to Universal Story Language
มุมมอง 530ปีที่แล้ว
The Best Story Structure Model in 2023? A Quick Guide to Universal Story Language
What Story Structure Should I Use? Save the Cat and Dan Harmon's Story Circle Explained
มุมมอง 407ปีที่แล้ว
What Story Structure Should I Use? Save the Cat and Dan Harmon's Story Circle Explained
"Should I use The Hero's Journey?" How to know if your story needs it [Story Structure Foundations]
มุมมอง 188ปีที่แล้ว
"Should I use The Hero's Journey?" How to know if your story needs it [Story Structure Foundations]
What is 3 Act Structure? Learn How to Use This Storytelling Technique! [Story Structure Foundations]
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What is 3 Act Structure? Learn How to Use This Storytelling Technique! [Story Structure Foundations]
Discover the Secrets to Mastering Story Structure! [Story Structure Foundations]
มุมมอง 89ปีที่แล้ว
Discover the Secrets to Mastering Story Structure! [Story Structure Foundations]
A QUICK GUIDE to Character Arcs [Power-Up Your Plot]
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A QUICK GUIDE to Character Arcs [Power-Up Your Plot]
Your Story's Missing Piece [Power-Up Your Plot]
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Your Story's Missing Piece [Power-Up Your Plot]
The EASY Trick Behind the Best Plots [Power-Up Your Plot]
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The EASY Trick Behind the Best Plots [Power-Up Your Plot]
Does Your Story Have These Two Parts? It Needs To. [Power-Up Your Plot]
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Does Your Story Have These Two Parts? It Needs To. [Power-Up Your Plot]
DOUBLE the Power of Your Story EASILY [Power-Up Your Plot]
มุมมอง 50ปีที่แล้ว
DOUBLE the Power of Your Story EASILY [Power-Up Your Plot]
How have I lived for 60 years and have never been to a tree lighting ceremony? What am I even doing?
This is some of the best writing advice ive got. And I've watched hundreds of videos. So practical and digestible. Subscribed!
The difference between your examples and Scream is they subverted the main girl trope expectation and did a bait and switch with Sidney.
MAC > ET
The 'Little Hook' and the Big Hook...THANKS! That was very helpful. And your explanation of the Obligatory Moment!
Paul’s discomfort during the song is definitely what seals the deal in my opinion. It adds a lot of comedy yes, but it also makes people sympathize with the very real experience of not knowing what you want in life. Ironic considering how Mr. Davidson implies that this lack of direction makes him unsympathetic.
This is such a brilliant insight. Thank you!
but also, the song were the citisens sing fuck you is also an i want song! and a more earlier one, no
i am amazed by how good this editing is. I love how the shapes in the background react to the music.
It’s not really a “musical” in the traditional sense. It’s more like a hybrid between play and musical because normal people don’t burst into song in real life. But the aliens (who are actually Pokotho, the Singular Voice - long story) makes them into one Hivemind that can make them do perfectly choreographed song & dance numbers with ease. Hence why “La Dee Da Day” is a perfect opening number for what is to occur, it juxtaposes to the first scene the other day where everything was normal, and after the meteor where people are now getting infected. It’s similar to setting up the mood to a zombie apocalypse where you can see something is wrong but shit hasn’t hit the fan yet.
Saying that Paul "refuses to sing" doesn't feel right to me. The singing in TGWDLM is diegetic, unlike in most other musicals where it's not really part of the story. Paul doesn't sing until the end because he's a normal person and not infected or a theater kid (and even at the end it's not clear what happened and the actor himself said that he played it both ways in different performances) That difference is the reason Paul can't have an "I want" song, so if anything, the anti-I want song he gets sung at him is a way to not break that rule
'The guy who didn't like musicals' video is literally under this video-
I’ve forgotten the meaning of the word want now lol
here is another layer to it, by the nature of "what do you want paul?" the highlight how highly unnatural and often even slightly inapropriet and unwanted an I want songs can be if not well implemented . . . Like who would just sing and share aloud what they want and sometimes it even is for the best if it where left unshared
Dude your production is amazing! How do you not have more subs?
Pokotho: 🎵What do you want Paul?🎵 Paul: AHHHHHHH
The Aliens are the protagonists and the first song is their 'I want' song.
Not really :)
Love to see some appreciation for Starkid's subversive genius laid out so nicely, and all the analysis in the comments!
Well they aren't actually Aliens they're a hive mind caused by an Eldritch God called Pokotho that wants to hear only his voice on Earth which motivates his reasons for taking control of the town of Hatchetfield
My favorite part of this musical is how Paul isn’t doomed until he admits what he wants (in the scene with general macnemara). I don’t really know how to put it into words, but that’s when his fate is sealed, I think.
I dont care I like mac and me better then ugly ET
I love that Starkid’s best singer is the guy who plays Paul.
I think that Happy Ending is the I want song, it takes the three main characters and they all say what they want. Jafar wants his wife back, the princess wants true love, and Aladdin wants riches and power
I think it's also no coincidence that Paul's boss is the one who says he wants him to want to want. On one level, it's the alien hivemind trying to find an anchor point so it can body-snatch Paul, but on another level it's an employer trying to get his employee to engage emotionally with his work. Without the song, the interaction Paul has with his boss is something that happens often in real life; A manager, trying to "motivate" their employee (i.e. make them more productive,) awkwardly asks them about their ambitions. The goal is not to actually help the employee to achieve those ambitions, but to find a way to link them with their job, thus making them more "motivated." Paul's refusal to entertain this charade is mirrored with Paul's love interest, Emma, who is also dealing with a workplace that wants her to sing (even before they're taken over by alien goo.) She, like Paul, sees her work as just a paycheck, while her employer is trying to get her to increase her personal commitment to the job for no additional pay. As she puts it "it's like having another shitty job on top of my already shitty job." I would also point out that the parasite doesn't seem to be changing the town all that much. Yes, it makes people sing and dance, but it doesn't change their situation. The local homeless man is still homeless, he's just singing and dancing about it. What is actually spreading through the town is contentment by way of narrativization; a way of seeing the world as a story and keeping a positive attitude, despite nothing ever actually changing or getting better.
"what do you want, paul?~" 🎶🎵🎶
There was no link down below
I'm not sure about Paul. A man that's so vague just... Can't be trusted.
For a minute I thought the 2nd I want song was gonna be take off your clothes
I love this analysis. Another thing I want to add: I think a big reason he doesn’t have an I want song is because this is one of the rare musicals where all the songs are diegetic. No one sings until they are taken over by the alien. So it would lessen the impact of ‘let it out’ where Paul is physically fighting the urge to sing if he’s already done so earlier in the musical. That’s probably my favorite thing about this musical. Because of the context, all the musical numbers have an unsettling/creepy edge to them (I personally find the idea of being possessed/taken over to be horrifying)
Immediately subscribed. I adore Starkid & they build so much more into their works than we realize. Kudos!
I had no idea that was an actual rule for musicals! I just thought about it on a more basic storytelling level, which also works. But as has been probably pointed out below, that choice is also strongly motivated by the plot. Both Paul and Emma are basically directionless and desire-less. For different reasons, they want nothing from life and that's why the aliens can't make them obey them. All the characters display strong wants, dreams and fears - only Paul and Emma are exempt. But by the end, Paul falls hard for Emma and starts to want her... And that's when he succumbs to the aliens as well. All of this is just brilliant. I do not understand how Starkids have still not been offered some kind of a deal with a regular theater.
"A Thousand and One Nights" *isnt* the I want song. "If I Believed" is. But your thesis still stands
Wow, I really needed this class. The other structures I do know can be often lobsided and moment based (or haphazardly mixing the two). Or when I try to analyze a show, the parts often need to be abstracted and don't fit very well. But separating moments from phases makes it so much cleaner and easier to visualize. Plus the triad symmetry between the gates was tickling the back of my head the entire time, but you hit it on the dome! I wish this system was a book, but that's just me.
What he wants is only shown in the song 'Let It Out'. Right before he's taken by the Hive Mind he finally has a moment of singing about his wishes. It's not so clear, but in the line "I've never been happy" he makes it a bit obvious what he WANTS to be happy. This is furthered in the line "What will I let in if I let it out?" where what you said about the divide between him and the aliens by him not singing his wants ("let it out") is made clear, and that Paul is aware of how following a musical structure of expressing his wants is likely to push him closer to his 'Apotheosis'.
I hope you get more views :)
I happened to click this video on its two year anniversary, damn
Loved this!!!
Amazing content bro! I'm surprised by the low engagement. Keep putting out these bangers and you'll be big in no time!
Paul does have a want in the musical: "Now you know what it is to want" *"I wanna go home!"*
But also, the lack of him singing an “I want” song, and stubbornly refusing “what do you want, Paul?” Is essentially showing what he wants anyway. He wants to not be in a musical, which is the central plot, that’s why he’s our hero, he wants to stop it all.
Yeah, one of his lines in “What do you want, Paul?” Is literally “I wanna go home!”, like his “want” is just to get out of there and not be in a musical
*promo sm* 🤣
Very underrated channel, I subbed
This video is very well done and fascinating and I love reading the comments and furthering the theory. However, I think there actually IS an I want song, but its a very twisted [pun not intended] one. Towards the end when Paul is being faced with the meteor and his proximity to it causes him to begin singing. He is fighting it. I’ve never been happy Wouldn’t that be nice? Is this the secret? Singing and dancing through life? Is my integrity worth anything at all? But happiness can’t come before its fall His integrity and pride is keeping him from wanting happiness maybe? Or perhaps he is too prideful to dig deeper and realize that his life is boring? A complete opposite look at this is to say that Paul has always been content, as when he is talking to Emma about how crappy the town is, he claims he likes Hatchetfield and never wanted to live anywhere else. Perhaps why he is fighting so hard against the aliens to keep it normal. Just some random food for thought of course. None of this is confirmed by Nick or Jeff.
I would argue that Dream a Little Harder is an I want song for Jarfar. I don't think he says the words I want but it still establishes his desire to be liked by the public
Yes, it’s fine to have desires (and sing about them.) It’s *wishes* that Ja’far hates, as he’s a rationalist who feels like you can’t achieve any goals without actively working towards them, assuming they’re even possible.
Yeah, Dream A Little Harder would be Jafar's establishing "I want" song, then "A Thousand And One Nights" reflects his newfound desires. "Everything and More" (especially the reprise), while it exists mainly to parody the "I want" song, isn't Jafar's song, but it shows the Princess's desires contrasted to Jafar's AND Aladdin's. Honestly, this show might have 4 or 5 "I want" songs and it's fantastically messy.
tbf I think half the time jafar sings its an I want song.
I would argue that I steal everything is an I. Want song
no, its an i have song