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Please do part 2

I'm already frustrated. Why do people do that? They send someone back in time. Or they send them to another universe, then nerf. The hail out of him making relieve the same f****** cannon? Look a lot cannon, especially the anchor points, though. Things you don't need to change, but if you're going to write a fan fiction, change it not more than just the guy knowing the stuff. We don't. Want to see a mostly the same repeat of the same story? We want to see it changed. We don't need a second point of view a extra cameraman in the room, not changing anything. We've already watched the story. It frustrates the hell out of me when I have a character that actually knows the plot. Then doesn't change anything major because he doesn't want to lose. His information to me that's like why even bother, if you've got the knowledge but don't do a d*** thing. You're just as guilty for some of the s*** that happens. As the ones who committed the acts in the beginning so I hope this author actually does change more of the plot the further we go along.

part 2 pls

They're the offspring of the clans but no 16-year-old they're not children anymore. I was already in the National Guard when I was 16. You can go and die for your country at 16. While the hell everybody's got this artificially inflated age of adulthood at 20 or whatever. No, you should be already out of your mama's basement at that age. If your parents want to pay for you to go to college and stuff. Fine, but stop calling full grown people children. It's ridiculous at seventeen, you can be tried as an adult. You're no longer a minor under the law. So why the hell does everybody keep on pushing the age further and further?

I'm less than 5 minutes into this. And it's already done something that irritates the hell out of me. Don't age them up. It does not enhance the story ever and it takes away from the one of the original pillars of the Naruto story. They are child soldiers and the author wanted to draw attention to this problem. If you take away the fact that their children you take away the emphasis of the original story. I don't know why people feel they need to do this. It's supposed to be a harsh world of war. People do stuff in war that they wouldn't do normally. They thus they have child soldiers. So why does all these authors feel they need to make a motor I'm sorry that was the whole point. It's just frustrating to me that so many people want to cater to this. We can't hurt children and all this when it happens every day. And nobody wants to look at it. The author of the original Naruto's story did interview. He wanted to draw attention. He wanted people to look at the problem that there are child soldiers in this world to. Day and everybody's like well, it's just Manga. I'm sorry, Naruto has a lot of satire and parody in it meant to draw attention to problems. In the world today. Jane Rodman Berry did the same with Star Trek. But a lot of people just say oh, it's just can't be sapphire. You need to look at the stories and if people just sort of like well, it's just make-believe they are not getting the whole point Naruto. And stories like it point out to allow problems in the modern world. But people drether buried their heads in the sand that's all I'm saying I'm not asking author to change this. The way he rides, I'm just asking all the authors to think about the parts of the story they actually change. I know a lot of people write these for fun. But when thmistakes in changing the original narrative, I don't mind changing can and don't get me wrong, but when you strip out the actual lessons that are written into the original story for no reason, then it bothers me. Yeah, listen to a little bit further. And being graduating at 16 is a joke. This story interests me a lot. Naruto and a lot healthing, even though the titles wrong. But the aging him up so much just makes the original Naruto story a joke seriously. I don't get why people keep doing this. Or no, i'llways thought them. Graduating at 12 was a good idea. Because they're just getting into their adventuring age. They're hitting pubestupidity, they're red-blooded. They're hot-tempered. It made sense this doesn't. Why would they wait around that long? And to have to adjust the entire time scale to match their ages is ridiculous. It was jumping through hopes for no reason. It doesn't enhance the story. And I will harp on this because it's one of my pet peeves. Cause it never does anything for the actual story. The person's trying to write it makes unnecessary changes. It makes the story unnecessary convoluted. Again. I don't mind changing cannon except when you age them up for no reason. And a story that's supposed to be about child. Soldiers, which is what the ninja kids are. You're trying to watch over it by aging them up just kind of makes me cringe every time I see it done.

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Id love a part 2, but the vid covers all that has been written

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This is one of the best stories I've ever heard. I have heard over a hundred stories and this was one that you might believe is cannon. You need to continue the story.

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Man Naruto is such a SIMP for sakura

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I hate when hinata change like that

4:00 The first thing to look for in a bad Naruto fanfiction is the inevitable "Naruto needs more jutsu to be a good ninja" while ignoring the fact that most of the ninja in the series generally rely on a small number to begin with. You know I used to play a spellcaster all the time when I was playing table top D&D and the first thing I came to realize was that to be successful I needed to keep my spell list simple and tied to proven strategies; at least in combat zones. Minato himself even built his entire combat style off moving fast and using a small number of low or no hand sign jutsu.

This is the end the writer abandoned the what if in 2013

I'm subscribing in hopes that you make a second part to this.

Please make a part 2❤

Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development I also like how a deviates from the actual story I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part two and keep up the good work

Pls make a part 2

The title of the story is misleading the author literally says in the link you posted that it's not naru/hina

Part 2 asap please this story is really really good

This is great, part 2

Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line and the character development I do like how you deviate the story however I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part two to this one hey keep up the good work

Part 2?

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What if fem Naruto was shinobu and sasuke as giyuu pls

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Hay man you think make a part 2 this is a pretty good story as well..

Make a part 2